宋佳慧
Time goes by, we have been teenagers. I think we should learn to make our own decisions. Our own clothes should be chosen by ourselves, too.
This is because we have ideas that are different from parents. For example, sometimes the clothes parents choose dont fit us because they are out. We dislike wearing them and they are waste of money. Also, we probably have an argument with parents about this.
All in all, I think it is necessary for teenagers to choose their own clothes.
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