Last summer vacation was filled with so many funny moments. One of the highlights(亮点) was when I went fishing with some friends. After waiting anxiously(焦急地) for a bite, we started to feel disappointed when nothing happened. Suddenly, a curious kitten wandered over and started playing with our fishing lines(钓鱼线)! We couldn’t help but laugh. In the end, we didn’t catch a single fish, but we made friends with a “troublemaker(捣蛋鬼)”. 六(2)班 徐瑞
I had a happy summer holiday last year. During the longest holiday, I didn’t have to wake up early. I mostly stayed home by myself. I could do whatever I wanted, such as watching movies, listening to music, and reading interesting books. It was very hot outside. I could eat ice creams and watermelons in the cool room. By the way, I visited Nanjing with my parents. I enjoyed my summer holiday very much. 六(2)班 韩镕羽
小作者们用生动的语言描写了自己的暑假。朱佳琪着重描写自己在一个景点的游玩经历,张雨凝则侧重自己在一个城市的所见所闻,徐瑞讲述了自己钓鱼时发生的趣事,韩镕羽则梳理了自己的暑假生活。暑假很长,大家都有不少丰富多彩的经历,描写时既可以侧重于一个难忘的“点”,也可以详略得当地描述一个“面”。