A Special Summer Holiday

陈传光

This years summer holiday was the most unforgettable. I spent fifteen days at my grandparents home in the countryside.

Every morning， I went to the field to help my grandparents do farm work after have① breakfast. I learned a lot of agricultural knowledge from them. In the afternoon， I usually spent most of my time on the hill. My new friends and I ran after each other， picked fresh fruits and catch② butterflies together. There was always so many③ fun.

Sometimes I went to swim in the river in the village. The water in it was quite clear. In the evening， I often helped the little kids in the neighborhood at④ their lessons. I was patient but strict with them， just liked a real teacher. Now， I really miss them very much. I hope I could go back there again next summer holiday.

江苏省连云港市赣榆区罗阳中学八（1）班 王冬冬

1. 优点：

本文是一篇记叙文。小作者回忆自己在祖父母家里过暑假的难忘经历。文章按照时间顺序，描述了她丰富多彩的乡下生活，并表达对农村生活的热爱。整篇文章文字流畅、用词得当，是一篇不错的学生习作。

2. 需要修改的地方：

① have改为having。after是介词，介词后接动词的-ing形式；

② catch改为caught。结合上下文，此处应使用一般过去时；

③ many改为much。many只能修饰可数名词的复数，much只能修饰不可数名词，fun是不可数名词；

④ at改为with。help sb. with sth.是固定结构，意为“在某方面帮助某人”。

3. 评分：

按江苏省连云港市中考英语作文满分25分的评分标准，本文修改前可得23分。