原汁原味原创题——写作题专项练

2014-08-07 00:42罗丽雯冯蔚清邱奕东等
广东教育·高中 2014年6期
关键词:谈谈优缺点陌生人

罗丽雯+冯蔚清+邱奕东等

基础写作

(一)微信的优缺点

微信正在成为我们快节奏生活新的趋势。请根据以下信息介绍微信的优缺点。

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优点:1. 实现快捷聊天,可以选择语音、图片、文字;

2. 零资费;

3. 缩短人与人之间的距离,增进相互了解;

4. 了解最新资讯;与时俱进。

缺点:1. 泄露个人隐私、有潜在风险;

2. 信息鱼龙混杂、会误导青少年。

建议:谨慎使用

[写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部内容,给出的开头,不计入句数.

[评分标准]

句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

WeChat is becoming the new trend in our fast-paced world. ________________________

(原创作者:东莞中学曾燕)

(二)报道马航失踪

2014年马航MH370失踪,请写一篇简讯。

[写作内容]

参考词汇:Malaysia Airlines flight MH370马来西亚航空公司的航班MH370

(三)介绍邵逸夫先生

[写作内容]

请根据以下内容写一篇短文,介绍邵逸夫先生:

出生时间:1907出生

出生地点:上海

逝世日期:2014年1月7日

身份:著名的娱乐大亨(tycoon)和慈善家(philanthropist)

主要事迹:(1)娱乐事业成功;

(2)致力于慈善事业;

(3)捐出数十亿元支持学校和医疗;

(4)全中国的中小学及大学都有逸夫楼。

评价:(1)对慈善事业做出巨大贡献, 给富人们树立了榜样;

(2)无数的人将永远怀念他。

(四)介绍Malala

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请根据以下要点写一篇短文,介绍Malala:

年龄:16岁

籍贯:巴基斯坦人

著名原因:促进女子教育

主要经历:(1)11岁时,为BBC写博客,描写巴基斯坦的艰苦生活和教育条件;

(2)2012年,因积极维护女子受教育的权利,被塔利班袭击,头部中弹;

(3)在英国接受治疗,康复后继续为女孩子争取教育权利。

荣誉:(1)巴基斯坦国家和平奖;

(2)联合国宣布每年7月12日(马拉拉生日)为“马拉拉日”。

参考词汇:塔利班Taliban;巴基斯坦国家和平奖Pakistans National Peace Award;联合国the United Nations

(五)介绍旅游景点——万峰林

[写作内容]

请根据以下内容写一篇短文,向你的外国朋友介绍贵州兴义万峰林(Wanfenglin Peak forest):

名称含义:被群山所包围的森林

位置:位于贵州,离兴义市约5公里

类别:国家4A级旅游区

特色:油菜花,空气清新

观赏时间:每年3月中旬

相关情况:2010年当地政府决定发展乡村旅游业,免费给农民提供种子和肥料,鼓励农民种植油菜花

现状:吸引了更多的游客,也增加农民的收入

rape flower油菜花;extract 榨取

(六)远程学习的优缺点

远程学习(在线学习)是全球高等教育的趋势。假如你是校报记者,请根据以下内容,写一篇关于远程学习的报道。

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大班制 large class size

Online learning is one of the most popular trends in global higher education.

(原创作者:汕头市下蓬中学罗丽雯)

(七)中学生是否该早起

上周你们班就“中学生是否应该早起”这个话题展开了热烈的讨论。请根据下列表格用英语写一篇短文来报道这件事情。

[写作内容]

A heated discussion about whether middle school students should rise early in the morning was carried out in my class last week and opinions fall into two groups.

(原创作者:江门开平市第一中学杨华新)

(八)同学睡眠不足的成因

请你针对周围同学睡眠不足的成因写一篇英语短文,给21世纪英语报社投稿。

[写作内容]

Dear editor,

Since the sleeping problems of modern people,especially of middle school students,have caused worldwide attention.

I hope all of students can have enough sleep and keep healthy in their study and daily life.

