2020年9月大学英语四、六级作文试题评析（二）

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四      级

Directions：

For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on online libraries. You can start your essay with the sentence “Online libraries are becoming increasingly popular”. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

本题要求考生分析在线图书馆变得越来越受欢迎的情况，属于分析现象型作文。由于话题贴近大学生的校园生活，考生拿到这道作文题都应该感到有话可说。

本文可以写成三个段落。

第一段开门见山地提出所要分析的社会现象——在线图书馆变得越来越受欢迎。为了把在线图书馆受欢迎的程度具体化，接下来可以引用最新的统计数据以资佐证。

第二段分析出现这一社会现象的原因，即为什么在线图书馆变得越来越受欢迎。为此，就要分析在线图书馆有哪些优点。与传统图书馆相比，在线图书馆的优点有很多，但最好从读者能够直接感受到的方面去分析。比如，在线图书馆使用方便和信息易得。为了使论证丰满详实，这两个方面都要通过提供具体细节而略作展开。例如，在分析“使用方便”时，可以指出在线图书馆24小时开放且没有休息日，只要与图书馆有网络连接，随时都可以使用。借阅者也不必亲自跑到图书馆一个书架一个书架地找书。在分析“信息易得”时，可以指出在线图书馆界面友好，只需点击鼠标就可以阅读馆藏图书和学术杂志。此外，在线图书馆的资料可以方便地下载和打印。

分析现象型作文一般是沿着提出问题—分析问题—解决问题的思路展开。因此，第三段可以先指出：尽管在线图书馆很受欢迎，但它不会取代传统图书馆。最后得出结论：实际上，在为公众提供更好服务方面，二者可以互相补充。

下面请看参考范文：

Online libraries are becoming increasingly popular among young people these days. According to a 2019 study， 84.2% of the college students polled in Shanghai said they prefer an online library to a physical one when doing research.

Convenience and accessibility are two main factors behind this popularity. An online library is open 24 hours a day， 7 days a week. As long as an Internet connection is available， you can get an instant access to a huge amount of information at any time. You no longer need to go to the library physically and search shelf after shelf. Also， an online library normally provides a user-friendly interface， giving you a clickable link to books and scholarly journals. In addition， the resources of an online library can be readily downloaded， and printed if you want to.

Despite their popularity， online libraries are never meant to substitute for their brick and mortar counterparts. As I see it， they actually complement each other in rendering a better service to the public. （168 words）

语言亮点借鉴：

1. Convenience and accessibility are two main factors behind this popularity. 方便和易得是在线图书馆受欢迎的两个主要因素。本句是第二段的主题句，整个段落都要紧紧围绕本句展开。

2. Also， an online library normally provides a user-friendly interface， giving you a clickable link to books and scholarly journals. 而且在線图书馆通常提供方便使用的界面，只需点击鼠标就可以链接图书和学术杂志。normally通常。

3. Despite their popularity， online libraries are never meant to substitute for their brick and mortar counterparts. 在线图书馆尽管受欢迎，其目的从来就不是取代实体图书馆。be meant to do sth旨在做某事。brick and mortar实体的。

4. As I see it， they actually complement each other in rendering a better service to the public. 在我看来，在向公众提供更好的服务方面，它们实际上可以互相补充。render a service to sb 向某人提供服务。

六      级

Directions：

For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the saying “What is worth doing is worth doing well.” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

本题要求考生证明一句谚语、俗语或名言的正确性，属于阐释道理型作文。要写好这种类型的作文，首先要深刻理解这句谚语、俗语或名言的意思。本题中这句谚语的字面意思是：值得做的事情就值得做好。它其实说的是一种认真负责的工作态度，即做任何事情都应当竭尽全力把它做好。

这篇作文可以写成三个段落。

第一段先引出所要论证的谚语，然后解释它所蕴含的意义。

第二段论证这句谚语的正确性，即为什么值得做的事情值得做好。认真负责的工作态度有着多方面的重要意义，比如它让人在高度竞争的就业市场上能够谋到一份好工作。不妨以某位师姐Selena Zhang为例来证明这一点。她在宝洁公司实习期间，认真负责地对待每一件工作，从而毕业时拿到了这家公司的聘书。写英语论说文，如果在论证时举不出名人或伟人的例子，举出像这样平凡小人物的例子也可以。

文章可以用建议法结尾。第三段先总结认真负责的工作态度的意义：不但有助于找到一份称心如意的工作，还会在事业上得到更多机遇。然后建议读者践行这个道理。

下面请看参考范文：

When it comes to the right attitude towards work， there is a popular saying which goes “What is worth doing is worth doing well.” It means that we should do our very best work with everything we do.

There is a great deal of truth in this saying. Among other things， willingness to work hard helps one to land a good job in todays highly competitive job market， as employers are always looking for people who are eager to give their best at work. Selena Zhang， my senior， is a good example. During her internship at P&G in her junior year， she approached every task—big and small—in a way that was beyond what was expected of her. Her devotion to work paid off when she got an offer from the consumer giant upon her graduation.

Conscientiousness will not only help us find a plum job but expose us to more opportunities in our career. Therefore， when doing any task， we should do it as well as we possibly can. （171 words）

语言亮点借鉴：

1. When it comes to the right attitude towards work， there is a popular saying which goes “What is worth doing is worth doing well.” 谈到对待工作的正确态度，有一句俗话说“值得做的事就值得做好”。

2. There is a great deal of truth in this saying. 这句话很有道理。

3. Selena Zhang， my senior， is a good example. 我的学姐塞琳娜·张就是一个很好的例子。这是举例证明的常用寫法。

4. During her internship at P&G in her junior year， she approached every task—big and small—in a way that was beyond what was expected of her. 她大三时到宝洁公司实习，实习期间，她对每一件工作——无论大小——的处理都超出了人们的期望。

5. Conscientiousness will not only help us find a plum job but expose us to more opportunities in our career. 认真负责不但会帮助我们找到一份称心如意的工作，还会让我们在事业中有更多的机遇。a plum job一份美差。