短文改错专题练习

吴玉婷 何冰清 解光琼等

短文改錯（共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

（一）

One day， I went to the Botanical Garden. When I walked along the road admired the flowers， I caught sight of two girls which were picking the flowers. I thought it wrong for them to do that. Without hesitate， I immediately asked them to stop. I was told them that we should protect these flowers in the gardens. I also explained that there would be no flowers left if someone picked the flowers like them. Then， they agreed to me， and promised that they wont do it again. Well， two girls were taking photos when I left here.

（华南师范大学附属中学 吴玉婷）

（二）

Zhang Zheng is my male god， who is a outgoing boy. He had a good command of English. When I find that difficult to convey my feelings with English， I always turn to him. He is very helpful and rely. Yesterday he made a speech under the flag， which theme is “English can accomplish our future”. After school I had a bunch of flowers delivering to him for his wonderful performance. He was so much thankful that he treated me a big meal. We encouraged each other to work hard in preparations for going to a key university.

（河南省渑池县第二高级中学 何冰清）

（三）

In the modern world， it is important to be well-informed. Success in many fields depend on getting the late information. At the same time， failure in policy-making often results from the lack of the necessary information. There are many ways of get information. First， we read newspaper and magazines. Second， we listen the news on the radio and watch them on television. Third， we surf the Internet for variously kinds of the information. As far as the role of information in the future is concerned， it is believed what information will play a more or more important part in the future.

（广东省韶关市曲仁中学 黄国华）

（四）

Recently， Tai Chi has became more and more popularer around the country. It is not only a ancient martial art， but has also been wide acknowledged as an effective health exercise. Famous for their graceful and well-balanced movement， Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are essential in our modern stressful life. Besides， if you want to learn Tai Chi ， you can contact with me. Im convinced that I can recommend the best school and best trainer in our city for you， for my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited instruct others all over the country. Remember， my number is 010-123456789

（广东省普宁市第二中学 陈棉俊）

（五）

This morning when I am taking a walk in the park， I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the city. This was first time that I had seen a foreigner. I wanted to talk with him， but I was such excited and nervously that I didnt know what to do and how to start a conversation. Eager to practise my speaking English， I encouraged myself but went to say hello to him. He was very much friendly. As a native， I introduced some tourist attractions and tasty foods to him. Finally， he gave us some advice in how to improve my English. It was more than an experience！

（湖南省洞口县创新实验学校 刘淼梅）

（六）

Today the teacher had a talk with me. He asked me to take the charge of the class wall newspaper and asked me about his plan for running it. I thought an honour to be appointed as the editor of the wall newspaper， and I was confidently I could do a good job. But I gladly accepted the job， and promise to tell him my plan in detail tomorrow. Now I have decided that I will invite any of my good friends to joining in the designing of the wall newspaper. Everyone will be encouraged to express their opinion on running it and to write articles about it.

（广东省汕头市第一中学 黄少芳）

（七）

Nowadays， many young people like to stay up， because there are a lot of night activities attract them. These young people work in the office in the daytime， so they need to hang out and find any fun at night， which lead to staying up. Recently， a 26-year-old girl was diagnosed with（被诊断患有）cancer. While she got to know it， she just couldnt believe it， thinking that the fate must play jokes with her. I started to take a look back at her past days. She overworked or always stayed up. How regret she was. If giving another chance， she would not stay up.

（廣东省普宁市华美实验学校 陈碎仍）

（八）

Dongdong is only five years old. He is old enough to go to school， and has to learn a lot every day. His parents is very strict with him， expect him to become a famous person in the future. He is busy with working all day， as a grown-up. Early in the morning his father taught him English. After breakfast he learns to play piano. Although he is a child， he has to practice playing the piano again and again until her mother feels satisfy . In the afternoon his father takes him to an art school to learn how to draw picture.

（广东省韶关市曲仁中学 黄国华）

（九）

Last weekend， I went camping with Jane. As we were making fire and putting off the tent at dusk， we suddenly hear a scream. Followed the sound， we found a girl， whose right leg was bleeding， lying on the ground and crying painful. I brought my first-aid box there immediately， took out clean towel and pressed the girls wound with it. A few minute later， it stopped bleeding. Then， I helped him wash the wound.

The girl was grateful for which I had done and insisted that she would visit my house after recovering. Meanwhile， I felt joyful and content because of I had helped someone in need.

（广东省佛山市南海执信中学 黄欣欣）

（十）

Something did wrong last weekend. After having breakfast， I decided to some funs with my new bicycle. My parents told me not ride them on the road but I didnt listen. I was enjoying myself while I saw a car running for me. I wanted to move to the road side but I lose my balance. Before I knew that what was happening， the car threw me several meters away. When I woke up， I was in the hospital. My mother held my hands， told me that I was bad injured in the accident. This taught me huge lesson.

（安徽省合肥潤安公学 解光琼）

（十一）

Dear Ms.Chen，

Im Li Hua， a student from Class 2， Grade 3. Im writing to apply the position as a student volunteer.

I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because that I want to improve my organizational skills， communication skills as well as my confidences in speaking English in public. As a outgoing girl， I got along well with my classmates. Beside， I have such a good command of English that I am electing as assistant to my English teacher.

I am sure that I can perfect live up to my expectations. I will be grateful whether you could give me a kind consideration.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

（广东省深圳市福田区梅林中学 刘 璐）

（十二）

It was a fine day last Saturday. However， our class organize a trip to the Central Park on that day. In the park， there were so many peoples. It was very crowded that we soon couldnt catch up our monitor，our organizer and guide. About 15 minutes late， we found him finally. He told us that he was helped the cleaning workers clean the park. Some people didnt pay enough attention to our own behaviour， throwing away rubbish here and there， that made the park very dirty. We all felt proud of him. After a simple lunch， we went to home with a happy heart.