(原创作者:广州市萝岗区玉岩中学冯蔚清)

(九)雾霾

[写作内容]

请根据以下信息写一篇英语短文,给你校的英语校报投稿。

现状:自从2013年1月来,我国很多城市天气持续雾霾,空气质量越来越差

原因:燃烧碳;汽车排放;垃圾燃烧;灰尘

后果:(1)人体吸入这些有害气体,会导致肺癌等疾病发生

(2)能见度降低,会导致交通事故

建议:政府方面:取缔污染较重的工厂;街道尽量多洒水

个人方面:尽量避免外出,若外出要戴口罩

参考词汇:雾霾smoggy排放emission能见度visibility

任务写作

(一)该不该扶起跌倒行人

以约120个词就“该不该扶起跌倒行人”进行议论,内容包括:

(1)当今社会人们对“扶起跌倒行人”的看法。

(2)如果在街上有人跌倒,你会出手帮助吗?

(3)你认为社会如何保证帮助别人者的权益?

(原创作者:肇庆市广宁第一中学邱奕东)

(二)谈谈你对自拍的看法

以约120个词谈谈你对自拍的看法,内容包括:

(1)在你身边自拍流行吗?

(2)自拍的好处和坏处;

(3)你对自拍的态度。

(原创作者:汕尾陆丰市林启恩纪念中学陈淑君)

(三)关于“陌生人”的教育

以约120个词谈谈你对如何对小孩进行关于“陌生人”的教育的看法,内容包括:

(1)如何给小孩定义陌生人?

(2)是否所有的陌生人都是坏人?

(3)请就父母对小孩在这方面的教育提些建议。

(原创作者:汕尾陆丰市龙潭中学许炳杰)

参考范文

基础写作

(一)微信的优缺点

WeChat is becoming the new trend in our fast-paced world. First of all, WeChat is a free instant messaging service application and thus provides convenience for people to send voice messages, pictures and texts, which undoubtedly helps shorten the distance between people and enhance mutual understanding. Whats more, WeChat keeps us updated on current affairs and helps us keep pace of the times. However, WeChat can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away peoples privacy and other significant information. In addition, some unfounded or false information released on WeChat can be misleading, affecting the healthy development of young people. All in all, WeChat provides us with comfort and also inevitably some concerns, so we should keep our eyes open and be extremely careful while using it.

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(二)报道马航失踪

Malaysia Airlines flight MH370 was reported missing on March8th 2014, with 239 people on board, including 154 from China. Many ships and planes from about 10 countries help to search the plane. 16 days later, Malaysia government declared that the plane clashed, but where is the plane remains a mystery. People from all over the world are shocked at the news and the relatives of the passengers aboard are angry and sad. They urged the Malaysia government to release the truth of the accident.

(三)介绍邵逸夫先生

Born in Shanghai in 1907, Shao Yifu, a famous entertainment tycoon and philanthropist, made great contribution to entertainment and charity all his life. After he made a fortune in entertainment industry, he was active in charity and he donated several billion yuan to support education and healthcare in China. There are many Yifu Buildings in primary schools, middle schools and universities all over China. He passed away on Jan 7th, 2014. As a successful business man, Shao Yifu set a good example to rich people and he will be remembered by countless people for his great contribution to charity.

(四)介绍Malala

Malala, a girl from Pakistan, aged 16, is well known for her promoting rights of girls. When she was 11 years old, she began to write blog for the BBC, describing the difficult situation of life and education in her hometown. Unfortunately, in 2012,the Taliban shot her in the head because she advocated the girls right to education. After she got the treatment and recovered in the UK, she continued to fight for the right of girls education. Its for her brave behavior that she was awarded Pakistans National Peace Award and the United Nations declared July 12th(Malayas birthday) every year Malala Day.

(五)介绍旅游景点——万峰林

Wanfenglin Peak forest, a national 4A tourist attraction, is located about 5 kilometers from Xingyi city, in Guizhou, meaning a forest surrounded by thousands of mountains. It is famous for its beautiful rape flowers and fresh air. The best time to visit it is mid-March every year. In 2010, the local government decided to develop rural tourism, so that they encouraged villagers to plant rape flowers by providing free seeds and fertilizers. As a result, the beautiful rape flowers attract more tourists and increase the incomes of the villagers now.

(六)远程学习的优缺点

Online learning is one of the most popular trends in global higher education. With the help of the Internet, its possible for people to choose the time and place to watch the pre-recorded subjects. It can encourage people to continue learning after graduation because it is flexible and convenient. Online teaching also allows teachers to monitor the needs of the students effectively, which helps to balance large class size and personal learning. But such learning lacks face to face interaction. Whats more, not everyone can afford a computer so that it may keep people from learning online.

