李泽熙
I am interested in doing sports. There are many kinds of sports in my school. Such as football, volleyball, basketball and pingpang ball.
I always do sports when I have free time. After school, you can see me running on the playground. On Sunday, you can see me playing pingpang in our school.
Doing sports is good for my health. Not only doing sports makes me taller, but also makes me stronger. If I feel unhappy, I will do sports.
In my opinion, doing sports is the best way to make us relaxed.
简评:本文写了学校都有哪些运动形式,同时说明运动在学生生活中的作用。学生能够正确使用语法和相关词汇,如果能多一些复合句就更加完美了。是一篇可读性很强的作文。
( 指导教师:董文平)