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I have a good friend whos name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor
whose
and one of the good student in our class. Clever as she is, but she
students
studies very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk
in
about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homework one Sunday morning
were
when she smelt something burnt. She stopped∧look out of the
burning to
window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbors
found
house. She called 119 immediately. Ten minutes after, a group of
later
firemen came and put out a fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for
the
her help.
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My First English Lesson at Senior High
My first English lesson at senior high was held in Classroom 206 on the second floor of the new teaching building on September 1, 2020. Mr Zhang, my English teacher, gave us a very good lesson.
Mr Zhang spoke very beautiful and fluent English, and the lesson was very lively and interesting. We all felt what our English teacher explained in class was very clear and easy to understand. All my classmates listened attentively and took an active part in class activities.
Indeed, this was a very great lesson. I have made up my mind to study harder to learn English better in the future.
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70. him
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The day before yesterday, I went to the bookstore that is near
our schools to buy a book. It was Saturday, so there was many people.
school were
With the help of the shop assistants, I quickly got a book I needed.
the
I was about to leave while I found someone trying to steal a mans
when
money. Although I was nervous, I tried to think out of a way to help.
Suddenly, a good idea occurred∧me. I stepped on the mans foot
to
by purpose. As was expected, the mans shout scares the thief,
on scared
who quickly walked out of the shop. After hear my explanation,
hearing
the man smiled and expressed his thanks to him.
me
One possible version:
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Jin. Im outgoing and get on well with my classmates and teachers. I am skilled in organizing all kinds of activities. Id like to run for the vice president of the English club in our school. I know as the vice president, I must do the following things for the club: I will try to make it known to every student and more students involved in the activities organized by the club. Also, to improve our English and get more students interested in English, I intend to organize some activities at school like lectures and English parties and inter-school ones such as English debate competitions and speech contests. I hope all of you will vote for me.
Thank you.
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Since my childhood, libraries have played a role of great important in my life. When I was a pupil, I regarded my every one
importance
trip to the school library as an adventure. I enjoyed my stay there where I could read different kinds of book I was interested in. It was∧this
books for
reason why I decided to volunteer at a library. At first I had difficulty
that
remember where each book should be shelved and I got used to
remembering but
doing this soon. Working in the library might seem bored for most
boring
people. However, it was the useful experience for me. It has not
a
only developed my ability to read, but also help me make a contribution
helped
to society.
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Im glad to learn that you are planning to visit Sichuan with your parents in July. Im writing to offer some information.
Sichuan is a great province with a long history and wonderful cultures. There are many tourist attractions, such as Mount Qingcheng and Mount Emei. While traveling, you can experience colorful Bashu cultures. Besides, It is suggested that you go to Jiuzhaigou, which is known for its beautiful sceneries.
As for transportation, the high speed railway network is the top choice, which will make your journey comfortable and pleasant. If you want to travel around a city, shared bikes are worth using.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director or teacher of
and
Beijing Opera Theater. Most of his students are from other part of
parts
China and to come to Beijing at the very age of sixteen or seventeen.
He loves creating∧environment for his students that is more
an
relaxed than the one he used to study in. He thinks that an actor
relaxing
should relax themselves when he was performing. His students all
himself is
deep respect him and he never need to raise his voice to be heard.
deeply needs
For his opinion, excellent actors should go on performing even when
In
they feel they make a mistake in their performances.
One possible version:
We Need Advice from Older Generations
One year ago, I was in great trouble. I worked hard at English and spent most of my spare time practicing English, but I failed to pass the mid-term examination. I felt very disappointed.
So I asked my grandpa for advice when I went home. Hearing what I told him, he said that score is not everything, and we cant judge our improvement only by one examination. He encouraged me to keep on working hard and take more useful methods of learning.
I took my grandpas advice. Now my English is better than before. From my experience, I feel that we need advice from older generations.
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One afternoon my father and I go fishing by a riverside. We
went
found the water was very dirty that we could not see the bottom. We
so
also found some rubbish or dead fish flowing on the water. That
and
afternoon, my father and I caught only a smaller fish. Why∧the fish
small did
die in the river? That was because of a lot of factories along the river
always poured its waste water and rubbish into the rivers. So the water
their river
got polluting. Thus, most of the fish in the river was killed. What should
polluted were
we do now?
