２００８年各省市高考英语作文精华展示

李志晓　刘耀宏

2008年各省市高考英语作文题材多种多样，难度适中，基本上都是贴近中学生的话题。无论哪一种题材考生都可以应用较多的语法结构、高级词汇和一些过渡词。如果考生在作文时用词准确、过渡自然、结构紧凑、语法结构合理、语言点齐全、词数达标，那么它就是一篇成功的习作。以下是对2008年各省市高考英语作文精华的几项展示。

1.NMET 2008全国卷ll

【精彩句子赏析】

It should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.

【句型句式归纳】

It also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese

whenever possible.

【连贯、高级词汇升华】

First ...then ...；besides ...；a Chinese course；your fellow students

2.NMET 2008全国卷I

【精彩句子赏析】

Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work，because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

【句型句式归纳】

Could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday?

【连贯、高级词汇升华】

Now；By the way；a panda lover；gave birth to；in advance

3.NMET 2008江苏卷

【精彩句子赏析】

Good listening can always show respect，promote understanding，and improve interpersonal relationship.

Show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile；be open-minded to different opinions even though you dont like them.

【句型句式归纳】

What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others.

Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children，so they will understand them better，and find it easy to narrow the generation gap.

【连贯、高级词汇升华】

So；and；thus；In a word；interpersonal relationship；narrow the generation gap；meet their needs；a supportive silence；a knowing smile.

4.NMET 2008 辽宁卷

【精彩句子赏析】

We should develop a good attitude to life.

Knowledge is power.

【句型句式归纳】

In order to study well，we need to do sports so that we can keep fit.

Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times.

【连贯、高级词汇升华】

Firstly，secondly；develop a good attitude；consists of；for this goal；enjoy life

5.NMET 2008 四川卷

【精彩句子赏析】

I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.

【句型句式归纳】

I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood.

【连贯、高级词汇升华】

For me；For example；wisely；disposable；use both sides of paper

6.NMET 2008陕西卷

【精彩句子赏析】

So I think “Friday New Hour” can broaden our mind and enrich our school life.

I am sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activity.

【句型句式归纳】

Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad，let alone what we can do for our country.

And we should make a choice about what well read.

【连贯、高级词汇升华】

But；So；Whats more；As for；broaden our mind；enrich our school life；benefit from

7.NMET 2008湖北卷

【精彩句子赏析】

I was so desperate on hearing that.

It was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.

【句型句式归纳】

...but was told that the model had been sold out.

I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.

【连贯、高级词汇升华】

Later；Then；but；Therefore；desperate；consideration；spare parts

8.NMET 2008福建卷

【精彩句子赏析】

The aim of this activity impressed me greatly.

Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.

【句型句式归纳】

I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together.

I can improve my English，make more friends，and enrich my life.

【连贯、高级词汇升华】

Therefore；For one thing，...for another thing；impressed；instructive；outgoing；enrich；recommend.

9.NMET 2008北京卷

【精彩句子赏析】

While we are confident in ourselves，we should recognize strengths in others and show our respect for them.

We were shocked to see litter here and there.

We came up with several choices such as going boating，climbing a mountain，and going to an amusement park.

【句型句式归纳】

I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better.

While climbing the mountain，we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.

【连贯、高级词汇升华】

Finally；However；Then；Afterwards；At the same time；So in my opinion；litter；respectively；hard-working；confident；strengths；show our respect for them

10.NMET 2008安徽卷

【精彩句子赏析】

I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment.

More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them.

【句型句式归纳】

Im glad that youve noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection.

These bags are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish.

【连贯、高级词汇升华】

Besides；directed；concern；an even cleaner place

11.NMET 2008湖南卷

【精彩句子赏析】

I cannot help being moved by its author.

I admire Helen because she is optimistic about life.

For a disabled person like her，this was really a wonder.

【句型句式归纳】

Her story tells us that we should value what we have and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.

Since then she has lived in a world of darkness and silence，and communication has seemed only a dream for her.

【连贯、高级词汇升华】

But；optimistic；Under the guidance of；wonder；overcome

12.NMET 2008 浙江卷

【精彩句子赏析】

They may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.

I prefer to work in a team，which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them.

【句型句式归纳】

People can decide for themselves when to start and how to do it.

People may also choose to work in a team，which offers me a chance to learn from each other and help each other.

【连贯、高级词汇升华】

In this way；whats more；besides；personally；basically；on their own；efficiently.

13.NMET 2008山东卷

【精彩句子赏析】

The following tips may be a help to you.

I will surf the Internet for some information about how to deal with relationships.

【句型句式归纳】

What I want to say is that you are likely to be a stranger to them.

With time going by，you can become good friends.

【连贯、高级词汇升华】

As a matter of fact；Believe it or not；Firstly ...secondly ...finally；Anyway；Newcomer；smooth；unnesessary

14.NMET 2008重庆卷

【精彩句子赏析】

What you should focus the topics of your compositions on is chiefly about the students daily life.

Once you are determined to be a member of us，you can participate in this activity at any time.

【句型句式归纳】

It is many top teachers who will offer practical guidance to you.

【连贯、高级词汇升华】

Whats more；However；practical guidance；awarded；participate

15.NMET 2008江西卷

【精彩句子赏析】

An English composition contest is planned to be held in our school and it is just around the corner.

My teacher makes some practical suggestions and I adopt them.

【句型句式归纳】

One of the problems that I am in face of is how to make good use of some excellent sentences.

【连贯、高级词汇升华】

As a result；And；around the corner；adopt；advanced；consulting；grammatical structures；quote；adequately

16.NMET 2008 天津卷

【精彩句子赏析】

She was grateful to me for my kind offer.

No one on the train offered his seat to the old woman willingly.

【句型句式归纳】

I could imagine when my father saw the wonderful presents，how cheerful he was.

No matter who we are，we should have a common sense that we must show respect for the old.

【连贯、高级词汇升华】

At that time；nevertheless；While after one minute；Undoubtedly；drawing near；joyfully；was grateful to；a common sense ★