话题6 兴趣与爱好(Interests and hobbies)

2015-05-30 17:46:19余爱香
广东教育·高中 2015年12期
关键词:谋篇闲暇课外作业

余爱香

一、命题预测

该话题写作常出现在一些说明性的应用文中,如应聘信、寻找趣味相投的交友信、或者写信给外国朋友分享自己的兴趣爱好等。

二、常用短语

1. be fond of / be keen on 喜欢

2. be crazy about sth. 对……着迷

3. be interested in sth. / show great interest in sth. 对……感兴趣

4. in ones spare time 在某人的业余时间

5. be fed up with sth. / be tired of sth. 厌倦某事

6. enrich ones life 丰富某人的生活

7. broaden ones horizons 拓展某人的视野

8. prefer doing A to doing B 比起做B更喜欢做A

9. have a lot in common 有很多的共同点

10. develop an interest in培养在……方面的兴趣

11. collect stamps / coins 收集邮票/硬币

12. be of great importance / benefit 很重要/很有益

13. go to concert 去音乐会

14. benefit a lot from sth. 从某事中获益很多

15. devote oneself to sth. 致力于某事

三、套用句式

1. I am so interested in this job that I am writing to apply for it. 我对这份工作非常感兴趣,所以我写信给你申请这个职位。

2. In my spare time,reading is my favorite hobby,because books are just like wise teachers as well as good friends in my life. 阅读是我闲暇时最喜欢的爱好,因为书就像我生活中聪明的老师和好朋友。

3. I am extremely fond of travelling because not only can it broaden my horizons and enrich my life,but also it helps me make more friends. 我很喜欢旅游,因为它不仅可以拓展我的视野,丰富我的生活而且可以让我结交更多的朋友。

4. I am so crazy about English that I often devote myself to practicing my spoken English in my spare time. 我对英语如此狂热以至于我经常在闲暇时间致力于训练我的英语口语。

5. As we know,good hobbies and interests are of great importance in our life,from which we can benefit a lot. 众所周知,好的爱好和兴趣在我们生活中起着重要的作用,从中我们可以获益很多。

四、习作修改(做短文改错,背经典范文)

Reading is my favorite hobby. I can never stop the love for reading so books are like wise teachers as well good friends in my life. As we know,books are the source of knowledge. I benefit a great deal of from reading.

There is a variety of books for us to choose from,like history books,science books,literary books and so on. But what interests me most is to read literary books,especial those wrote by famous writers. For one thing,they helped to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons. For another,they can not only enrich my life but also provide me for great funs. Isnt it the pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading?

五、课堂练习

假设你是李华,你最喜欢的兴趣爱好是运动,你有一位英国笔友叫Tom,请你给他写一封信分享你的课余爱好,并询问他在课余时间的兴趣爱好。主要内容包括:

1. 你的兴趣爱好(运动)以及原因。

2. 询问对方的兴趣爱好。

注意:1. 词数100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3. 开头、结语已为你写好。

Dear Tom,

I have received your letter asking me something about my favorite hobby in my spare time.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

[写作指导]

1. 审题谋篇。

(1)确定文体:该篇要求写_________。

(2)确定主体时态:主要以____________时态为主。

(3)确定主体人称:多采用___________ 人称。

(4)内容要点:①_______________②_____________ ③________________。

2. 重点句式翻译练习。

(1)我很喜欢运动,我花了大部分闲暇时间在这方面,从中我获益很多。(用so...that 引导的结果状语从句和定语从句)_________________________________________________

(2)当运动的时候,我会忘记困扰我的每件事情。(用非谓语动词做后置定语)

(3)经常运动不仅可以帮助放松我自己,而且有利于我的身心健康。(用not only... but also 引导的句子)

(4)通过运动,我有机会学会怎样跟别人相处。(用强调句)

3. 连句成篇。

六、课外作业

假设你是李华,最近你从报纸上得知本地一家旅行社招聘一名兼职导游,要求能用英语沟通。你对这份工作很感兴趣,请用英语写一封应聘信。内容主要包括:

1. 自我介绍(包括年龄、性别等)。

2. 你为什么对这份工作感兴趣。

3. 希望获准。

注意:1. 词数100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3. 开头、结语已为你写好。

Dear Sir,

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

参考答案与范文

四、习作修改

作者主要讲述了阅读是自己最喜欢的爱好以及阅读的好处。

1. so →because 根据句子的逻辑关系,此处表示原因。

2. 在as well 后加as 因as well as 固定搭配,表示“也;又,和”。

3. 去掉of 因此处是指从阅读中获得很多,介词of 是多余的。

4. is→are 此处主语是a variety of books,要用are。

5. especial→especially 此处做状语,应该用副词形式。

6. wrote→witten 此处表示“被写”,应该用过去分词做后置定语。

7. helped→help 与and 后面的broaden 时态应该一致,通过全文可知,应该用一般现在时。

8. for→with 因provide ... sb. with sth.属于固定搭配。

9. funs →fun 因fun是不可数名词。

10. the→a 此处表示“一种快乐”,所以用冠词a。

五、课堂练习

1. 审题谋篇。

(1)确定文体:该篇要求写与朋友分享兴趣爱好的信件。

(2)确定主体时态:主要以一般现在时时态为主。

(3)确定主体人称:多采用第一人称。

(4)内容要点:①写信目的:分享兴趣爱好 ②具体描述你最喜欢的兴趣爱好以及原因 ③结束语:希望对方分享他的兴趣爱好。

2. 重点句式翻译练习。

(1)I am so fond of exercising that I spend most of my spare time on it,from which I can benefit a lot.

(2)When taking sports,I may forget everything troubling me a lot.

(3)Taking sports regularly not only helps me relax myself but also is good for my physical and mental health.

(4)It is by doing exercise that I have more chances to learn how to cooperate with others.

3. 连句成篇

Dear Tom,

I have received your letter asking me something about my favorite hobby in my spare time. Now I am writing to share it with you.

Taking sports is my favorite hobby. I am so fond of exercising that I spend most of my spare time on it,from which I can benefit a lot. Fist of all,when taking sports,I may forget everything troubling me a lot. Whats more,taking sports regularly not only helps me relax myself but also is good for my physical and mental health. Last but not least,it is by doing exercise that I have more chances to learn how to cooperate with others. Isnt it a great pleasure to take sports?

What is your favorite hobby? I am longing for your sharing with me.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

六、课外作业

Dear Sir,

Im Li Hua,an 18-year-old boy from our city. I am delighted to learn that you need a part-time tour guide who can speak English fluently. So I am writing to apply for it.

I am fairly interested in this job. For one thing, I am expert at speaking English. I am so crazy about English that I often devote myself to practicing my spoken English in my spare time. Therefore, I have the confidence that I can communicate well with foreigners in English. For another, not only can I broaden my horizons, but also I have more chances to make more friends if I can get the job.

I sincerely hope that I can be accepted as a member of your company.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

(作者单位:广东河源市东源县附城中学)

责任编辑 蒋小青

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