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Thank our school for offering us the optional courses. Im writing to tell you our opinions about them.
We students think highly of the optional courses and take an active part in them. They are so interesting and can give us a lot of chances of practice. Besides, we can learn so much knowledge out of the textbooks. All the optional courses are well received, and the computer and spoken English are the most popular courses.
In my opinion, students will benefit from such courses and we will acquire more knowledge in an interesting way. In addition, we want to have more and longer optional courses.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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Yesterday I bought a new coat in a shop, and I found it too big to
but for
me. This morning, I went to the shop and changed a coat I bought
the
yesterday. But the salesgirls treated me coldly. Firstly, she didnt admit
salesgirl
what I bought the coat in her shop. Then she said I∧made it dirty. So I
that或what had
answer that. But I did learn that his little cousin not only loved reading
my
but also enjoyed think.
thinking
One possible version:
Dear Jack,
Knowing that you were the winner of the Tang Poetry Recitation Contest held in your institute, Im so proud of you that I cant wait to write to send my congratulations to you.
As far as I know, you have been totally absorbed in your study, especially in learning Tang poetry, since you began to learn Chinese in the local Confucius Institute. In the past two years, never have you been afraid to ask your teachers for help whenever you have difficulty in learning it. Just as the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” Your efforts have paid off finally.
With such strong willpower, I believe you are sure to make greater progress both in your Chinese learning and career in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
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One day a doctor was starting his morning works. Suddenly a
work
man ran into his room. His face was red but he could only say,
and
“Quick! Quick!” The doctor thought he must∧very ill. His assistant
be
helped to have the poor man sitting in a chair. The doctor gave the
sit
man some medicine to make him to sleep. Then he looked into the
mans mouth and pull out all the bad teeth. As soon as the man
pulled
wake up, he said, “Quick, doctor. Quick!” with a low voice. “Its
woke/waked in
over now,” the doctor told her. “You dont understand, said the
him
man. “I came to tell you that your house were on fire.”
was
One possible version:
Dear Mr Zhang,
Im Li Hua, President of the Students Union of Hongxing High School. I am greatly honored to formally invite you to deliver a lecture about forming healthy habits this Saturday.
As you are a professor of health research, we would very much like you to share your views with us. As scheduled, the lecture will start at two oclock in the afternoon at the Lecture Hall of our school. After your lecture, there will be a question-and-answer period, for some students may have some problems to deal with about healthy habits.
Would it be convenient for you to come? Wed appreciate it if you could accept our invitation. If you need more detailed information, please let me know.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
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Mrs Smith was unable to fall asleep on night and was too tired
at
during the day to do anything, even the simple things that she was
used to enjoy doing. She had headaches more often, it prevented her
which
from reading or watched TV. The more she think about her conditions,
watching thought
the bad she felt. At last she went to see her doctor, whom she had
worse
known for year. The doctor listened to her heart and said, “There is
years
nothing serious wrong with you, but I accept∧fact that you dont
seriously the
feel well. Now Ill give her some medicine that will help. Come
you
tomorrow morning and tell me how you feel.”
One possible version:
Keep Away from Smoking!
It is reported that the number of teenager smokers has been on the rise in recent years.
There are several reasons why teenagers smoke. First, most teenagers begin to smoke just out of curiosity. They want to act like adults and be independent. Second, they have more spare money to buy cigarettes, and it is easy for them to get cigarettes. Third, some teenage smokers just follow their classmates or friends to smoke.
Smoking is bad for our health. And smoking is likely to distract peoples attention from their normal life. Besides, second-hand smoking does more harm to other people, especially babies!
Give up smoking! If you dont smoke, dont start.
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Im a 15-year-old Australian and Im madly about music. It is
mad
one of the most importance things in my life. I listen to music
important
whenever I can. The only time I didnt listen to music is that when Im
dont
in class. I have a MP4 player but I listen to music in the street and
so/and
in the bus to and from school. At home, I have a CD player in my
on
room and music is on all∧time. I like rock music better of all and
the best
my favorite band is Rolling Stones. And I also listen to classical music. I especially like listen to Beethoven when Im doing my
listening
homeworks. Life is like music. It must be composed by ear and feeling.
homework
One possible version:
My Favorite Music
There are many different kinds of music, such as classic, electric, country, blues, and rock & roll music. Among all these kinds of music, pop music is my favorite.