（广东省云浮市新兴一中 肖世奇）

（十三）

During the Three Kingdoms Period， someone presents Caocao with a huge elephant. He was wondered how heavy it was and asked his officials about them. However， nobody could come up to a practical idea. Caochong， which was only 6 years old then， suggested taking the elephant onto a boat in the river and made a mark on the boat where the water level was. Then he told people to carry stone onto the boat until it sank down to same level. Weighing the stones， he knew the weight of the elephant. Caocao praised him for his wise and said none of his men were bright than him.

（安徽省合肥润安公学 解光琼）

（十四）

Dear Sir，

Im writing to ask for a chance to be one of the host families for the British students.

The following is my reasons. First， we own a big house and a private car， which makes it conveniently for the British students to go to school and back home. In addition， I am good at English and our parents are both English teachers. I believe that there will be no problems in our conversation. More importantly， my family had hosted two American students last year. However， we have experience in looking for the students. We are sure that we could offer a pretty good condition to them.

I would appreciate if you could agree with my application.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

（廣东省罗定中学 李再廷）

（十五）

Dear Sir or Madam，

Im Li Hua. Knowing that our school newspaper is advertising for an English editor， I show great interest in them. Thus， I am written to apply for the position.

I have been learning English for over a decades， having good command of English. I once attended an English Writing Competition and win first place. Whats more， I have received some relevant professional training but I would like to put that I have learned into practice. If I win the position， I will spare no effort to serve for the students.

I would appreciate it if my application could be serious considered. Looking forward for your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

（广东省汕头市下蓬中学 罗丽雯）

（十六）

I like watching movies very much and I think watching English movies is a effective method of learning English. Last year， I joined in the English Club in our school， which benefit me a lot. The club were made up of twenty students， most of which were interested in English. They watched ten original English movies， includes the classic Casablanca， Rebecca， A Tale of Two Cities and so on. We watched each of the film several times until we full understood them. By now， I find that I have nearly become fluent as a native English speaker.

（广东省深圳市梅林中学 王小琴）

（十七）

Wednesday， June 12， Sunny

Last Sunday afternoon， some of my best friend and I went to play football in the open ground inside our neighborhood. We really had a good time play football！ Suddenly I kicked the ball so hard that it fly at a window. It was unfortunate that the window was broken！An angrily woman looked out of a window， shouting at us. We were all too frightening！She came to us and asked whom did that. I hurried to said sorry to her. The woman forgave him and told us not to play football around in next time. What bad day！

（广东省吴川市第三中学 李华军）

（十八）

Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safely at school is especially important to us students. First， we should take care not to get themselves injured while we are having sports. Second， there are too much students at school， and our hallways is too narrow. So dont crowded with each other especially when we go to upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be a accident. Besides， we should friendly and get on well with others， dont quarrel or even fight. Last but not least， we should be careful to eat health food and keep away from junk food， that is harmful to our health.

（广东省吴川市第三中学 李华军）

（十九）

Reading is very important. We can get knowledges through reading. It can not only opens our minds， but also make us cleverer or happier. Our study can be improved if you read more good books. The more we read， the more we learn， and the bright our future will become.

However， some students spend time watching the TV or going on line to play games. It takes many of their spare time. On my opinion， everyone should read more books， especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese tradition culture to the world.

（廣东省吴川市第三中学 李华军）

（二十）

It is known that a outstanding student is popular with all people. However， how to be outstanding is still puzzled among some students. My viewpoints is as follows.

First， we must learn to behave well， follow the school rules or obey the laws. Secondly， we should form the habit of be punctual. No matter what do， we should do it well and on time. Thirdly， studying hard to gain high marks is which we try to pursue to go on to university.

From all the above， I believe that if we do well in these aspect， we are sure to become outstanding students！

（广东省吴川市第三中学 李华军）

（二十一）

Of all the subject， I like Chinese best because I have/＼ excellent Chinese teacher， Ms Sun. She has been taught us for only three months， but she is thinking highly of by all the students.

Ms Sun is 36 years old and she is neither tall nor short. She is always the last to leaving her office. She always tries to make her classes interest and lively but we are getting on well with each other. On the other hand， she is very strict in us in our studies， which make our Chinese improved. We all think of that she is the best teacher we have met in the school.

（湖南省衡南县第三中学 资 娟）

（二十二）

Dear David，

Hearing that you lacked friends at the moment， I feel terrible sorry. I would like to give you some suggestions on how to make friend and get rid of loneliness.

Since you can perfectly give a speech in the public， why not joining the debate team in your school？ Obviously， we will meet many schoolmates who have the same interests with you there. Besides， you can join the school drama club which you will encouraged to communicate with others .

I hope you can get out from the trouble ， and I am convinced that you will have some friends soon.

（廣西南宁市第二中学 周黎红）

（二十三）

Dear Peter，

Glad to accept your letter asking for details about my school library.

The library， surrounded by green trees， is behind our classroom building， and in the front of it is a beautiful garden. Walk into it， you will find rows of bookshelf. All the books， newspapers and magazines are placing neatly. Besides， we students can find we are interested in easily. Everyone can borrow up to 5 books at a time and keep it for a month. The library is open from 8 a.m. to 7 p.m. on weekdays. It is real home to all book lovers. I like it very much.

Yours，

Li Hua

（广西南宁市第二中学 赵代玲）

（二十四）

With the entrance exam comes near， how to release pressure is a big concern. My opinions are as follows.

As we know， proper pressure can make difference to our studies， while feel much too stressed will lead to failure. Personal， when Im faced with pressure， I am always turn to teachers for help. After all， its heart-to-heart talks which can relax us. Moreover， doing exercises is a good choice to rid ourselves of the heavy pressure. Not only can it help us keep fit， and also help us feel at ease.

I firmly believe that only when we deal with our pressure well can we make progress on our studies.

