话题20 科普知识与现代技术(Popular science and modern technology)

2015-05-30 19:54:38许炳杰
广东教育·高中 2015年12期
关键词:指代课外作业范文

许炳杰

一、命题预测

本话题涉及的内容很多,如医药的进步、技术的革新、计算机技术、太空旅游和探索、未来世界、机器人、航天知识、最新科研发明、科学与生活、科技与人文、网络、传媒等。其中,网络话题在各模拟考试中出现的频率较高。网络在人们的生活、学习、工作中的作用越来越大,网上购物、网上交友、网络游戏、网络学习、电子贺卡、网络媒体已经实实在在地走进了我们的生活,也理所当然的成为了话题作文的“常客”。关于命题,以下几个具体话题值得关注:

1. 命题人可能要求考生写学校举行的科技节的活动新闻,涉及活动的具体内容,参加方式,参加时间已及活动的意义等。

2. 介绍最近某项发明或介绍某一新的产品,分析某些新科技的影响及利弊,并发表自己的看法。

3. 对中国本土科学家获得诺贝尔奖发表看法,并介绍获奖者的相关情况。

二、常用短语

1. click on sth用鼠标点击

2. surf the Internet上网浏览信息

3. launch a satellite发射人造卫星

4. carry out a research进行一项研究

5. make a great difference有很大影响

6. have access to/be accessible to能使用

7. enable sb to do sth.使某人能做某事

8. benefit from得益于;从……受益

9. realize ones dream实现某人的梦想

10. learn more conveniently 更方便地学习

11. play an important role in在某方面起重要的作用

12. be famous at home and abroad 在国内外享誉盛名

13. catch/attract/draw sbs attention吸引某人的注意

14. a variety of high-tech products各种各样高科技产品

15. advanced science and technology 先进的科学技术

16. improve the quality of human life提高人类的生活质量

17. download information from the Internet从网络下载信息

三、套用句式

1. With the development of information technology,it is easy to find English movies.随着信息技术的发展,人们很容易找到英文电影。

2. When the iPad was connected to the Internet,students can interact with teachers and classmates about what they learn more conveniently. 当iPad连接了网络,学生可以与自己的老师和同学更方便的交流学习心得。

3. In a way,the popularity of the Internet and 4G makes a great difference to our life. 从某种程度上,互联网以及4G网络的普及对我们的生活产生巨大的影响。

4. What is most amazing is that you can order it to do things like sending messages with your voice. 最令人称奇的是,你可以利用声音命令它发出信息。

5. Reading more on science can enrich our knowledge and broaden our horizon. 阅读更多科学方面的书籍能丰富我们的知识以及扩宽我们的视野。

四、习作修改(做短文改错,背经典范文)

Dear editor,

Im a senior high school student in Nanchang,named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and think its a fashion to use it. Use an iPad,we can listen to music,download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparent,it is helpful to our study,especially to our English listening.

Some students,however,bring their iPads to classrooms and listen music with earphones,that makes the teacher and other students greatly annoying. Whats worse,some of them even waste precious times in class playing video games.

In my opinion,as students,we should made good use of iPads. The classroom is a place for students to study from,and therefore,concentration is badly needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore,the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads at a proper way.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

五、课堂练习

假如你是李华,贵校在学生中征集是否赞成开设iPad课堂(iPad classrooms)的意见。你支持开设iPad课堂;请给校长写一封电子邮件,要点如下:

1. 资源丰富。

2. 促进交流。

3. 利于环保。

4. 其他理由。

注意:1. 词数100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3. 开头语已为你写好。

Dear Headmaster,

We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classrooms.

...

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

[写作指导]

1. 审题。(1)体裁:写一封建议的电子邮件;(2)题材:iPad classrooms的优势;(3)时态:以一般现在时为主;(4)人称:以第一人称和第二人称为主。

2. 分段:开头段:问候 / 写信背景(表明支持开设iPad classrooms的态度) / 写信目的。

中间段:具体要点具体展开(注意:不能写iPad classrooms的缺点,因为你的立场是支持开设iPad classrooms的)。

结尾段:补充说明 / 表达期望(希望自己的建议被采纳)。

3. 内容。围绕1. 资源丰富(materials);2. 促进交流(interact with teachers and classmates);3. 利于环保(For the sake of environmental protection);三个要点展开,可适当添加多一两个开设iPad classrooms的优势,但不宜提劣势。

六、课外作业

假设你是李华,你的笔友Li Lei写信询问你关于通过看英文电影来提高英语的看法,请你按照要求给Li Lei回一封电子邮件:要点如下

1. 通过看英文电影来提高英语的现象很普遍。

2. 这种方法的优缺点。

3. 你的看法。

注意:1. 词数100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

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参考答案与范文

四、习作修改

作者介绍了使用iPad的优缺点,并发表了自己的看法。

1. it→them 指代不一致,此处指代前面提到的iPads,应为复数形式。

2. Use→Using 考查非谓语动词,因其逻辑主语we与use为主动关系,用现在分词形式。

3. Apparent→Apparently用副词修饰后面的句子。

4. 在listen 与music中间加to 因listen为不及物动词,接宾语时要与to连接。

5. that→which 引导非限制性定语从句不能用that,改为which。

6. annoying→annoyed 因annoyed作宾语the teacher and other students的补足语。

7. times→time 此处指时间,为不可数名词,没有复数形式。

8. made→ make 情态动词后加动词原形。

9. 删除study from的from 此处为学习,没有“从”的含义。

10. at→in 因in a ...way意为:用……方法。

五、课堂练习

Dear Headmaster,

We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classrooms. I am in favor of this plan for the following reasons. To begin with,everyone learns differently. Students can customize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learning style,and thus tailor it to different needs. Moreover,When the iPad was connected to the Internet,students can interact with teachers and classmates about what they learn more conveniently. For the sake of environmental protection,opening iPad classrooms is a good way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper. Most importantly,I believe students will develop their interests in the subjects by enjoying a new way of learning.

I hope you would take my ideas into consideration and we look forward to attending an iPad class.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

六、 课外作业

Dear Li Lei,

With the development of information technology,it is easy to find English movies. Many students use them as a way of learning English. By watching English movies,we can learn more about the world and life as movies present much richer contents than textbooks. In addition,we can hear English in real contest.

However,there are disadvantages. Some watch English movies with the Chinese subtitles,and dont pay attention to the English language or culture,making it complete entertainment rather than English learning.

In my opinion,watching English movies can be a fun and useful way of learning English,but only when it is done with careful planning and strict requirements.

I hope you will make progress in your English learning!

(作者单位:广东汕尾市陆丰市东海龙潭中学)

责任编辑 蒋小青

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