宁夏 马祎松 浙江 陈文炜 黑龙江 唐 言 新疆 班文莉
【真题展示】(2022 年高考英语全国乙卷,书面表达)
学校英文报正在开展以 Learning English Beyond the Classroom 为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)学习活动状况描述;
(2)简单评论;
(3)你的建议。
学生英语学习活动调查结果(人数百分比)
注意:(1)词数100 左右;
(2)短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【创新点说明】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。考查形式为“提纲+图表”类符合课标要求的创新形式,特别凸显了高中英语课标中所增添 的“看”的考查,强调了读图能力,话题贴近学生的生活实际,体现了英语学科的应用价值。
【变式1】
你校最近在校内做了关于学生阅读途径的调查,请你根据图表内的调查结果写一篇英文短文向校英文期刊Teens’life投稿,内容包括:
1.阅读途径描述;
2.简单评论;
3.你的建议。
学生阅读途径调查(百分比)
注意:词数100 左右。
【参考范文】
With the students getting older,they read in different ways.About 50% of primary school students depend on their parents to get books,the number of whom drops to slightly over 20%for junior high school students,and 10% for senior high school students.Half of them buy books by themselves.About one fifth students of all ages borrow books to read.Online reading also plays a more important role for bigger students.
Personally,I think bigger students have more freedom to choose books,and they have more access to the internet.But since they are still adolescents,proper guidance and supervision should be provided so that they can gain more benefit rather than harm.
【创新点说明】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。考生在阐述图表内容的基础之上,需要表明自己的观点、态度,并作出正确的价值判断,体现了对考生英语学科核心素养的考查。该试题主题积极向上,旨在考查考生能否运用相关常识和语言知识进行有效的文字表达,完成特定的交际任务,对学生的健康成长起到促进作用。
【作者单位 姓名】宁夏银川市贺兰县景博中学 马祎松
【变式2】
学校英文报对中学生英语课外阅读的书籍类别做了调查和统计,结果如下图,请你根据调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.英语课外阅读情况描述;
2.可能的原因;
3.你的建议。
各类书籍在中学生英语课外阅读中的占比情况饼图
注意:1.词数100 左右;
2.短文的题目已为你写好。
【参考范文】
We Should Expand Our Reading Range
As is shown in the pie chart,the percentage of reference books in students’ extracurricular reading accounts for 83%,which is the highest among the four categories while famous books,newspapers as well as magazines only make up 6% and 8% respectively.
In my mind,two reasons are responsible for the phenomenon.First,the grades of English exams play a critical role in students’ study,thus causing students to spend more time on reference books.Second,due to the lack of vocabulary,many students find it difficult to read English masterpieces and articles in the newspapers or magazines.
My suggestion is that we students are expected to try to expand our reading range from different reading materials.Besides,teachers should offer proper guidance in students’extracurricular reading.
【变式说明】本题属于图表+提纲形式的写作,与2022 年高考英语全国乙卷在形式和内容上非常契合,要求学生根据英语课外阅读的各类书籍占比情况的调查和统计饼图写一篇稿件。话题贴近学生生活,在英语学科教测评中巧妙融入学科的育人价值。
【创新点说明】本题很好地考查了学生的英语学科核心素养:考查学生描述图表的语言运用能力;要求学生分析调查数据背后的原因并提出相应的建议,很巧妙地考查了学生的分析归纳能力以及逻辑思维能力。
【作者单位 姓名】浙江省宁波市五乡中学 陈文炜
【变式3】
上周,你校英文报进行了一项主题为英语课外阅读情况的调查,以下为相关结果。请给英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.叙述结果;
2.分析原因;
3.给出建议。
每周英语课外阅读情况
注意:词数100 左右。
【参考范文】
Last week,a survey concerning English extra-curricular reading time was conducted.The results are as follows.
It is worrying that 33% of the students don’t do any extra reading weekly and 40% only read for below three hours.In addition,respectively 19% and 8% involve themselves in three to five hours and more than 5 hours of reading.After some analysis,it occurred to me that lacking interest and teacher’s guidance may be the main reasons.Moreover,too much homework is also likely to contribute to the result.
Based on the reasons,it is highly suggested that we should attach more significance to reading and try to shorten the time spent on homework in order to ensure our reading time.After all,it is reading that actually improves our English.
【变式说明】2022 年高考英语全国乙卷书面表达要求学生从柱状图中读取并描述相关信息,本变式题有如下特点:首先,主题更加具体,限定在了课外阅读的范围内;其次,柱状图改为了饼形图,考查角度更为多样,考查学生的观察能力。
【创新点说明】本题的创新点在于题目中的第二个写作要点,其对于考生读取数据的能力以及分析能力要求很高,需要考生在已有数据的基础之上分析出导致这种结果的原因,例如课后作业用时过长,读物过难,对英语不感兴趣,缺乏教师引导。在给出建议的部分,考生需要针对自己分析出的原因给出具体的建议,例如认识到学习英语的重要性,选择适合自己的读物,缩短写作业的时间。此外,考生需要意识到原因与建议的内在逻辑联系,让全文内容更加紧凑。
【作者单位 姓名】黑龙江省大庆市东风中学 唐 言
【变式4】
下面的图表反映的是S 市2018 年至2021 年在学校开展“阳光体育大课间”活动以来学生健康变化的数据。请你用英语写一份报告,内容包括:
1.学生健康变化情况;
2.简单评论;
3.你的建议。
注意:1.词数100 左右;
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【参考范文】
Health changes of teenagers
A recent survey shows that the health of the students in S city has been improved in the past three years.
The chart shows that the number of students getting nearsighted only increased by 1%.Compared with 47% in 2018,the percentage of the students with mental problems has dropped by 22%.The chart also tells that nearly 8% of the students have lengthened their sleeping time.Besides,the percentage of overweighted students has decreased from 52% to 30%.(学生健康变化情况)There is no doubt that taking regular exercises has played an important role in improving students’ physical and mental health.(简单评论)
In order to further improve students’ health,I call for less homework.Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent them from getting nearsighted.(个人建议)
【创新点说明】
【作者单位 姓名】新疆克拉玛依市教育研究所 班文莉