（广西南宁市第二中学 叶冬琳）

（二十五）

Dear Max，

I am Li Hua. Im writing to inviting you to this years Dragon Boat Race series. The race series takes place from the 25th to 30th May in Shenzhen.

I know you have a great interest to Chinese culture. So your participation would be of great valuable to you. It will allow you to experience one of Chinas most important traditional festival， commemorating（纪念） an important figure from your history. Youll also enjoy the many colourfully activities and delicious foods that is part of the festival.

If you can come， please reply before 15th April， we can prepare. I look forward to your response.

Yours，

Li Hua

（广东省深圳科学高中 方 钊）

（二十六）

Hows anything with you？ I have been thought of you since you returned home the last year. You know， my English used to be poor， which make me worried and helpless. Otherwise， things began to change when you came to teach us. It was with your encouragement or help that I improved my English little with little. Now I have caught up with other. That is why Im so gratefully to you. I hope you can have a chance work in China in the future so that I can meet you again.

（廣东省中山市第二中学 刘海谊）

（二十七）

Some day I was shopping at a supermarket with my five-year-old son， Tony. We were about to leave while we found that an elderly lady had fell over at the entrance minutes earlier. Fortunately， many peoples stopped to help her.

Saw a flower stall nearby， my son asked me whether he could sell the lady a flower to make her feel better. I was glad with Tonys sweetly idea. To our delight， the flower seller offered us the flower for free after hearing we said.

Tony gave the flower to the lady and was comforted her. The elderly lady looked at Tony with love in his eyes and gave him a grateful smile.

（四川省会理第一中学 何 超）

（二十八）

It is often said that if you are in Beijing， there are two things we must do. One is to climb the Great Wall， but the other is eat Peking Duck. The origin of the Peking Duck dates back in the Ming Dynasty. Cookers from all over China travel to the capital to cook for the Emperor. However， many of the recipes for such“foods of the Emperor” were later spreaded out of the kitchen secret. With the fall of the Qing Dynasty in 1911， court chefs who left the Forbidden City set up restaurant around Beijing and brought Peking Duck and the other delicious dishes to the masses.

（福建省漳州实验中学 张明辉）

（二十九）

I had great time throughout my May Day Holiday. On Monday， I went BBQ with my classmates whom threw a celebration party. Everybody was exciting about the holiday. I eat a lot of delicious food at that time.

On Tuesday， I went to visit my uncles family with my parents. We went to celebrate our good time at a very much fancy restaurant in Shanghai. Late that day， we sang karaoke in my uncle house. From Wednesday on， I started to do our homework. Which was the end of it.

All in all， I enjoyed my May Day Holiday at many ways.

（广东省深圳市梅林中学 宋 越）

（三十）

Dear Prof. Green，

I am Li Hua， high school student from China. Im writing to know whether it is possibly for you to give me some advices on how to choose a major in your university.

After graduation， Id like to go to America for farther study. While I am surfing the Internet， I am totally interesting in your field or subject. Therefore， I decided to apply for your university and study in your field. Besides， I know little about the major. As you are experienced in this field， could you give in some suggestions to me？

I am looking forward to you early reply.

（广东省深圳市光明新区高级中学 何美容）

（三十一）

From my point of view， nothing is much important than to receive education. The magic of education can make a person intelligence， smart， and reasonable. Physics and chemistry can be help you to understanding the world. Math can help you to be smart but train your brain. Art， IT， and painting can help you to learn some important skill in tomorrows world. Language can help you to communicate others. So the reason why we study at school for so a long time is because every subject is useful. You will understand no subject you are taking is a waste of our time.

（河南省淮阳县淮阳一中 查晓娟）

（三十二）

I am quite disturbing these days as I have a disagreement with my parent over my career choice. I have always dreamed of being tourist guide， that will offer me great opportunities to broaden my horizons and enrich my experience. Therefore， my parents hope that I should go in for professions with a security income and stable life like teachers or doctors. Is it better to obey with my parents and take a career that 1 dont enjoy but guarantee long-term stability？ Or should I go against your parents will and pursuit a career that bring me happiness and satisfaction？ What would you did if you were in my position？

（广东省韶关市曲仁中学 黄晓华）

（三十三）

Dear Peter，

Id like to offer my congratulation to you on yours receiving the first prize of “Chinese Bridge”Chinese speech contest.

I know you were not well at Chinese at the first. However， you practiced speak Chinese every day. As the saying goes，“Everything came to him who waits”. To my opinion， this match is too difficult for a foreigner， but Im surprised that you became the champion. If you go on studying Chinese even hard， you will have the opportunity to study in China. At last， I hope to see you and communicate each other.

Sincere congratulations to you again.

Yours，

Li Hua

（湖北省十堰市鄖阳中学 汪艳兵）

（三十四）

I have learned that you eager to learn more about Chinese culture. Here are some learning resources to share with you.

Newspapers are suitable for you to study the language. They contain correct words and grammar， that is of great benefit for your reading and writing. In an addition， reading magazines is also a greatly choice. Articles in magazines provides much information about Chinese culture， enabling you to understand this country farther. Besides， we can listen to Chinese songs as well as chat with native speakers.

I hope my advices can help. It is out of question that youll know Chinese culture better， for you are so smart or hardworking.

（徐丽红）

（三十五）

Im Li hua， one of your student in Oral English class. I was writing to seek help from you.

Im from the countryside that teachers dont speak much English in class. That is because I am not good at listening or speaking. Now I find really hard to follow you in class. I hope you can recommend some listen materials to me such that I can improve my listening after class. Besides， could I practice speaking with you for half a hour at weekends at your convenience time？ I think it can help improve my spoken English.

I would be grateful if you could lend to me a helping hand.

（廣东省中山市第二中学 温朝发）

（三十六）

I am writing to inform you of my plan on the next lesson. As usually， we will have our lesson in your dormitory in Sunday. I have to change time for the lesson from morning to afternoon for some personal affairs. Last lesson， when you learnt how to grasp a writing brush and how to control them freely， but the content of the next lesson is to know some basic strokes（笔画） of Chinese characters， that are the foundation of Calligraphy of China. Prepared for the lesson， you should have a Chinese writing brush and some rice papers.

