郁诗妍：My School

My school is not big， but it is very beautiful. You can see many green trees and beautiful flowers. I like to draw them after class. You can see three sports fields. Two are small and one is big. You can see a big and clean library， too. I like reading books with my friends there. You also can see a small stage in front of the first building. This is my favourite place. We often sing， dance， and play the guitar on it. I love my school very much！

五（2）班 郁詩妍

小作者们能熟练地交替使用there be句型和“It has ...”句型来介绍自己的学校。其中，郁诗妍运用了“You can see”的排比句式，并介绍了自己在学校各个场所的活动，让学校亲切可感。陈葭伊则另辟蹊径，更侧重于介绍多彩的校园生活，这也是在描写学校时值得借鉴的一个角度。