(七)中学生是否该早起

A heated discussion about whether middle school students should rise early in the morning was carried out in my class last week and opinions fall into two groups.

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About one third of the students are in favor of getting up early for the reason that we can take advantage of the golden time to do some reading as well as take exercise, which is beneficial to building up our bodies and keeping us energetic. Another advantage of getting up early is that we can save much time because we dont have to wait in a long queue for breakfast. By comparison, the rest of the students, around 70%, hold totally different views, thinking that a lack of sleep does great damage to our health both physically and mentally. To make matters worse, without enough sleep, we tend to be absent-minded, feel sleepy and even fall asleep in class. Last but not least, lacking sleep results in a decrease in our memory and low study efficiency.

(八)同学睡眠不足的成因

Dear editor,

Since the sleeping problems of modern people, especially of middle school students, have caused worldwide attention.

To arouse peoples awareness of the importance of sleeping, WHO organized a worldwide activity in 2001 to make March 21st every year the World Sleeping Day. As for Middle School students, they are burdened with too much homework, as a result, their biological clock has to be reset. Besides, physical discomfort, emotional problems and sleeping environment will lead to insomnia, which is the reason why students cant get enough sleep.Moreover, frequent nightmares made students sleep pattern affected, which is another factor that students cant sleep enough. Medical experts encourage teens to change their lifestyle and develop good sleeping habits, such as watching TV or listening to music instead of drinking a cup of coffee.

I hope all of students can have enough sleep and keep healthy in their study and daily life.

(九)雾霾

Since January 2013, gray and smoggy days have often been seen in many cities in China and the air quality is becoming worse and worse. According to some researches, many aspects are to blame for this bad weather, including coal burning, car emissions, garbage burning and dust. As a result, not only will peoples health be harmed by the harmful air, which will cause a series of diseases like lung cancer, but also it may even lead to traffic accidents because of visibility reduction. To improve this situation, I suggest that our government should ban those severely polluted factories and that water be sprayed on streets as much as possible. As for people, we had better avoid some outdoor activities, but if we had to, we should wear our masks.

任务写作

(一)该不该扶起跌倒行人

Nowadays, some people think we should raise the fallen people, because they believe it atraditional virtue to help others in China. However, others feel a bit worried towards this matter. They are afraid that they will be attacked by the family of the patient. So when they find a man fall down in the street, they just do nothing.

If I had a chance to meet a fallen man in the street, I would help him without doubt. The fallen man may be seriously ill, so he needs to be sent to a hospital at once. If we just watch and do nothing, he will die. And this will cause great losses to his family.

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Therefore, our society should think highly of those who help others in need. Not only does our government advocate their good deeds, but also rewards them with a large sum of money. On the other hand, those who attack the helpers should be punished by our laws.

(二)谈谈你对自拍的看法

As we know, selfie is everywhere. Almost everyone that has a smartphone with forward-facing camera take photos of themselves. It also has won huge popularity among students even teachers in my school.

There is no doubt that it is nice to document a good hair day, an outfit you loved or some significant moments, especially while traveling. In addition,with the selfie photos uploaded,all your fiends from the social media website can enjoy your journey in progress.

Just as the old saying goes, however, every coin has two sides. The negative aspects of selfie are also apparent. First of all, if you focus so much on selfie that you can not enjoy your life in a real sense. Secondly, it may help grow your being proud and vain for there are always some people saying nice word for your selfie. Last but not the least, your personal information exposed may bring safety risks.

As for me, I am in favour of selfie but wed better have control over it and not develop into a selfie-addict.

(三)关于“陌生人”的教育

A stranger is anyone that your family doesnt know well. Its common for children to think that “bad strangers” look scary, like the villains(恶人) in cartoons. However,pretty strangers can be just as dangerous as the not-so-pretty ones. When you talk to your children about strangers, explain that no one can tell if strangers are nice or not nice just by looking at them and that they should be careful around all strangers.

In fact,not all of the strangers are dangerous. Police officers and firefighters are two examples of very recognizable safe strangers. Teachers, principals, and librarians are adults children can trust too, and they are easy to recognize when theyre at work.