Contacted me if you have problems with my arrangement.

（陕西师范大学附属中学 王宝花）

（三十七）

The Mid-autumn Festival， which is one of most important traditional festivals in China， fall on August 15th of the lunar calendar ever year. Not only is it popular in China， but it is also celebrating in many other Asian country. People believe that the moon is a symbol of family reunion， lucky and fortune. But it is a custom to express best wishes to the beloved ones in this particular time. On that day， people usually go back to home to have family reunion， enjoying a large meal with our family. They will also eat moon cakes， that are round cakes with meat， eggs， nuts and other things inside.

（广西南宁市第二中学 金珊珊）

（三十八）

I am writing to tell you what I have learned about Chinese customs from my excited exchange to China. Well， the Chinese is extremely welcoming. One evening， I was invited with a Chinese family dinner. I had good appetite and the food was yummy. At dinner， my host kept on put more food in his rice bowl. He didnt seem to hear me saying“No， thank you”in my poor speaking Chinese. This was a very specially experience I have had in China. In my culture， you dont get more food if you dont ask for much.

（河南省睢縣高级中学 李 明）

（三十九）

On the summer holiday， I went to visit my grandparents by bus. At a bus stop， a woman got on with baby in her arms. There was no seats left on the bus， so she had to stand. When I was hesitating about if to give my seat to her， a little boy stood up and made rooms for her. She thanked the little boy very much and all the passengers admire what the little boy had done. In shameful， I lowered my head. From it， I have learnt we should do our best to help people in their need. If everyone lends a help hand， the world will become very more beautiful！

（广东省化州市实验中学 陈龙玉）

（四十）

I love my grandmother. It is very kind for her. She used live in the countryside but now she lives with our family. Tomorrow is her birthday but I want to give her something specially. I have made a photo album in that her photos are collected. There are 20 pages in it， included some photos going with the years. The front page has the word“A gift of love for my grandma 2017”. On the back of the album is one of hers large photos. I have been brought it to be decorated in a gift shop. I think she must loved the birthday gift.

（广东省东莞市东华高级中学 梁冬萍）

（四十一）

Yesterday， we had great fun. We participated in a competition of Tang poems at hall of our school on March 28. The competition enjoyed greatly popularity among us students. It was hold in an attempt to not only enrich our campus（校园）life but greatly motivate in our passion for Tang poems. There were a great variety of interesting so well as exciting activity in the competition. We all fall in love with the competition. We true valued the chance to appreciate the beauty or essence（精华）of our culture from this competition. I all looked forward to the next competition of Tang poems.

（四十二）

Tony is a brave teenager and likes to help others. On Friday evening， Tony was on his way to home. Suddenly， he saw that a man pass him， running quickly with a bag. Then， a woman appeared. She was out of breath but she failed to move any more. Seeing this circumstance， Tony instantly realized which happened. He turned around and rapidly caught up with the man. He struck him violently. Then the man was knocked down. However， a crowd of people came around suddenly and tried to stop Tony. Some of us held camera. Gradual， Tony realized they were just shoot a film. Tony was very embarrassing at that moment.

（四十三）

Not all the people like to go to college. When I am a child， I always dreamt going to the college. I considered the college as a interesting place. So I thought they would bring a lot of funs to me. Now I become a student of Shenzhen University and I do enjoy studying there. In our school， therere lots of clubs what can satisfy the needs of students. I join in the tennis club and manage to keep fit by play tennis every week. Because I have many available time in the college， so I can do some other exercise for one and a half hours every day.

（四十四）

Yesterday was the Childrens Day. The Students Union of our school organize a visit to the orphanage（孤兒院）. Before set off， we prepared some presents， including in toys， books and so on. On our arrive， we were divided into three groups. Some of us made cakes and breads with the children. Some put on interesting performances， that cheered the children up. Other did some cleaning in yard of the orphanage. In my view， the activity was really enjoyable and meaning. Admitted， it is significant for us to do a good deal and make contributions to the society.

（四十五）

Last week， we went to the Guangming Farm. Having reached at the farm， we began to prepare lunch. We had ever cooked before， so we were exciting to have a try. We collected wood， making a fire and cooked. Soon， our lunch was ready. Eating the dishes cooked by ourselves， we felt proud and happily. After lunch， we got involved in planting trees. Some dug holes while others planted trees and watered it. Seen the trees， we felt we had done something of great values for the environment. It was unforgettable experience， that gave us a good opportunity to be independent and raise our awareness of environmental protection.

（四十六）

Yesterday， I went to visit the museum downtown with my friends. We met at the school gate at 8 oclock in the morning， but we went here by bus 301. In the museum， we saw many a gorgeous calligraphy works， that were created by masters in ancient China. Also， we appreciate fantastic Chinese paintings of natural beauty. We all had a good time there and gained some knowledges of our tradition culture. I think the visit on the museum had deepened my interest in Chinese culture. Thus， from then on， I read more and more related books to learning more about.

（广东省深圳市新安中学高中部 雷康成 符曼静）

（四十七）

Dear Mary，

I am sorry to hear that you are deeply depressed（沮丧） recently due to fail in the interview of the broadcast station in your school. I can understand that you are feeling now. It is rather disappointed to fail in an important interview， which you devoted a long time to it. But one failure doesnt meant that you are not excellent. Actual， you are an intelligent girl.

You are supposed to have a positive attitude at the failure， taking advantage of this chance to learn about some interview skill. Besides， youd better reflect on your mistake after the interview so that you will be much experienced than before.

I hope you will happy again.

