My Best Friend

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要求：运用所学知识描述一位好朋友，语句通顺，不少于80词。

My best friend is Alice. We are in the same class. She is a nice girl. She has big black eyes and a small mouth. She is as tall as me. We both have long black hair. Shes good at dancing. Im more outgoing than her ， but shes more hard-working than me. A friend likes a mirror. When I see her doing homework， I also take out my book to read. Alice often gives me good advice when Im in trouble. Im weak in maths， she often helps me with maths and tells me to do more exercises in time. Now my math is much better than before. A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. Im lucky to own this good friend.

简评：人人都有好朋友，此文虽为命题作文，但是是一篇贴近学生实际生活，适合中学生表达的记叙文。话题较为轻松、自由，有利于学生的发挥。题目要求描述一位好朋友，学生可紧紧围绕此话题， 运用所学形容词比较级等语言知识从不同方面入笔，如外貌、性格及爱好等将这篇作文写得丰富而生动。本文语言简洁，不仅将好朋友的一些特征与自己相对比，而且恰到好处地举出和好朋友在学习生活中遇到的几件事例来描述人物，并能够引用教材中的一些句子，学以致用， 是一篇佳作。

（指导教师：于倩）