I want to be an inventor

As we see， all kinds of inventions have brought our lives comfortable and easy. The world is changing and becoming more colorful. So I want to be an inventor like Edison. Now， Im still a middle school student. Im trying my best to work hard at all my lessons， especially physical， math and science. When I meet questions at school， I always ask my teachers and my classmates for help. On the other hand， Ill read books about inventions to make me cleverer. Im interested in physical. Maybe Ill invent some electric machines. Theyll help us work easily and quickly.

Although I will face lots of challenges along the way， I think nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it. I believe my dream must come true.

简评：本文层次分明，结构紧凑，运用一般现在时和将来时讲述了自己的梦想，详细地介绍了自己未来实现发明家的愿望，正在努力学习，功夫不负有心人，相信王烁同学的愿望一定会实现！

（指导教师：李池红）