写好书信 学以致用

吴金龙

【真题再现】

假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Daniel计划今年暑假来江西度假，他向你了解江西城市生活和农村生活的情况，以便选择度假地点，请根据下面提供的关键词，给他写一封邮件，先介绍城市生活和农村生活的相同点和不同点，然后说说你自己更喜欢哪种生活，并说明理由。

城市生活：supermarket ，restaurant， apartment， car， bus， cinema， club， park.

农村生活：vegetable， rice， motorbike， bicycle， visiting， neighbors.

Dear Daniel，

I am looking forward to meeting you！

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Best wishes！

Li Hua

【佳作欣赏】

Dear Daniel，

I'm very happy that you are coming to Jiangxi to spend your summer holiday. I am looking forward to meeting you！

People's life is getting better and better both in the city and in the country. They pay more and more attention to keeping healthy. However， there are some similarities and differences between city life and country life.

In the city people like to buy things that they need in the supermarkets. They can eat at home or in the restaurants. They live in beautiful apartments. They often go to the cinemas， clubs or parks to relax themselves after work. On weekends they often go for a car driving or travel around by bus. Living in the city is really cool.

In the country， People are usually very busy. They grow vegetables and rice in the fields. They live in big houses， They ride motorbikes or bicycles to go around. They often visit their neighbors when they are free. They live a happy life.

I like living in the city better. Because I can go to the libraries， bookstores and museums， and I can learn a lot about the world.

Best wishes！

Li Hua

【作文点评】

本篇书信作文紧扣介绍城市生活和农村生活的相同点和不同点这一主题，结合给出的关键词，适当发挥，谈了自己更喜欢哪种生活，并说明了原因。文章结构整齐，层次分明，语言流畅，表述清晰，运用了一般现在时、现在进行时和一般将来时多种时态，且运用了一些比较级的句型和情态动词，短语和一些复合句也运用得当，是一篇值得我们学习的书信佳作。

书信作文应注意的事项建议：

1. 注意书信格式，内容要紧扣主题。

2. 根据关键字搜集相关信息，可适当发挥，但不能偏离主题。

3. 列提纲，划分段落，做到层次分明，结构严谨，条理清晰。

4. 将所要书写的内容补充完整。

5. 仔细检查，找出拼写、语法、时态、句型错误，并改正。

6. 注意书写，认真规范的抄写在试卷上。

（作者单位：山东省五莲县许孟镇初级中学）