The Spring in My Hometown

苏红雪

My hometown is a beautiful small village. Though all the seasons are beautiful， I like spring best.

After the snow melts， the swallows fly back and the willows sprout. We know that spring is coming. All the trees become green and the mountains are covered with green grass and many kinds of beautiful flowers. What colorful pictures！ My friends and I will run about all day， climb the mountains， and jump from one rock to another. Sometimes we will play near the river. We sing and dance happily， we all enjoy ourselves there.

I like the spring in my hometown.

【简评】全文用词较为考究，句式结构富于变化，行文流畅。小作者通过孩童们的嬉戏来描写春天也是别有一番景致。

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