My Summer Vacation

王梦

I had an interesting summer vacation. My parents and I went to Sanya. We stayed there for three days. On the first day ，we arrived there. It was rainy so I had to stay at the hotel. But the next day was sunny. My parents and I went to the beach. The air was so clean and the weather was hot. There were many people. Some children played with sand. Some people lay in the sun and enjoyed the sunshine. We went paragliding on the beach. In the afternoon， I picked up some shells. They were so beautiful. On the third day， we went shopping and bought some souvenirs. We had a good time. I will never forget the days in Sanya.

简评： 文章时态用得很准确，利用一般过去时描述假期的生活，并且结尾用将来时的句子I will never forget the days in Sanya.来抒发自己的感受，说明作者对时态掌握得很好。文章结构较完整，但在写文章时应避免仅用一两种句型，而要根据实际情况灵活运用所学的各种句式，使文章有声有色。

（指导教师：马艳红）