游记写作

蒋建平

情境呈现

假如你上周末第一次去厦门旅行，请写一篇英语短文介绍此次旅行的见闻，内容包括：

1. 介绍景点;

2. 谈谈你的感受。

注意：

1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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写作指导

Step 1 审题

本次的写作任务是写一篇游记。游记是对某一景点进行介绍和描述的文体，即对旅游景点和所见所闻的描写。同时，大概描述一下旅游的路线和顺序，使文章线索清晰，给读者以景点的大致轮廓。介绍完见闻后，对此次旅行进行简明扼要的总结。

Step 2 谋篇

Step 3 语库

一、短语

第一次 for the first time

留下深刻的印象 leave a deep impression

位于 be located/situated at/in/on

各种美味的小吃 various delicious snacks

被……包围 be surrounded by

被……吸引 be attracted by

成千上万的游客 thousands of tourists

乘船 by sea/ship

二、句子

Step 4 短文

【佳作赏析】

I traveled to Xiamen last weekend for the first time， which left a deep impression on me.

Xiamen is located in the southeast of Fujian Province， and Gulangyu Island is one of the most famous places in Xiamen. Thousands of tourists go to Gulangyu Island every day. There is a community called Zengcuoan， where you can taste various delicious snacks. Xia-men University is a beautiful place which you must visit. After visiting it， you can find it is a wonderful thing to go to university. Xiamen is surrounded by the sea. You can go to pick up shells and swim in the sea.

In short， what a fascinating city Xiamen is！

即時训练

假定你是李华，你的英国网友Tom写邮件来询问你一次难忘的旅游经历。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，要点包括：

1. 旅游过程;

2. 你的感受。

注意：

1. 词数80左右;

2. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Tom，

I'm glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.

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I'm looking forward to going there with you next time.

Yours，

Li Hua3D9B4498-1711-4993-A5DD-CBB9F7CA5C7D