高考英语全国卷中慰问信写作导练

张路宁

一、文体概述

慰问信是指在同学、亲友考试失利、生病、受伤或遇到火灾、水灾、被盗等不幸事件时，对对方表示慰问的信件。慰问信要写得真诚并注意措辞；要围绕一个中心，关心鼓励对方，主动提供帮助并令其得到安慰和鼓舞。内容常包括：对不幸事件表示关心同情→安慰和提供帮助→鼓励其努力→再次表示同情并希望其早日复原或者走出困境。

二、必备短语

1. have/show sympathy for... 对……表示同情

2. be filled with ... 充满了……

3. convey my sympathy to ... 转达我对……的同情

4. Best wishes for ... 最好的祝愿……

5. We are all hoping ... 我们都希望……

6. get through the difficulty渡过难关

7. make a full recovery取得完全康复

8. leave the hospital / be discharged from the hospital出院

9. I couldnt believe that ... 我无法相信……

三、套用句式

1. I am so sorry/shocked to learn of the news that ... 很抱歉/震惊得知……

2. I am deeply sorry to hear that... / I just cant tell you how sorry I am to hear that... 听到……我深感难过。

3. Please accept my deepest sympathy请接受我最深切的慰问

4. I would like to send you my best wishes for ... 我想送你我最美好的祝愿。

5. I wish you swift/quick/speedy recovery祝愿你快速康复。

四、习作修改 下列习作中共有10处错误，每句最多两处，请改正。

Dear John，

I am shocking to hear that you have bad cold and now are in hospital. I get this news from your mother and know you must be absent for half a month at the classes. Do are careful while you are ill. Dont worry about your lesson and I am willing to help you learn from them when you return.

We are best friends so I will never allow you to fall behind. You can watch television or listen with radio programs to help pass the time but forget your pains while you recover. I did hope that I can see you soon and bring you any funny cartoons.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

五、課堂练习

假定你是李华，在美国某学校学习，你的同学Mike的家突然遭受火灾，所有财产毁于一旦，你作为班长给处于极度悲伤和自救的他写一封慰问信，要点如下：

1. 对该同学表示关心。

2. 向其提供一些帮助，如捐助和补习。

3. 表达希望和对其重建家园的信心。

注意：1. 词数100以上；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Mike，

I was so sorry to hear of the sudden fire that destroyed your beautiful house， and your house is in ruins.

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Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

六、课外作业

假定你是李芳，你的美国好友Jane数学学得不好，对自己失去了信心，产生了厌学情绪。请你给她发一封电子邮件开导她。要点如下：

1. 没有必要过于伤心；

2. 要振作起来，尽量减少焦虑心理；

3. 和老师交流有助于你改善；

4. 探索适合自己的有效学习方式。

注意：l. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jane，

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_____________________________________________________Yours，

Li Fang

参考答案与范文

习作修改

本文是李华得知同学大伤风而住院后，写信慰问同学。

1. shocking →shocked 表达“对……感到震惊”，人的内心感受，用动词的过去分词。

2. 在bad cold前加a 因cold意为“感冒”时为可数名词。

3. at→from 因固定搭配be absent from表示缺席。

4. are→be 因是祈使句，且在助动词do之后，用动词原形。

5. lesson→lessons 因lesson作为课时讲时，可数，因为生病缺勤的话，不止落下一节课，所以用复数形式。

6. 去掉them前面的from 因意指“我乐意帮助你学习（功课）”，直接用learn sth。

7. with→to 听收音机，listen to是固定搭配。

8. but→and 因消磨时间和忘记伤痛是并列关系，用and连接。

9. did→do 这一段讲的是作者此刻的想法，表示强调用助动词do。

10. any→some 肯定句中，为别人带来一些东西，一般用some。

课堂练习

Dear Mike，

I was so sorry to hear of the sudden fire that destroyed your beautiful house， and your house is in ruins. Were filled with deep sorrow. Please convey our sympathy to your family. Thinking about your present situation， we cannot wait a minute to make efforts to help you. I， as a monitor， on behalf of our class， express our most sincere pity and care for you. A house can be destroyed， but not hopes.

Besides， we make a donation of some money， expecting that it can help you get through the difficulty. We believe that with the help of so many kind people， a better house can be rebuilt.

Finally， were all hoping youll be back to school soon and we will make up the lessons for you.

Best wishes！

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

課外作业

Dear Jane，

I am sorry to hear that you didnt do well in math and have lost interest in schoolwork. As is often the case， math is difficult for most students， so there is no need to feel too bad. At this moment， what you should is to cheer up and find ways to reduce your anxiety. Why not go on an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music？ If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most， they may give you some practical advice that helps you. Probably its time for you to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you.

Anyway， if you have any other difficulties， please tell us in time and I hope you can rebuild your self-confidence soon！

Yours，

Li Fang

责任编辑 蒋小青