2021年高考文体写作系列1：感谢信

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素养解读

感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件不适宜过长，只需写明感谢他人的理由即可，信文要感情真挚，措辞得体。感谢信是高考中常考的交际性应用文体之一。

感谢信一般分为三个部分：

第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因;

第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助;

第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。

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（一）常用句式

第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因;

I am writing this letter to thank you for …

I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt（adj. 衷心的） thanks to you for…

With deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express…

I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for …

I am obliged（adj.感激的） to you for/I owe you a great deal for ...…

I haven't seen you for a long time since we parted last time and I miss you very much. Thank you very much for...

第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助;

It was nice/kind/thoughtful （adj. 考虑周到的） of you to..

Thank you very much for your kind hospitality （n. 好客， 热情招待） and the honor you showed me during my visit…

It was your kind help that … （强调句型）

If it had not been for your （help/guidance/ assistance）， I wouldnt have （won the prize）（虚拟语气）

=But for/Without your help， I wouldn't have done…

第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。

Thanks again for your generous help.

I appreciate it more than I can say.

My true gratitude is beyond the words description.

I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.

Please accept my sincere thanks for your help， which I will never forget.

Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.

（二）写作模板

Dear ______，

How about your life/ study/ work Im writing to express my thanks for your _____（感谢的原因）. If it had not been your assistance in _____（对方给你的具体帮助）， I fear that I would have been_____ （没有对方帮助时的后果）.

During the ______， you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First， you _____.Whats more， you ______. There is still one thing that I cant forget. That is _______. （原因）

Thanks a lot for your kindness again. （再次致謝）

Give my best regards to ______. （祝愿）________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely，________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Li Hua

考题回放

（2020中原名校联盟联考）假定你是李华，在即将结束高中生活之际，请你给任教期满已回国的外教Peter写一封感谢信。要点如下：

1.老师在学习和生活上对你的帮助;

2.表达感激之情及祝愿。

注意：

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter，

______________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua

写作指导

审文体——感谢信;

审要点——回顾帮助，表达感激。

审时态——叙述帮助用过去时，表达祝愿用一般将来时。

审交际对象——收信人为外教Peter。

审写作要求——篇幅100词左右，可适当增加细节。

佳作赏析

Dear Peter，

As my middle-school life is coming to an end，I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you for what you have done for me during the past three years.

Without your help， I would not have achieved much in learning English last year. Moreover， you offered so much encouragement while I was in low spirits. Thanks to your help， I became more confident and spent more time reading English books. The efforts have paid off and now English is my favorite subject. Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me.

Wish you all the best.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

点评：本文是一篇感谢信的写作，文章结构清晰、要点齐备、行文连贯、时态准确、语言得体、体现了作者扎实的语言基本功。文章使用without引导的含蓄虚拟语气、be in low spirits、pay off，以及各类从句，如what引导的宾语从句（what you have done for me during the past three years.）和while引导的时间状语从句（while I was in low spirits），增加了文章的得分点。

另外，文章的交际性非常明确，“Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me.”一句尤为情真意切，体现了良好的交际策略。

写作评估

13 questions for self-checking for my writing

Items

Yes or no

Why

How to improve

1. Did I make my position clear at the beginning of my letter

2. Did I put my reasons in a logical order with the strongest argument in the end

3. Who is my reader Will my arguments be convincing to him or her

4. Did I grab my reader's attention at the beginning of my letter and end with an effective conclusion

5. Did I include enough facts to support my reasons

6. Did I vary my sentences so they fit together well

7. Did I use opinion words to express my views and sway my audience

8. Did I use correct capitalization for proper nouns

9. Did I proofread for correct letter punctuation and form

10. Did I stick to my topic If not， why not

11. Did I give my audience adequate information

12. Were the ideas in an order that makes sense

13. Did I correct all errors

再試锋芒

（2019浙江卷）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示感谢;

2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;

3.临别祝愿。

注意：

1.词数80左右;

2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Alex，

______________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua