My Sister Gina

My name is Alice. I have a sister. Her name is Gina. She is tall and looksnice with long hair. My sister is a good student and she’s always good for淤herclassmates and teachers. She does well in math and English. On weekends， shehelps me with my study and we play sport于after that. Gina’s room is not very tidy.Her books are usually on the desk and her bed. Her school things are everywherein the room. I help her with find盂her things everyday. We are sisters and we aregood friends， too.

江苏省连云港市罗阳中学王芹芹

点评

优点：本文介绍了一个人物，“我”的姐姐吉娜。作者从人物姓名、身高、外貌写到学习情况，个性特点，以及两人的相处日常，吉娜的形象在描述中也渐渐变得立体起来。全文语句正确流畅，逻辑连贯，是一篇合格的学生习作。

需要修改的地方：

①for 改为with。be good with 是固定短语，表示“与某人相处融洽”。

②sport 后加s。固定短语play sports 表示“进行体育运动”。

③find 后加-ing。介词with 后面动词需加上-ing，变为动名词。

评分：

按江苏省连云港市中考英语作文满分25 分的评分标准，本文修改前可得23 分。