My Mother, My Goddess

胡陆璐

My mother looks young.

Her eyes are very big and bright.

Her hair is black and short.

She always wears a pair of glasses.

She likes shopping and cooking.

She cooks nice food for us every day.

She keeps our home clean and tidy.

指导老师 姜琴琴：

孩子們感情真挚、细腻，于平凡中见真情。作品语言平实质朴，于细节中写出父母对孩子无私的爱，也表达了孩子对父爱和母爱的赞美。主题鲜明，行文流畅。