How to Cherish Our Traditional Culture

张明旭

Our great country， China has a long history and rich cultures. Our traditional cultures are like the brightest stars leading us to be great and powerful. Do you know how to cherish our traditional culture？ Now let me offer some suggestions about how to cherish our traditional culture.

First， pay attention to learning Chinese. We should listen to Chinese lessons carefully. Also wed better read Chinese classical books， especially the four famous works in our leisure time. Second， learn more history about our country. China has a 5000-year-long history. It contains too many things being worth learning and tasting. Third， remember our traditional festivals. According to a survey， 60% middle school students cant remember our traditional festivals. Whenever the traditional festival comes， show your attention and learn to make it meaningful.

Those are my suggestions about how to cherish our traditional culture. Traditional cultures are our roots， also it is continuous power for our countrys development. Boys and girls lets take action now.

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指导教师：王永丰