英语原创文章点滴体会

摘要：英语高考是考查学生英语的实际使用能力，语篇必须贴近社会、贴近学生、贴近生活，时代性强，话题涵盖人与自然，人与社会，人与自我的和谐。读而不死，学而不罔需要老师们精心组织，用心创作，授之以渔。教改呼唤教师创新，教师应该创作更多学生喜闻乐见的文章，而创新的源头就是生活。

关键词：创新；生活；灵感；题型设置；积累

多数高三老师喜欢改编一些学生喜闻乐见的英语文章，但尝试去创新的却为数不多。因为每当尝试创新时，往往有一种“昨夜西风凋碧树，独上高楼，望尽天涯路。”的无助感。其实，“众里寻他千百度，蓦然回首，那人却在灯火阑珊处”。因为创新就在你身边：生活处处皆英语。下面与大家分享2018年我创作的几篇英语文章。

例子1：高三年新学期第一次班会课，我以“梦想与努力”为题，给学生们上了一节生动形象的主题班会课。课后反思的时候，我突发奇想：如果把这一节班会课的内容写成一篇英语文章，不就是一篇原创文章吗？于是，我开始整理加工，按照高考的要求，精心设置，编写出下面这篇文章。

You will be great as long as you make up a dream.A dream is to you what a lighthouse is to a boat.Without a dream， you may be a boat sailing in the sea without a certain direction. After setting up your goal， you are supposed， I think， to try your best to achieve it. Take Chinese Volleyball Women Team for example. In order to make their Olympic champion dream come true， they have overcome difficulties on the way one after another and become more and more confident. Because of the dream， they always cheer themselves up and keep on moving forward no matter how many ups and downs. No pain， no gain. Only after all your hard work pays off can you see the lucky Goddess smiling at you. Come on， baby. Where there is a dream， there is a hope.

这篇文章可以一题三用：它既可以设置成“短文改错”题，也可以改编成“语法知识填空”题，还可以用于“读后感”的题型中。下面，我们一起来分享这篇文章的改编。

A. 读后感。根据下面的阅读材料，以“Dream”为题写一篇读后感。

Chinese Women Volleyball Field Force

Zhu Ting propelled China to a 31（1825，2517，2523，2523） victory over Serbia to claim the gold medal of the womens volleyball tournament at Rio 2016 Olympic Games on Saturday. China climbed to the top of the podium for the third time in the history of volleyball at the Olympic Games and first since Athens 2004. They also won the gold medal in Los Angels 1984， a silver medal in Atlanta 1996 and bronze medals in Seoul 1988 and also at home in Beijing 2008. Seeing Hui Ruoqi， the leader of the team， gained the last match point， Lang Ping raised both arms in the air and Zhu Ting sprinted over to embrace her. Many more hugs followed. When asked how they made it， Lang Ping said excitedly， it was the spirit of Chinese women volleyball that cheered them up， the dream to be the top was their lifetime goal. The Chinese exhibited the same fire and fight a year ago while winning the World Cup in Japan， then got to Rio earlier this month and worked through some initial rough， inconsistent Olympic moments.上面的文章來自中国日报英文版，报道了中国女排2016奥运会夺冠的故事。写读后感是今后英语高考的一种趋势，也是检测学生综合能力的一种方式。上面的文章刚好可以吻合它的要求。

B. 短文改错

You will be great as long as you make up a dream. A dream is to you like a lighthouse is to a boat. Without a dream， you may be a boat sail in the sea without a certainly direction. After set up your goal， you are supposed， I think so， to try your best to achieve it. Take Chinese Women Volleyball Team for example. In order to realize their Olympic champion dream， they have overcome difficulty on the way one after another and become more and more confident. Because of the dream， they always cheer oneself up and keep on moving forward no matter how many ups and down.

No pain， no gain. Only after all your hard work pays can you see the lucky Goddess smiling at you. Come on， baby. If there is a dream， there is a hope.

