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一、相关短语
1. suffer from illnesses患病
2. take in=absorb 吸收
3. lack(n.)of /lack(vt.)nutrition 缺乏营养
4. result from /result in/bring about导致
5. turn to /ask a doctor for help看医生
6. see a doctor 看医生
7. take medicine 吃药
8. be in hospital 住院
9. keep the balance of nutrition保持营养平衡
10. live/lead a healthy life 过着健康的生活
11. give your body a complete workout 完全放松自己
12. be rich in /full of /filled with vitamins 富含维生素
13. regular exercise有规律的锻炼
14. perform various types of exercise 做各种各样的锻炼
15. attach the importance to ... 重视……
16. at the risk of... 有……的危险
17. be beneficial to /do good to 有利于……
18. do harm to /be harmful to 有害于……
19. prevent sb. from doing sth. 阻止某人做某事
20. keep an optimistic attitude towards life保持乐观的生活态度
21. decrease the possibility of... 降低/减少……的可能性
二、必备句型
1. When it comes to health, what most people think of first is healthy body.提到健康,大部分的人首先想到的是身体健康。
2. Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays.时至今日,对污垢的态度仍然有很大的差距。
3. Its necessary for us to keep healthy both physically and mentally.对于我们来说保持身心健康是必要的。
4. Its my advice that parents should attach the importance to childrens eating habit.我建议, 父母应该重视孩子们的饮食习惯。
5. I think it important /vital to form a good eating habit.我认为形成好的饮食习惯是很重要的。
6. There is no doubt that health is more important than wealth.毫无疑问,健康比财富更重要。
三、典型例题
例题一:基础写作
明天你班将举行关于“饮食习惯对健康的影响”的主题班会上。
[写作内容]
请写一篇英语短文准备明天发言,内容包括:
好的饮食习惯:有益于健康,能减少患疾病的可能性
均衡饮食:提供人们所需的不同维生素,吸收各种各样的营养,增强抵抗力
规律饮食:防止人们患胃病的危险,有助于消化
挑 食:导致某种维生素的缺乏,有害人们健康
无规律饮食:导致营养失调
[过程指导]
第一步,认真审题。
1. 审文体:本文是________文。
2. 审时态:以_______________为主。
3. 审人称:以第______人称为主。
4. 审要点:认真看看写作内容中的信息,以便分组规划。
第二步,信息分组。
根据各信息点之间的逻辑顺序等将信息点分为5组,以便用5个句子来表达。(在题中用笔圈出即可)
第三步,信息表达。
以上每组信息点用一个英语句子来表达,必要时添加恰当的主语等成分,使句子结构完整。
第四步,连句成篇。
将以上5个句子合并成一篇连贯的短文,必要时添加适当的过渡衔接词。
第五步,检查核对。
第六步,规范誊写。
例题二:读写任务
阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
The problem of food safety has been becoming worse and worse nowadays.
Last month, one of my classmates came back from supermarket with a large bag of food. Because of having found a new style of tinned food in the food store, she was very glad. Several other roommates were invited to enjoy it. Unfortunately, after finishing the food, all of my three friends felt sick had stomachaches, their faces having become paler and paler. Due to sensitivity to that kind of tinned food, I escaped that suffer. At that time, my mind went blank. I dialed the emergency number with my trembling hand, therefore they were quickly sent to hospital. The doctor said they were lucky to be out of danger because they did not eat too much of that rotten fish and were hospitalized on time.
This is the matter that happened around me which made me realize the seriousness of the food safety problem.
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容;
2. 以约120个词就“食品安全”谈谈你的想法,内容包括:
(1)食品安全的重要性;
(2)用你或你朋友的经历说明食品安全的危害性;
(3)就如何保证食品安全提出建议。
[过程指导]
写概要
1. 分析文体类别:阅读材料为议论文,作者用一个例子说明了食品安全的危害,最后是结论。
2. 找出关键词句:写概要前,应在文中找出并标明以下关键句或关键词:
论点: (第一段)
论据: (第二段)
结论: (第三段)
3. 组合关键词句:
谈看法
要点⑴:首先写出主题句:食品安全在生活中非常重要。然后说说重要性体现在哪些方面。
要点⑵:首先写出主题句:作者的经历让自己想起类似的一次经历。然后举例什么人什么时候因为食品安全导致什么样的结果。
要点⑶:首先写出主题句:保证食品安全是必须的,重要的。然后再提出具体的建议。
根据以上提示,完成自己的写作:
四、摸拟演练
练习一:基础写作
明天的英语课轮到你进行课前英语小演讲。
[写作内容]
请以“健康早餐”为主题写一份演讲稿,内容包括:
现象:(1)有些同学不吃早餐;
(2)有些同学吃早餐,但营养不均衡。
后果:(1)严重影响身体健康;
(2)影响学习效率。
建议:(1)早起,吃营养均衡的早餐。
(2)营养均衡的早餐包括:
含有碳水化合物的谷类,以提供每天所需的能量;
鸡蛋、牛奶等提供蛋白质;
蔬菜、水果等帮助消化。
参考词汇:谷类grain, 碳水化合物 carbohydrates,
蛋白质 protein, 消化 digestion
Im very much honored to give you a speech on healthy breakfast. ...
练习二:读写任务
阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Taiwan on Tuesday fined a leading supplier more than $1.6 million for selling hundreds of tons of “gutter oil(地沟油)” and setting off a food safety scare that spread from the island to Hong Kong and Macau.
Chang Guann Company, the cooking oil company involved in the scandal(丑闻), got the huge fine as well as an order from the authority to pull all of its oil products from store shelves, even product that had passed food safety tests. The boss of the company apologized to the general public by kneeling down twice, which didnt stop the scare from getting worse.
The scandal has damaged the reputation of more than 1,000 companies and severely damaged the image of Taiwanese food overseas. Hundreds of tons of mooncakes, pineapple cakes, bread, instant noodles and Chinese steamed buns and dumplings have been removed from shelves. Lots of restaurants have apologized to customers for having unknowingly used the gutter oil. No one is able to estimate how big the losses will be.
[写作内容]
1. 以约30词概括上文的主要内容。
2. 以约120词对食品安全问题进行议论,内容包括:
(1)你如何看待这起地沟油事件;
(2)食品安全问题的严重及形成的原因;
(3)如何解决食品安全问题。
(作者单位:开平市第一中学)