I love pop music because it is always fresh and always new. Every time I get tired of one pop song, there will always be a new one waiting for me to listen to. Also, I love dancing to pop music, which makes me feel young and energetic. Whenever I feel upset or tired, pop music will cheer me up with its beautiful rhyme and teach me how to live my life in a right way. Pop music is the soul of youth and it goes on forever.
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Jimmy started to enjoy paint at four. When he was six, he was already
painting
good at it. He painted many beautiful pictures, that were different
which
from others because he has just painted on half of the paper. “That
was very clever,” everyone said, “Nobody else do that!” And
is does
people paid a lot∧money for them, saying “This boy is going to be
of
famous when he is a little old, and then were going to sell it for a lot
older them
more money. Then we will get rich.” One day somebody asked him, “How do you only paint on the bottom half of your paper?”
Why
“Because Im small, and my brushes cant reach very highly,”
high
Jimmy said.
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
Knowing that youre interested in traditional Chinese painting, Im writing to share a piece of good news with you.
I intend to take a half-month training course on Chinese painting during this winter vacation. As scheduled, the course will start on January 15, 2021. Every morning, well start with learning some skills for about an hour, and then well be given enough time to practise them.
As for the preparation, some painting brushes and special paper are available. If possible, you can also buy some books related to Chinese painting.
What do you think of it? Would it be convenient for you to join it with me? I sincerely hope you will come. If you have further questions, please let me know.
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
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George was a clever journalist, working for∧newspaper. He
a
liked arguing. Sometimes the people he argued with were so clever
as
as he was, and often they were not. He didnt mind argue with
but arguing
stupid people because he knew they can never really understand what
could
he was saying. And that he often found what they said was very
amused. At the end of one argument, the arguer said anything that
amusing something
George always remembered and that always amused George. It was, “Well, sir, you should never forget there are always three answers of
to
every question: your answer, my answer, and the correctly answer.
correct
Do you think so?”
One possible version:
Dear Mr White,
Im Li Hua, a student from Guangming Middle School, and Im writing to ask you for help.
The English corner of our school decides to produce an English magazine for students who are fond of reading English articles and long to express their opinions in English. I have recommended myself for the chief editor to be in charge of publishing this magazine successfully.
I have drawn up a general plan. Im sending it to you with the hope that you can spare time to read it. I would appreciate it if you could give me some suggestions for the project.
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
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Last week I saw a moved movie, which was about a mother and
moving
her sons. When the child was young, his mother was such poor that
son so
she has to send him to a rich family who had no child. The boy
had
received a good education and twenty years late, he became a doctor.
later
One day he had a patient, an old lady. He didnt care much of the old
about
lady, for he could hardly afford the medical care. One evening, the
she
lady died quietly and on her bed, the doctor found a letter, in that he
which
discovered∧truth that she was his mother. He had wanted to call
the
her mother, but it was too late.
One possible version:
Dear Jack,
Im writing to tell you that Id like to invite you to attend a concert, which will be held in the Workers Stadium of our city this Sunday afternoon. A large number of famous Chinese singers will show up and sing their masterpieces there. I know you are quite interested in Chinese music and so am I. Therefore, I hope to enjoy that with you. If you want to come, we can meet at our school gate at 1:20 pm. Then well go to the Workers Stadium by bus. Please let me know your decision before this Saturday.
Looking forward to your kind reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
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Yesterday was my the best friend Li Mings birthday. When
school was over, he went to a bookshop. I bought a book naming
I named
Exploring Space for him. I knew he would be pleased with my presents. When I got to the party, Li Ming greeted me with∧big
smile. I gave the present to him but said in a low voice to him, “You
will love it.” He cant wait to open it. Suddenly the smile in his face
disappeared and I saw the title on the cover of the book what read:
Caring for Your Baby! I must have picked up the wrongly book!
One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
Eating snacks is a serious phenomenon in our school. We find many students go to the school store to buy snacks after each class. Some students even eat snacks in class.
Eating snacks is a bad habit and is also a waste of money. In addition, most snacks are unhealthy food, for they contain too much fat and sugar. Eating snacks improperly may lead to fatness and illness. What is worse, some students throw the wrappers everywhere, which pollutes our environment.
We shouldnt act like kids any more. We should develop good habits. Remember that three regular meals a day as well as a balanced diet are essential for us.
Students Union