话题23. 社会

2015-05-30 06:50:58叶健萍
广东教育·高中 2015年1期
关键词:拼写错误信息点汉服

叶健萍

一、相关短语

1. a significant cultural symbol 一个重要意义的文化象征

2. mental benefit 精神上受益

3. be set aside to do 固定下来以……

4. raise awareness of... 提高……的意识

5. be short of... 缺少……

6. add up to 增加到……

7. be different in different cultures在不同的文化下是不同的

8. make a deep impression on me 给我留下深刻的印象

9. be treated with justice受到公正对待

10. sweet taste 口感甘甜

11. preserve the character of 保持……的特点

12. social circumstance 社会环境

13. enjoy equal rights享受平等的权利

14. the competitive nature of our society 我们社会的竞争性

15. attach great importance to 重视

16. suffer from hunger挨饿

17. call for 要求;提倡

二、必备句式

1. This is the reason why... 这就是……的原因

2. The final say is left to ... 最后的决定权/发言权在于……

3. ...is widely known as ...... 被广泛认为……

4. We do hope that the whole society ... because ... 我们希望整个社会……因为……

5. I think it is every citizens duty to work hard to achieve this goal. 我认为我们每人都有责任去达成这个目标。

三、典型例题

例题一:基础写作

请用英语写一篇短文,介绍剪纸,内容包括:

名称:剪纸(paper cutting)

类属:中国最为流行的传统民间艺术形式之一

历史:有1500多年的历史,在明朝和清朝时期特别流行

颜色:常用红色,象征健康和兴旺

用途:(1)美化居家环境

(2)在春节和婚庆期间,剪纸被用来装饰门窗和房间,以增加喜庆的气氛

(3)很受世界各地人民的欢迎,经常被用作馈赠外国友人的礼物

[过程指导]

第一步,认真审题。

1. 审文体:介绍物品,是________文。

2. 审时态:以_______________为主。

3. 审人称:以第______人称为主。

4. 审要点:认真看看方框内外的信息,以便分组规划。

第二步,信息分组。

根据各信息点之间的逻辑顺序等将信息点分为5组,以便用5个句子来表达。(在题目上用笔圈出来即可)

第三步,信息表达。

以上每组信息点用一个英语句子来表达,必要时添加恰当的主语等成分,使句子结构完整。

第四步,连句成篇。

将以上5个句子合并成一篇连贯的短文,必要时添加适当的过渡衔接词。

第五步,检查核对。

第六步,规范誊写。

例题二:读写任务

阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

During the recently televised Chinese Character Dictation Contest by CCTV-10, when the host asked the 14-year-old contestant Yu Shuang from Guizhou Province to write the word for toad(蟾蜍), the audience frowned. Yu failed as she wrote the character with one dot missing. However, among 10 adult participants offstage, only three had written the word correctly.

Meanwhile, those sitting at home also felt embarrassed during the broadcast, since on several occasions they were stumped as to how to write words that are commonly used in daily conversation.

According to a survey by Beijing-based Horizon Research Consultancy in May, up to 94.1 percent of respondents said they had encountered memory lapses(疏忽) concerning how to write certain characters while writing and 26.8 percent said such lapses were frequent.

Cell phone and computers are common devices to most urban children. A report on the lifestyle of Chinese children published by Beijing Women's Federation in July showed that mobile phones, instant messenger QQ, Weibo and tablets have become a major part of urban childrens daily lives. According to the report, 52.6 percent of kids aged 4 to 6 had used the Internet. The percentage for kids aged between 7 and 9 reached 58.6 percent, and 77 percent for 10 to 12-year-olds.

[写作内容]

1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容;

2. 以约120个词就弘扬中国传统文化谈谈你的想法,内容包括:

(1) 你或你身边的人是否经常出现汉字拼写错误?

(2) 谈谈造成这种现象的原因;

(3) 我们应该怎样弘扬中国传统文化?

[过程指导]

写概括

1. 分析文体类别:阅读材料为现象类说明文,作者首先指出一种社会现象,然后分析产生这种现象的原因,最后提出自己的看法。

2.找出关键词句:写概要前,应在文中找出并标明以下关键句或关键词:

社会现象:____________________________(第一段)

分析原因:____________________________(第二段)

作者观点:____________________________(第三段)

3. 组合关键词句:________________________________

谈想法

要点⑴:首先写出主题句:如今很多人都存在汉字拼写错误的问题。然后具体说明拼写错误问题:写不出来的词还是我们日常生活中常用的。

要点⑵:主题句:是什么导致了这种现象?原因:在阅读短文中提到的,数码设备的普及是一个重要的因素,现在的年轻人更喜欢打字而不是手写;一些错别字的广告招牌随处可见,这极大地误导了人们。

要点(3):主题句:我们应该重视中国传统文化。措施:呼吁手写的普及;重视中国传统节日的庆祝活动;保护文物,文物是中国文化宝贵的遗产。

根据以上提示,完成自己的写作:__________________

四、模拟演练

练习一:基础写作

假如你是李华,你的英国好朋友Tom 非常喜欢中国服饰,尤其是汉服。

[写作内容]

请你根据以下内容向他介绍汉服。内容如下:

名 称:汉服,中国的传统服饰

历 史:

★有至少4000年历史,是中国文明的象征;

★清朝时统治者强行以旗袍代替汉服,国际社会由此广泛认为旗袍是中国的民族服装

主要特征:

★交领、右衽、宽袖;

★汉服分为常服和礼服;

★常服比较简单随意,礼服则是大方华丽

参考词汇:交领 cross collar 右衽 tie to the right

大方华丽 lavish and gorgeous

Dear Tom,

I am glad to hear that you like Chinese clothes very much, especially Hanfu. I would like to introduce it for you.

...

Yours,

Li Hua

练习二:读写任务

阅读下面的短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的短文。

According to the China Education Daily, the army enlisted(登记招收) nearly 130,000 servicemen from college students and fresh grads in 2009. The number is 60 times bigger than that in 2001. It has been increased by a series of preferential policies in terms of finance and employment.

Nationwide enlistment this year will start on November 1. Tens of thousands of college students and grads have applied. Many of them are not going for the preferential policies. They are looking for friendship and a physical and mental challenge.

Yu Bier, 24, joined the army in 2009 as a fresh college grad. She is now a member of The Naval Art Ensemble in Guangzhou. Yu has a strict timetable for her mealtimes. She needs to ask for the group leaders permission when she wants to go to the washroom.

“We have no choice but to obey the orders of our superior. We say yes whatever the order is,” said Yu. The leader gave an order, and off Yu went to fetch water for her.

The rules may seem inhuman, but they are not unreasonable. Great discipline(纪律) is required in war and in disaster relief.

[写作内容]

1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点;

2. 然后以约120个词就“大学生参军”谈谈你的看法,要点包括:

(1)分析大学生参军的原因;

(2)纪律严格的重要性;

(3)你是否愿意参军。

(作者单位:惠州市惠港中学)

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