Chinese Knots

Do you know anything about Chinese knots？ I will tell you something aboutthem. In China people usually do淤them with red silk， cloth and other materials.They look very beautiful in the shape of diamond. In China， these knots stand forfriendship， love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends orhang them in houses as decorations. Besides， I want to say I爷m good in于makingChinese knots. If anyone in your country want盂to know more about Chineseknots， let them write to me. I will try my best to introduce my Chinese knots toanyone who is interested in Chinese culture.

河北省阜城县第四中学息秋晗

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需要修改的地方院

①do 改为make。do 通常用于表示工作、活动、行为或任务，强调工作的具体内容；而make 表示制作、创造，强调创造的过程和结果。

②in 改为at。be good at 是固定短语，意为“擅长于”。

③want 改为wants。不定代词anyone 用作主语时，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式。

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