Yours，

Li Hua

（四十八）

This afternoon when I was on my way to home from school， I found a building on fire. I called the firefighters at once. Several minute later， the firefighters arrived and tried their best to control the fire. With the help of the firefighters， a lot of people leave the building safely. At that time the foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters anything. But they couldnt understand how she said. I went to the woman or asked her what was happening. She told me that daughter was still in the building. Hearing that， the firefighters immediate ran into the building and rushed out with the cried girl. The woman was very thankful to me and the firefighters for the help.

（四十九）

My classmates and I took part in a voluntary activity on the International Volunteer Day. We have a meeting to discuss what to do before an activity. Our monitor suggested giving directions to those who got lost， and everyone agreed. In the morning of December 5th， we came to the crossroads near our school， making carefully preparations. Some were hanging up banners， while other were putting maps in order. For the whole day we was offered help to those who lost their way， tell them how to reach their destinations. They were all satisfied and praised us for we did. Times passed quickly. At 5 oclock， we finished our voluntary activity but said goodbye to each other.

（廣东省吴川市第三中学 李华军）

参考答案

（一）

One day， I went to the Botanical Garden. When I walked along the road admired the flowers， I caught sight of two girls which were picking the flowers. I thought it wrong for them to do that. Without hesitate， I immediately asked them to stop. I was told them that we should protect these flowers in the gardens. I also explained that there would be no flowers left if someone picked the flowers like them. Then， they agreed to me， and promised that they wont do it again. Well， ∧two girls were taking photos when I left here.

（二）

Zhang Zheng is my male god， who is a outgoing boy. He had a good command of English. When I find that difficult to convey my feelings with English， I always turn to him. He is very helpful and rely. Yesterday he made a speech under the flag， which theme is“English can accomplish our future”. After school I had a bunch of flowers delivering to him for his wonderful performance. He was so much thankful that he treated me∧a big meal. We encouraged each other to work hard in preparations for going to a key university.

（三）

In the modern world， it is important to be well-informed. Success in many fields depend on getting the late information. At the same time， failure in policy-making often results from the lack of the necessary information. There are many ways of get information. First， we read newspaper and magazines. Second， we listen∧ the news on the radio and watch them on television. Third， we surf the Internet for variously kinds of the information. As far as the role of information in the future is concerned， it is believed what information will play a more or more important part in the future.

（四）

Recently， Tai Chi has became more and more popularer around the country. It is not only a ancient art， but has also been wide acknowledged as an effective health exercise. Famous for their graceful and well-balanced movement， Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are essential in our modern stressful life. Besides，if you want to learn Tai Chi， you can contact with me . Im convinced that I can recommend the best school and best trainer in our city for you， for my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited∧ instruct others all over the country. Remember， my number is 010-123456789.

（五）

This morning when I am taking a walk in the park， I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the city. This was∧ first time that I had seen a foreigner. I wanted to talk with him， but I was such excited and nervously that I didnt know what to do and how to start a conversation. Eager to practise my speaking English， I encouraged myself but went to say hello to him. He was very much friendly. As a native， I introduced some tourist attractions and tasty foods to him. Finally， he gave us some advice in how to improve my English. It was more than an experience！

（六）

Today the teacher had a talk with me. He asked me to take the charge of the class wall newspaper and asked me about his plan for running it. I thought∧an honour to be appointed as the editor of the wall newspaper， and I was confidently I could do a good job. But I gladly accepted the job， and promise to tell him my plan in detail tomorrow. Now I have decided that I will invite any of my good friends to joining in the designing of the wall newspaper. Everyone will be encouraged to express their opinion on running it and to write articles about it.

（七）

Nowadays， many young people like to stay up， because there are a lot of night activities ∧attract them. These young people work in the office in the daytime， so they need to go out and find any fun at night， which lead to stay up. Recently， a 26-year-old girl was diagnosed with cancer. While she got to know it， she just couldnt believe it. He thought that the fate must play jokes with her. He started to take a look back at her past days. She overworked or always stayed up. How regret she was. If giving another chance， she would not stay up.

（八）

Dongdong is only five years old. He is old enough to go to school， and has to learn a lot every day. His parents is very strict with him， expect him to become a famous person in the future. He is busy with working all day， as a grown-up. Early in the morning his father taught him English. After breakfast he learns to play ∧piano. Although he is a child， he has to practice playing the piano again and again until her mother feels satisfy. In the afternoon his father takes him to an art school to learn how to draw picture.

（九）

Last weekend， I went camping with Jane. As we were making fire and putting off the tent at dusk， we suddenly hear a scream. Followed the sound， we found a girl， whose right leg was bleeding， lying on the ground and crying painful. I brought my first-aid box there immediately， took out∧ clean towel and pressed the girls wound with it. A few minute later， it stopped bleeding. Then， I helped him wash the wound. The girl was grateful for which I had done and insisted that she would visit my house after recovering. Meanwhile， I felt joyful and content because of I had helped someone in need.

（十）

Something did wrong last weekend. After having breakfast， I decided to have some funs with my new bicycle. My parents told me not to ride them on the road but I didnt listen. I was enjoying myself while I saw a car running for me. I wanted to move to the road side but I lose my balance. Before I knew that what was happening， the car threw me several meters away. When I woke up， I was in the hospital. My mother held my hands， told me that I was bad injured in the accident. This taught me ∧ huge lesson.

（十一）

Dear Ms. Chen，

Im Li Hua， a student from Class 2， Grade 3. Im writing to apply∧the position as a student volunteer. I want to obtain this precious opportunity because that I want to improve my organizational skills， communication skills as well as my confidences in speaking English in public. As a outgoing girl， I got along well with my classmates. Beside， I have such a good command of English that I am electing as assistant to my English teacher.

I am sure that I can perfect live up to my expectations. I will be grateful whether you could give me a kind consideration.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

（十二）

It was a fine day last Saturday. However， our class organize a trip to the Central Park on that day. In the park， there were so many peoples. It was very crowded that we soon couldnt catch up∧our monitor， our organizer and guide. About 15 minutes late， we found him finally. He told us that he was helped the cleaning workers clean the park. Some people didnt pay enough attention to our own behaviour， throwing away rubbish here and there， that made the park very dirty. We all felt proud of him. After a simple lunch， we went to home with a happy heart.