解题指导：短文改错要做好，常见类型应记牢。名词多考数与格，冠词之前错多少。动词时态和语态，非谓语结构莫忘了。形副代数都一样，皆是故意来混淆。介词多半考搭配，误用错漏想周到。句法大多考一致，从句关系词来考。词法句法均未错，行文逻辑去寻找。118来常贯比，回读细查敲定稿。

分析：

1. like改为what，考查句型：A is to B what C is to D

2. sail改为sailing，考查现在分词做定语的用法

3. certainly改为certain，形容词副词故意混淆，形容词修饰名词

4. set改为setting，介词+动名词

5. 去掉so，I think是插入语

6. difficulty改为difficulties，名词复数

7. oneself改为themselves，保持人称一致

8. down改为downs，ups and downs 形式保持一致

9. 在pay后加off，固定词组“得到回报”

10. if改为where，固定句型

C. 语法知识填空

You will be great as long as you make up a dream. A dream is to you 1 a lighthouse is to a boat. Without a dream， you may be a boat 2（sail） in the sea without a certain direction.

After 3（set） up your goal， you are supposed， I think， to try your best 4（achieve）it. Take Chinese Women Volleyball Team 5 example. In order to realize their Olympic champion dream， they have overcome 6（difficulty ） on the way one after another and become more and more 7（confidence）. Because of the dream， they always cheer 8（oneself） up and keep on moving forward no matter how many ups and downs.

No pain， no gain. 9 after all your hard work pays off can you see the lucky goddess smiling at you. Come on， baby. 10 there is a dream， there is a hope.

解题指导：

语法填空像棵树，空格提示分两股。主干动词连接词，树杈冠介代形副。词根派生发新株，词能搞定句不露。万变不离其宗谱，守住语法享乐土。

Keys：

1. what（考查句型）

2. sailing（考查現在分词做定语）

3. setting（考查动名词做宾语）

4. to achieve（考查动词不定式）

5. for（固定词组）

6. difficulties（考查名词单复数）

7. confident（考查词性转化）

8. themselves（考查人称代词一致）

9. Only（考查倒装句）

10. Where（固定句型）

例子2：

作为福建仙游人，木兰溪这几年的变化有目共睹。十八大以来，党中央对生态更加重视，绿水青山就是金山银山的理念深入人心。尤其是十九大后，振兴农村成为热门话题。我常常在木兰溪旁散步，看着溪水一天天变清，我感触颇多。2018年仙游木兰溪被评为福建省最美家乡河。为此，我创编了以下一道书面表达题，请大家指导。

假设你是李华，请你根据图中内容和写作要点给英国的朋友Peter写一封信，告訴他“你家乡的小河”这几年的变化，并邀请他有空来参观。

要点：1. 五年前家乡的小河；2. 现在家乡的小河；3. 发出邀请。

注意：1. 字数120左右；2. 可适当增加细节以使行文流畅；3. 可能需要的单词：the River Chief System 河长制；4. 部分开头已给，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter，

How is everything going？ Today Id like to share a story about the river in my hometown.

As you can see，the river in my hometown was badly polluted five years ago. Rubbish was thrown here and there. As a result， you could not see a single fish， and the water smelt terrible.

Luckily， the villagers have been aware of the idea of lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable assets since measures， such as the River Chief System， was taken. Blue sky， white clouds， green trees， swimming fishes as well as singing birds consist of an amazing picture！ Whats more， the river has become a fascinating place， where an increasing number of people come for games， sports and so on， benefiting the villagers a lot. Now the villagers are having a happier and healthier life.

Welcome to my hometown！ I promise youll have an unforgettable experience.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

以上是18年创作的文章，它们的灵感全部来自生活，如果我们有心研究的话，也会成为学生喜闻乐见的英语原创文章。当然无论是什么文章，我们都要按照高考考纲的要求，合理设置题型，做到贴近社会，贴近生活，贴近时代，符合学生的认知水平；同时，我们又要考虑到选拔人才所需要的难易度。

虽然，创新很难，但我们必须努力去尝试，敢于创新，善于创新。时代呼唤创新，教学更要创新。创新其实离我们并不远。“问渠那得清如许，为有源头活水来。”

创新的源头就是生活，创新就在你身边。

作者简介：

张庆副，福建省莆田市，福建省仙游私立一中。