Perhaps the most important way parents can protect their children is to teach them to be wary of (警惕)potentially dangerous situations — this will help them when dealing with strangers as well as with known adults who may not have good intentions.You should also talk to your children about how they should handle dangerous situations. If in a dangerous situations, kids should say no, run away, yell as loud as they can, and tell a trusted adult what happened right away. Its good to practice this in different situations so that your children will feel confident in knowing what to do.

责任编校蒋小青

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Therefore, our society should think highly of those who help others in need. Not only does our government advocate their good deeds, but also rewards them with a large sum of money. On the other hand, those who attack the helpers should be punished by our laws.

(二)谈谈你对自拍的看法

As we know, selfie is everywhere. Almost everyone that has a smartphone with forward-facing camera take photos of themselves. It also has won huge popularity among students even teachers in my school.

There is no doubt that it is nice to document a good hair day, an outfit you loved or some significant moments, especially while traveling. In addition,with the selfie photos uploaded,all your fiends from the social media website can enjoy your journey in progress.

Just as the old saying goes, however, every coin has two sides. The negative aspects of selfie are also apparent. First of all, if you focus so much on selfie that you can not enjoy your life in a real sense. Secondly, it may help grow your being proud and vain for there are always some people saying nice word for your selfie. Last but not the least, your personal information exposed may bring safety risks.

As for me, I am in favour of selfie but wed better have control over it and not develop into a selfie-addict.

(三)关于“陌生人”的教育

A stranger is anyone that your family doesnt know well. Its common for children to think that “bad strangers” look scary, like the villains(恶人) in cartoons. However,pretty strangers can be just as dangerous as the not-so-pretty ones. When you talk to your children about strangers, explain that no one can tell if strangers are nice or not nice just by looking at them and that they should be careful around all strangers.

In fact,not all of the strangers are dangerous. Police officers and firefighters are two examples of very recognizable safe strangers. Teachers, principals, and librarians are adults children can trust too, and they are easy to recognize when theyre at work.

Perhaps the most important way parents can protect their children is to teach them to be wary of (警惕)potentially dangerous situations — this will help them when dealing with strangers as well as with known adults who may not have good intentions.You should also talk to your children about how they should handle dangerous situations. If in a dangerous situations, kids should say no, run away, yell as loud as they can, and tell a trusted adult what happened right away. Its good to practice this in different situations so that your children will feel confident in knowing what to do.

责任编校蒋小青

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Therefore, our society should think highly of those who help others in need. Not only does our government advocate their good deeds, but also rewards them with a large sum of money. On the other hand, those who attack the helpers should be punished by our laws.

(二)谈谈你对自拍的看法

As we know, selfie is everywhere. Almost everyone that has a smartphone with forward-facing camera take photos of themselves. It also has won huge popularity among students even teachers in my school.

There is no doubt that it is nice to document a good hair day, an outfit you loved or some significant moments, especially while traveling. In addition,with the selfie photos uploaded,all your fiends from the social media website can enjoy your journey in progress.

Just as the old saying goes, however, every coin has two sides. The negative aspects of selfie are also apparent. First of all, if you focus so much on selfie that you can not enjoy your life in a real sense. Secondly, it may help grow your being proud and vain for there are always some people saying nice word for your selfie. Last but not the least, your personal information exposed may bring safety risks.

As for me, I am in favour of selfie but wed better have control over it and not develop into a selfie-addict.

(三)关于“陌生人”的教育

A stranger is anyone that your family doesnt know well. Its common for children to think that “bad strangers” look scary, like the villains(恶人) in cartoons. However,pretty strangers can be just as dangerous as the not-so-pretty ones. When you talk to your children about strangers, explain that no one can tell if strangers are nice or not nice just by looking at them and that they should be careful around all strangers.

In fact,not all of the strangers are dangerous. Police officers and firefighters are two examples of very recognizable safe strangers. Teachers, principals, and librarians are adults children can trust too, and they are easy to recognize when theyre at work.

Perhaps the most important way parents can protect their children is to teach them to be wary of (警惕)potentially dangerous situations — this will help them when dealing with strangers as well as with known adults who may not have good intentions.You should also talk to your children about how they should handle dangerous situations. If in a dangerous situations, kids should say no, run away, yell as loud as they can, and tell a trusted adult what happened right away. Its good to practice this in different situations so that your children will feel confident in knowing what to do.

责任编校蒋小青

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