（十三）

During the Three Kingdoms Period， someone presents Caocao with a huge elephant. He was wondered how heavy it was and asked his officials about them. However， nobody could come up to a practical idea. Caochong， which was only 6 years old then， suggested taking the elephant onto a boat in the river and made a mark on the boat where the water level was. Then he told people to carry stone onto the boat until it sank down to ∧same level. Weighing the stones， he knew the weight of the elephant. Caocao praised him for his wise and said none of his men were bright than him.

（十四）

Dear Sir，

Im writing to ask for a chance to be one of the host families for the British students.

The following is my reasons. First， we own a big house and the private car， which makes it conveniently for the British students to go to school and back home. In addition， I am good at English and our parents are both English teachers. I believe that there will be no problems in our conversation. More importantly， my family had hosted two American students last year. However， we have experience in looking for the students. We are sure that we could offer a pretty good condition to them.

I would appreciate ∧ if you could agree with my application.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

（十五）

Dear Sir or Madam，

Im Li Hua. Knowing that our school newspaper is advertising for an English editor， I show great interest in them. Thus， I am written to apply for the position. I have been learning English for over a decades， having ∧good command of English. I once attended an English Writing Competition and win first place. Whats more， I have received some relevant professional training but I would like to put that I have learned into practice. If I win the position， I will spare no effort to serve for the students.

I would appreciate it if my application could be serious considered. Looking forward for your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

（十六）

I like watching movies very much and I think watching English movies is a effective method of learning English. Last year， I joined in the English Club in our school， which benefit me a lot. The club were made up of twenty students， most of us were interested in English. They watched ten original English movies， includes the classic Casablanca， Rebecca， A Tale of Two Cities and so on. We watched each of the film several times until we full understood them. By now， I find that I have nearly become ∧ fluent as a native English speaker.

（十七）

Wednesday， June 12， Sunny

Last Sunday afternoon， some of my best friend and I went to play football in the open ground inside our neighborhood. We really had a good time play football！ Suddenly I kicked the ball so hard that it fly at a window. It was unfortunate that the window was broken！An angrily woman looked out of a window， shouting at us. We were all too frightening！She came to us and asked whom did that. I hurried to said sorry to her. The woman forgave him and told us not to play football around in next time. What ∧ bad day！

（十八）

Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safely at school is especially important to us students. First， we should take care not to get themselves injured while we are having sports. Second， there are too much students at school， and our hallways is too narrow. So dont crowded with each other especially when we go to upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be a accident. Besides， we should ∧friendly and get on well with others， dont quarrel or even fight. Last but not least， we should be careful to eat health food and keep away from junk food， that is harmful to our health.

（十九）

Reading is very important. We can get knowledges through reading. It can not only opens our minds， but also make us cleverer or happier. Our study can be improved if you read more good books. The more we read， the more we ∧ learn， and the bright our future will become. However， some students spend time watching the TV or going on line to play games. It takes many of their spare time. On my opinion， everyone should read more books， especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese tradition culture to the world.

（二十）

It is known that a outstanding student is popular with all people. However， how to be outstanding is still puzzled among some students. My viewpoints is as follows. First， we must learn to behave well， follow the school rules or obey the laws. Secondly， we should form the habit of be punctual. No matter what∧do， we should do it well and on time. Thirdly， studying hard to gain high marks is which we try to pursue to go on to university. From all the above， I believe that if we do well in these aspect， we are sure to become outstanding students！

（二十一）

Of all the subject， I like Chinese best because I have /＼ excellent Chinese teacher， Ms Sun. She has been taught us for only three months， but she is thinking highly of by all the students.

Ms Sun is 36 years old and she is neither tall nor short. She is always the last to leaving her office. She always tries to make her classes interest and lively but we are getting on well with each other. On the other hand， she is very strict in us in our studies， which make our Chinese improved. We all think that she is the best teacher we have met in the school.

（二十二）

Hearing that you lacked friends at the moment， I feel terrible sorry. I would like to give you some suggestions on how to make friend and get rid of loneliness.

Since you can perfectly give a speech in the public， why not joining the debate team in your school？ Obviously， we will meet many schoolmates who have the same interests with you there. Besides， you can join the school drama club which you will ∧encouraged to communicate with others.

I hope you can get out from the trouble， and I am convinced that you will have some friends.

（二十三）

Dear Peter，

Glad to receive your letter asking for details about my school library. Let me tell you about it. The library， surrounded by green trees， are behind our classroom building， and in the front of it is a beautiful garden. Walk into it， you will find rows of bookshelf. All the books， newspapers and magazines are placing neatly. Besides， we students can find ∧we are interested in easily. Everyone can borrow up to 5 books at a time and keep it for a month. The library is open from 8 a.m.to 7 p.m. in weekdays. It is real home to all book lovers. I like it very much.

Yours，

Li Hua

（二十四）

With the entrance exam comes near， how to release pressure is a big concern. My opinions are as follows.

As we know， proper pressure can make∧difference to our studies， while feel much too stressed will lead to failure. Personal， when Im faced with pressure， I am always turn to my teachers for help. After all， its heart-to-heart talks which can relax us. Moreover， doing exercises is a good choice to rid ourselves of the heavy pressure. Not only can it help us keep fit， and also help us feel at ease.

I firmly believe that only when we deal with our pressure well can we make progress on our studies.

（二十五）

Dear Max，

I am Li Hua. Im writing to inviting you to this years Dragon Boat Race series. The race series takes place from the 25th to 30th May in Shenzhen.

