关于英语书面表达的复习策略

王美玲

（四川省东汽八一中学 四川 618000）

一、书面表达存在的问题

①卷面问题（书写不工整，不规范；大小写很随意；）；②要点内容（漏要点的；偏写要点的，自己增加的冗长）；③段落框架（无头无尾，缺乏主题句，也无总结句；句与句之间无逻辑思维关系）；④遣词造句（句型乱用，中式英语；时态混乱；）；⑤对各文体也是模糊的，每个主题的基本素材也缺乏的很。

二、书面表达策略

根据孩子们平时的问题和他们的英语基础，我注重以下策略去引导。

①关于卷面。（目标：Clean/ clear。要求：大小一致；落在线上；避免毛刺。）

②内容。（目标：内容定档，语言定分；对于题中所给的内容要全面，对于自己发挥的内容要简单。）

③段落框架。◆一篇英文段落的基本结构：主题段（开头）；拓展段（要点）；总结段（结尾）。

◆常用的逻辑思维连词。◆最基本的过渡词

时间状语从句when /while. Before /after since/ until /till as soon as地点状语从句where/ wherever目的状语从句so that in order that结果状语从句so....that such .....that条件状语从句if，unless ,as long as 原因状语从句because since as for让步状语从句although /though even though/if

拓展成两个层次（主题句）For one thing，For another拓展成三个层次（主题句）Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly（主题句）First and foremost，Additionally；Last but not least拓展成四个层次（主题句）To begin with；Moreover/Besides，What’s more ；Finally

④遣词造句。积累常见句型；收集主题的写作素材。

三、结合实例，贯穿写作技巧

（一）2020.2.2，新型冠突袭。刚开始最要做的就是如何防护新冠，保护家人。根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的短文，给出防控新型冠状病毒的建议。

要点：1.勤用肥皂，洁净的水洗手；2.尽量不去公共场所；如必须去，请带口罩；

3.如果发烧或感觉不舒服，赶紧就医；4.多喝水，多运动。

The virus is spreading around the world. But we can do something to stay away from it. Here are some advice for you. Firstly,we should often wash our hands with soap and clean water. Secondly,try not to go to public places and just stay at home.when we have to go out ,remember to always wear a mask.Thirdly, if we are not feeling well, we’d better go to see the doctor at once. ,Last but not least,to keep in good health, we are supposed to drink more water, exercise more and have a good rest.

Let’s play a role in fighting the virus .we believe the virus will disappear soon as long as we follow the advice.

（二）2020.2.20。亲爱的同学们，面对疫情，全民宅家有20多天了，你有什么苦恼和压力吗？今天我们来看看一个来自武汉的男孩怎么向Dr.know 求助。(疫情正处于暴涨时期，孩子们压力太大，各种焦虑担心蜂拥而至，让他们倾诉以达到心理疏导。 )

要点：1.疫情传播加快，我感到紧张；2.不能按时开学，每天在电脑上学习；

3.缺乏运动，只能做些室内锻炼；4.作息时间也一团糟，熬夜晚睡；睡过头。

Dear Doctor,

I have too much pressure these days.I have been at home for about 20 days because of the terrible Virus .First of all ,more and more people fell sick,and the number of the patients is increasing every day.so I am too nervous . Another biggest problem is that I can’t go to school on time .Instead ,I just stayed at home and study on computer .However ,I can’t concentrate on it.Also,I am short of exercise ,I only can do some indoor activities to relax. Besides,I have difficulty in keeping Time table very well.I often stay up too late and oversleep the next morning.What should I do? Could you give me some suggestions?

A boy from Wuhan

（三）2020.3.15。借助疫情期间“最美逆行者”们的点点滴滴，引导孩子们要学会感恩。

经过全国人民英勇奋战，“防疫抗疫”取得了很大的进步，这少不了这些“逆行者”的奉献。请根据以下要点的提示，给还在战斗的他们写一封感谢信。

要点：1.逆行.出征；2.抗“疫”.战斗；3.誓言.心声。

Dear the bravest fighters,

How is everything going with you in Wuhan?I am writing the letter to express my thanks to you for fighting the virus at the front line.When I look back those days,I can’t wait to say thanks to you . I remember during the Spring Festival,you rushed to Wuhan with your decision when we enjoyed the festival with our family.You wear the mask and protecting clothing ,I can’t tell the differences between you. I just know some of you are doing the experiments about the virus in the lab while some of you are saving the lives in the hospital. Some of you are carrying the medical material in the street,some of you are taking the temperature in the community at the same time.To my surprise ,It took some of you about ten days to finish building the hospital.Although you are sometimes exhausted ,you continue to work after a short rest .Although you always miss your family a lot,you keep fighting after a short conversation on the phone . You promise you won’t go back until the virus disappears.

Thanks again for what you are doing for us.I hope you come back safely soon.

A student at home

（四）2020.4.10。（“宅”在家里两个月的孩子们返校后，兴奋，懒散；虽然疫情延迟中考，但还得面对，所以通过制定备考中考计划，激发他们学习斗志。）即将开学，我们将如何奋战中考呢？

要点：1.按时上课，上课认真听讲，记笔记，积极参与课堂；2.课后作业认真完成；

3.找出自己的难点，向老师求助；4.加强体育锻炼，保持良好心态。

Make a plan for High School Entrance Examination

High School Entrance Examination is coming in about 80days.But how to prepare for it in the short time ? At first, I am going to get to class on time and listen to my teachers carefully.In order to understand the key points, I am going to take notes carefully .During the class,I am going to take part in the activities actively .Then ,I am going to finish the homework on time .As for the difficulties, I am going to ask teacher for help after class..Besides,I am going to exercise more and keep a good attitude to make my plan effective.

In a word, I believe I can get good grades as long as I follow my plans seriously.

总之，在这特殊时期，根据疫情发展的情况和孩子们不同时期的表现，在帮助孩子们了解实情的同时也帮助他们梳理心理。我原创了一系列英语书面表达，从构思主题 细化要点 分析审题 积累句型 打磨批改，一篇篇有血有肉的文章就出来了，不仅帮他们度过了这段艰难时刻，在德育上起到正面引导，孩子们的英语写作也显著提高了。