My family

江苏省淮安市洪泽实验小学四（7）班 袁 懿

My name is Yuan Yi.I have a happy family.It is a small one.They are my mother，my father and me.My mother is a teacher.She teaches English very well.My father is an office worker.He is very humourous.He often tells us funny stories.He works hard，too.My parents set a good example to me.So I’m strict with myself at school.I put all my effort into study.I love my family very much.

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小作者通过简单介绍自己父母的工作，让读者了解她的家庭，以及家庭环境对她的影响，全文语言流畅，内容深刻，过渡自然，是一篇佳作。