I know you have a great interest to Chinese culture. So your participation would be of great valuable to you. It will allow you to experience one of Chinas most important traditional festival， commemorating an important figure from your history. Youll also enjoy the many colourfully activities and delicious foods that is part of the festival.

If you can come， please reply before 15th April， ∧we can prepare. I look forward to your response.

Yours，

Li Hua

（二十六）

Hows anything with you？ I have been thought of you since you returned home the last year. You know， my English used to be poor， which make me worried and helpless. Otherwise， things began to change when you came to teach us. It was with your encouragement or help that I improved my English little with little. Now I have caught up with other. That is why Im so gratefully to you. I hope you can have a chance∧ work in China in the future so that I can meet you again.

（二十七）

Some day I was shopping at a supermarket with my five-year-old son， Tony. We were about to leave while we found that an elderly lady had fell over at the entrance minutes earlier.Fortunately， many peoples stopped to help her.

Saw a flower stall nearby， my son asked me whether he could sell the lady a flower to make her feel better. I was glad with Tonys a sweetly idea. To our delight， the flower seller offered us the flower for free after hearing ∧we said.

Tony gave the flower to the lady and was comforted her. The elderly lady looked at Tony with love in his eyes and gave him a grateful smile.

（二十八）

It is often said that if you are in Beijing， there are two things we must do. One is to climb the Great Wall， but the other is ∧ eat Peking Duck. The origin of the Peking Duck dates back in the Ming Dynasty. Cookers from all over China travel to the capital to cook for the Emperor. However， many of the recipes for such“foods of the Emperor”were later spreaded out of the kitchen secret. With the fall of the Qing Dynasty in 1911， court chefs who left the Forbidden City set up restaurant around Beijing and brought Peking Duck and the other delicious dishes to the masses.

（二十九）

I had ∧great time throughout my May Day Holiday. On Monday， I went BBQ with my classmates whom threw a celebration party. Everybody was exciting about the holiday. I eat a lot of delicious food at that time.

On Tuesday， I went to visit my uncles family with my parents. We went to celebrate our good time at a very much fancy restaurant in Shanghai. Late that day， we sang karaoke in my uncle house. From Wednesday on， I started to do our homework.Which was the end of it.

All in all， I enjoyed my May Day Holiday at many ways.

（三十）

Dear Prof. Green，

I am Li Hua， high∧school student from China. Im writing to know whether it is possibly for you to give me some advices on how to choose a major in your university.

After graduation， Id like to go to America for farther study. While I am surfing the Internet， I am totally interesting in your field or subject. Therefore， I decided to apply for your university and study in your field. Besides， I know little about the major. As you are experienced in this field， could you give in some suggestions to me？

I am looking forward to you early reply.

（三十一）

From my point of view， nothing is much important than to receive education. The magic of education can make a person intelligence， smart， and reasonable. Physics and chemistry can be help you to understanding the world. Math can help you to be smart but train your brain. Art， IT， and painting can help you to learn some important skill in tomorrows world. Language can help you to communicate∧ others. So the reason why we study at school for so a long time is because every subject is useful. You will understand no subject you are taking is a waste of our time.

（三十二）

I am quite disturbing these days as I have a disagreement with my parent over my career choice. I have always dreamed of being ∧ tourist guide， that will offer me great opportunities to broaden my horizons and enrich my experience. Therefore， my parents hope that I should go in for professions with a security income and stable life like teachers or doctors. Is it better to obey with my parents and take a career that 1 dont enjoy but guarantee long-term stability？ Or should I go against your parents will and pursuit a career that bring me happiness and satisfaction？ What would you did if you were in my position？

（三十三）

Dear Peter，

Id like to offer my congratulation to you on yours receiving the first prize of “Chinese Bridge”Chinese speech contest.

I know you were not well at Chinese at the first. However， you practiced speak Chinese every day. As the saying goes， “Everything came to him who waits”. To my opinion， this match is too

difficult for a foreigner， but Im surprised that you became the champion. If you go on studying Chinese even hard， you will have the opportunity to study in China. At last， I hope to see you and communicate∧ each other.

Sincere congratulations to you again.

Yours，

Li Hua

（三十四）

I have learned that you ∧eager to learn more about Chinese culture. Here are some learning resources to share with you.

Newspapers are suitable for you to study the language. They contain correct words and grammar， that is of great benefit for your reading and writing. In an addition， reading magazinesis is a greatly choice. Articles in magazines provides much information about Chinese culture enabling you to understand this country farther. Besides， we can listen to Chinese songs as well as chat with native speakers.

I hope my advices can help. It is out of question that youll know Chinese culture better， for you are so smart or hardworking.

（三十五）

Im Li hua， one of your student in Oral English class. I was writing to seek help from you.

Im from the countryside that teachers dont speak much English in class. That is because I am not good at listening or speaking. Now I find ∧ really hard to follow you in class. I hope you can recommend some listen materials to me such that I can improve my listening after class. Besides， could I practice speaking with you for half a hour at weekends at your convenience time？ I think it can help improve my spoken English.

I would be grateful if you could lend to me a helping hand.

（三十六）

Dear Peter，

I am writing to inform you of my plan on the next lesson. As usually， we will have our lesson in your dormitory in Sunday. I have to change ∧time for the lesson from morning to afternoon for some personal affairs. Last lesson， when you learnt how to grasp a writing brush and how to control them freely， but the content of the next lesson is to know some basic strokes of Chinese characters， that are the foundation of Calligraphy of China. Prepared for the lesson， you should have a Chinese writing brush and some rice paper.

Contacted me if you have problems with my arrangement.

（三十七）

The Mid-autumn Festival， which is one of ∧most important traditional festivals in China， fall on August 15th of the lunar calendar ever year. Not only is it popular in China， but it is also celebrating in many other Asian country. People believe that the moon is a symbol of family reunion， lucky and fortune. But it is a custom to express best wishes to the beloved ones in this particular time. On that day， people usually go back to home to have family reunion， enjoying a large meal with our family. They will also eat moon cakes， that are round cakes with meat， eggs， nuts and other things inside.

