话题1 个人情况（Personal information）

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一、命题预测

命题人可能要求考生写应聘某个职位的申请信、竞选某个职位的演讲稿以及征友帖等，这些都需介绍个人情况。

二、常用短语

1. be born in ... on May 8， 1985 1985年5月8日出生于……

2. at the age of 20 / aged 20 在二十岁的时候

3. graduate from 毕业于

4. be good at spoken English 擅长英语口语

5. be fond of swimming 喜欢游泳

6. be determined to be a teacher 决定做一位教师

7. have patience and confidence 具有耐心和信心

8. look forward to working there 希望能在那里工作

9. have a good habit of study 有良好的学习习惯

10. in ones spare time 在某人的业余时间

11. meet your requirement 符合你们的要求

12. an open-minded and optimistic girl 一个开朗乐观的女孩

13. apply for the position 申请这个职位

14. be popular with 受到……的欢迎

15. have all the qualifications for the job 有做这项工作的一切合格证书

三、套用句式

1. I ， the son of a poor family ， was born in Guangdong on February 12， 1809. 我，一个贫苦家庭的儿子1809年2月出生于广东。（同位语）

2. In my life， I got many honours， one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award. 我一生中获得很多荣誉，其中包括获得“2005感动中国年度人物”的称号。（定语从句）

3. Not only do I show interest in science， but also I have a gift for music. 我不但对科学极有兴趣，而且对音乐也有天赋。（倒装句式）

4. I sincerely hope you can accept my application. 我真诚地希望你能接受我的申请。

5. Im a beautiful woman， with long hair and big eyes. 我是一位长着一双大眼睛，留着长发的漂亮女士。

四、习作修改（做短文改错，背经典范文）

I am physics teacher. I am 1.75 meters in the height and I was born in November 4，1952. So I am a middle-aged man. I graduated from the Qinghua University in 1978. Before graduation， I become a middle school teacher. I have been taught physics for more than 20 years.

I am very successfully as a teacher. I have been given a lot of honor. I not only teach physics well but also speak English and Russian very good. In my spare time， I like reading books， collect stamps and listening to music. Also， Im kind-hearted.

五、课堂练习

假如你是李明，明天班会课你班将进行班干部竞选，你将竞选班长，请写一份竞选稿。

1. 介绍本人基本情况及参选的理由。

2. 获选后的计划。

3. 希望投票支持。

注意：1. 字数100左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头语已为你写好。

Hello， everyone. ...

[写作指导]

第一步，认真审题。

1. 审文体：演讲稿，应用文。

2. 审时态：以一般时态为主。

3. 审人称：以第一人称为主。

第二步，根据需要，增加细节。

本题是为竞选班长而写的一篇文章，考生可根据自己的经验与要求来寻找和挖掘相关信息。1.基本信息：姓名、性别等。2.品性：性格、交际能力等。3.获选后的计划：为同学们做表率、为同学服务、开展各种活动等。

第三步，拓点成句，表达信息。

1. 我叫李明。是一个乐观外向的男孩。

My name is Li Ming. Im an open-minded and optimistic boy.

2. 我想竞选我们班的班长。

Id like to be monitor of our class.

3. 我不仅仅善于与人交流， 而且因为乐于助人，与同学相处融洽。

Im not only expert at communicating with others but also get along well with others，for I am always ready to help others.

4. 我各门功课优秀。是一个体育爱好者。

Im a sports lovers and I do well in all subjects.

5. 如果我获选，我会表现好自己，做同学们的表率。

If I win the election， I promise I will behavior myself and set a good example to you.

6. 我会不遗余力的为同学们服务。

Ill spare no effort to serve classmates.

7. 我会组织一些课外活动来丰富校园生活。

I will organize some after-class activities to enrich our school life.

第四步，连句成文。

六、课外作业

假定你是李华，从互联网上得知有一位名叫Tom的老板想为他11岁的儿子请一名家教。请写一封电子邮件申请这个职位。

1. 介绍自己的基本情况。

2. 希望知道的有关信息。

注意：1. 字数100左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头语已为你写好。

Dear Tom，

Sincerely yours，

Lihua

参考答案与范文

四、习作修改

1. physics teacher前加a因physics teacher为可数名词单数。

2. in→on 此处表示在某一天。

3. 去掉Qinghua University前的the 为习惯表达。

4. Before→after 根据上下文，此处意为在毕业以后而不是以前。

5. become改为became 表示过去行为用过去时。

6. taught→teaching 此处为完成进行时，时态结构的需要。

7. successfully 改为successful 形容词作表语。

8. honor→ honors 因honor为可数名词后加s。

9. good →well 此处修饰谓语动词speak作状语，应用副词well。

10. collect→collecting 此处作谓语动词like的并列宾语。

五、课堂练习

Hello， everyone， my name is Li Ming. Im an open-minded and optimistic boy. Id like to be monitor of our class.

As you all know， not only am I expert at communicating with others but also I get along well with others，for I am always ready to help others. Besides， Im a sports lovers and I do well in all subjects.

If I win the election， I promise I will behavior myself and set a good example to you. Ill spare no effort to serve classmates as well as organize some after-class activities to enrich our school life.

I would appreciate it if you choose me to be your monitor.

六、课外作业

Dear Tom.

My name is Li Hua and Id like to apply for the position. First Id like to introduce myself to you. Now I am studying in Zhongshan University which is one of the famous key universities in China. Im good at English and quite able to help your son with his English. Besides， Im patient， careful and outgoing. So Im convinced that your son will make great progress with my effective guidance and timely help.

Eventually， Id like to learn more about the job. How often should I give your son lessons？ How long can each lesson last？ How much can you offer for each hour？

Im looking forward to your early reply.

Sincerely yours，

Li Hua

（作者单位：广东深圳市松岗中学）

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