Low Carbon Life

韩婷婷

要求：运用所学知识谈论一下现在存在的环境问题，并由此阐述作为一名中学生，如何做到低碳环保，要求语句通顺，不少于80词。

Our world was very colorful， beautiful and full of life in the past. But these years， it has a lot of changes. People have built many buildings and factories along rivers. Many trees have been cut down. I think people and factories cause these terrible pollution problems. Lots of people throw out litter everywhere. Factories pour much polluted water into rivers or produce lots of waste gas into the sky. Now rivers and the air around us have become polluted. Our environment is getting worse and worse.

Nowadays， a new lifestyle called low carbon life is very popular with the people in our country. It means low carbon and low energy and no waste. And I hope people can walk or take buses to work instead of taking cars. Because cars not only cause serious air pollution but also waste energy. As students， we should turn off the lights when we leave， turn off the tap in time， and reuse our textbooks and so on. We had better not use plastic bags any more. No one can stand the “white pollution”. In a word， all of us should put the low carbon lifestyle into practice.

Lets do it now.

简评：环境问题与每个人的生活息息相关，这是一篇贴近学生实际生活，非常热门的话题作文。题目要求从两方面谈论现在存在的环境问题以及如何低碳环保。小作者从典型的环境问题入手，一一列出生活中看到的、感受到的环境污染现象，并陈述了个人鲜明的态度与观点，并针对如何减轻污染问题提出了自己认为切实可行的办法，是一篇论述完整的佳作。

（指导教师：菅凤明）