（三十八）

I am writing to tell you what I have learned about Chinese customs from my excited exchange to China. Well， the Chinese is extremely welcoming. One evening， I was invited with a Chinese family dinner. I had ∧ good appetite and the food was yummy. At dinner， my host kept on put more food in his rice bowl. He didnt seem to hear me saying“No， thank you”in my poor speaking Chinese. This was a very specially experience I have had in China. In my culture， you dont get more food if you dont ask for much.

（三十九）

On the summer holiday， I went to visit my grandparents by bus. At a bus stop， a woman got on with ∧ baby in her arms. There was no seats left on the bus， so she had to stand. When I was hesitating about if to give my seat to her， a little boy stood up and made rooms for her. She thanked the little boy very much and all the passengers admire what the little boy had done. In shameful， I lowered my head. From it， I have learnt we should do our best to help people in their need. If everyone lends a help hand， the world will become very more beautiful！

（四十）

I love my grandmother. It is very kind for her. She used ∧live in the countryside but now she lives with our family. Tomorrow is her birthday but I want to give her something specially. I have made a photo album in that her photos are collected. There are 20 pages in it， included some photos going with the years. The front page has the word “A gift of love for my grandma 2017”. On the back of the album is one of hers large photos. I have been brought it to be decorated in a gift shop. I think she must loved the birthday gift.

（四十一）

Yesterday， we had great fun. We participated in a competition of Tang poems at ∧hall of our school on March 28. The competition enjoyed greatly popularity among us students. It was hold in an attempt to not only enrich our campus（校園）life but greatly motivate in our passion for Tang poems. There were a great variety of interesting so well as exciting activity in the competition. We all fall in love with the competition. We true valued the chance to appreciate the beauty or essence（精华）of our culture from this competition. I all looked forward to the next competition of Tang poems.

（四十二）

Tony is a brave teenager and likes to help others. On ∧Friday evening， Tony was on his way to home. Suddenly， he saw that a man pass him， running quickly with a bag. Then， a woman appeared. She was out of breath but she failed to move any more. Seeing this circumstance， Tony instantly realized which happened. He turned around and rapidly caught up with the man. He struck him violently. Then the man was knocked down. However， a crowd of people came around suddenly and tried to stop Tony. Some of us held camera. Gradual， Tony realized they were just shoot a film. Tony was very embarrassing at that moment.

（四十三）

Not all the people like to go to college. When I am a child， I always dreamt ∧going to college. I considered the college as a interesting place. So I thought they would bring a lot of funs to me. Now I become a student of Shenzhen University and I do enjoy studying there. In our school， therere lots of clubs what can satisfy the needs of students. I join in the tennis club and manage to keep fit by play tennis every week. Because I have many available time in the college， so I can do some other exercise for one and a half hours every day.

（四十四）

Yesterday was the Childrens Day. The Students Union of our school organize a visit to the orphanage. Before set off， we prepared some presents， including in toys， books and so on. On our arrive， we were divided into three groups. Some of us made cakes and breads with the children. Some put on interesting performances， that cheered the children up. Other did some cleaning in ∧yard of the orphanage. In my view， the activity was really enjoyable and meaning. Admitted， it is significant for us to do a good deal and make contributions to the society.

（四十五）

Last week， we went to the Guangming Farm. Having reaching at the farm， we began to prepare lunch. We had ever cooked before， so we were exciting to have a try. We collected wood， making a fire and cooked. Soon， our lunch was ready. Eating the dishes cooked by ourselves， we felt proud and happily. After lunch， we got involved in planting trees. Some dug holes while others planted trees and watered it. Seen the trees， we felt we had done something of great values for the environment. It was ∧ unforgettable experience， that gave us a good opportunity to be independent and raise our awareness of environmental protection.

（四十六）

Yesterday， I went to visit the museum downtown with my friends. We met at the school gate at 8 oclock in the morning， but we went here by bus 301. In the museum， we saw many a gorgeous calligraphy（書法）works， that were created by masters in ancient China. Also， we appreciate fantastic Chinese paintings of natural beauty. We all had a good time there and gained some knowledges of our tradition culture. I think the visit on the museum had deepened my interest in Chinese culture. Thus， from then on， I read more and more related books to learning more about∧.

（四十七）

Dear Mary，

I am sorry to hear that you are deeply depressed recently due to fail in the interview of the broadcast station in your school. I can understand that you are feeling now. It is rather disappointed to fail in an important interview， which you devoted a long time to it. But one failure doesnt meant that you are not excellent. Actual， you are an intelligent girl. You are supposed to have a positive attitude at the failure， taking advantage of this chance to learn about some interview skill. Besides， youd better reflect on your mistake after the interview so that you will be much experienced than before. I hope you will ∧ happy again.

Yours，

Li Hua

（四十八）

This afternoon when I was on my way to home from school， I found a building on fire. I called the firefighters at once. Several minute later， the firefighters arrived and tried their best to control the fire. With the help of the firefighters， a lot of people leave the building safely. At that time the foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters anything. But they couldnt understand how she said. I went to the woman or asked her what was happening. She told me that ∧daughter was still in the building. Hearing that， the firefighters immediate ran into the building and rushed out with the cried girl. The woman was very thankful to me and the firefighters for the help.

（四十九）

My classmates and I took part in a voluntary activity on the International Volunteer Day. We have a meeting to discuss what to do before an activity. Our monitor suggested giving directions to those who got lost， and everyone agreed. In the morning of December 5th， we came to the crossroads near our school， making carefully preparations. Some were hanging up banners， while other were putting maps in order. For the whole day we was offered help to those who lost their way， tell them how to reach their destinations. They were all satisfied and praised us for ∧we did. Times passed quickly. At 5 oclock， we finished our voluntary activity but said goodbye to each other.

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