My Summer Holiday1

Everyone has their own unique summer experiences， and last summer was no different for me. It all started when my sister and I went to Weihai together. We saw wide and sandy beaches and did many activities like swimming and sunbathing（日光浴）. The sea there was really beautiful！ We had a lot of fun！

六（4）班 杨东睿

Last year， I had a great summer holiday. I went to Chongqing with my family. The trip was wonderful. We ate many kinds of Chongqing food， such as Chongqing hot pot. It’s spicy（辣的） but very delicious. People in Chongqing were also very hospitable（好客的）. When we left Chongqing， we felt sad to say goodbye. What a wonderful summer holiday！

六（4）班 刘浩

小作者们都运用了一般过去时讲述了自己暑期去旅行的经历，叙述清晰、文字流畅。黄梓俣描述了北京之行最令人激动与自豪的事情——在天安门广场看升旗；杨霆右运用拟人等手法把在花果山看到的景色、事物描述得十分具体、形象；杨东睿写了自己在威海的旅行经历，文字间充满了对大海的喜爱；刘浩回忆了自己在重庆品尝的各种美食，表达了依依不舍之情。暑假中令人难忘的经历有很多，同学们在写作时可以抓住最难忘的一个方面展开，同时要注意时态的一致性。