My Spring Festival2

During the Spring Festival， I paste the spring couplets， make dumplings， set off fireworks， and celebrate with my family. In addition（除此以外）， on Chinese New Year’s Eve， I always play with my friends. We build snowmen and have snowball fights. Our hearts are filled with joy. I love Spring Festival！

五（3）班 陈锦汐

The Spring Festival is my favourite festival. During this festival， I often help my mother clean the house and stick red couplets. On the Spring Festival Eve， all my family members get together and have a big dinner. Then we light fireworks. My parents give me red packets. I’m very happy.

五（7）班 孙楷轶

The Spring Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. During this festival， you will find most people dressed in colourful clothes， all wearing big smiles. In my family， we exchange our blessings（祝福）. At night， we have dinner together. I love the Spring Festival so much！

六（4）班 陈科名

My family often do many interesting things during the Spring Festival. We often place the “Fu” character upside down（颠倒的） on the door. That means good luck will come. We also make a lot of dumplings， with a coin hidden in some of them. We believe that “lucky coin” brings luck in the coming year.

六（7）班 梅锦昆

指导老师点评

小作者们能很好地使用一般现在时和一些频率副词来描述自己的春节。陈锦汐和孙楷轶突出介绍了除夕夜，他们关于“贴春联”“放烟花”“除夕夜”等的表达都不同。陈科名在描写自己与家人的活动前，先总结性地描绘了过春节时人们的状态与心情，营造了过年喜气洋洋的氛围。梅锦昆则从细处入手，通过描写倒贴“福”字和饺子里包硬币等习俗，以小见大地凸显了春节的意义。