这是一篇介绍性文章,小动物的外形、独特的习性和与我们之间发生的故事等都是很好的习作内容。学生可以从自己养过或熟悉的小动物入手,分别从feature、ability和hobbies等方面介绍自己的动物朋友。写作文时要注意:
●选择一般现在时,可以用she或者he来对动物朋友进行拟人化描述。
●要善于使用连接词and、but、although等来接连短句。结尾还可用感叹句What a lovely...! 使句型更加丰富。
●恰当使用形容词friendly、funny、agile、timid、naughty等来凸显动物朋友的性格特征,使描写更加生动有趣。
I have an animal friend named Tutu. He is a lovely dog with golden fur and big, brown eyes.
Tutu is very friendly. Every morning, he wakes me up by nudging(轻推) my bed with his nose, as if saying, “Time to get up and play!” We often go for walks in the park.
I love spending time with Tutu. He’s not just a pet; he’s my best friend! 六(5)班 王则淳
I have a little cat and it is also my good friend. It is covered in white all over, so I called it Xiaobai.
Xiaobai is so funny. It likes to chase after toys, climb up high places, and pounce(猛扑) on anything
that moves. Sometimes it even does funny tricks like chasing its tail or rolling around on the floor.
Although Xiaobai is naughty and quite lazy, I still take good care of it. Because of it, my home is full of happiness." nbsp; "六(2)班 朱奕璇
I have an animal friend named Tuotuo because it walks too slowly. It has four short legs, a hard shell, and a long neck.
Its favourite food is meat. When I give it some meat, it swims very quickly and sticks its head out(伸出) to eat. In a short time, it finishes all the meat. But sometimes it is very timid; when I touch its shell, it hides its head inside immediately.
In my opinion. I’m lucky enough to have a turtle like this because it can make me happy." "六(3)班 顾友澄
I have a lovely hamster(仓鼠). Its name is Tangyuan because it is white and round.
Its eyes are like black beans. It is furry and cute but also very naughty. Tangyuan likes eating melon seeds(南瓜籽). It bites the seeds with its teeth and then peels(剥) the shells with its hands. It stores food in its cheek pouches(颊囊), but it always leaves the shells everywhere. Tangyuan never bites me; it is so nice to everyone.
I think Tangyuan is the loveliest hamster in the world. Do you think so? 六(3)班 章煦淳