任务驱动法下的英文诗歌教学

2023-09-20 22:35郑力玮
初中生世界 2023年28期
关键词:诗歌选韵律驱动

■郑力玮

任务驱动教学法是一种以建构主义教学理论为基础的教学方法,是以学生为学习主体,以教师为引导者,以情境为教学支撑,以任务和问题作为教学动力,注重知识技能、迁移能力的提升,促进学生全面发展的一种新型教学方式。牛津译林版英语教材八(上)Unit7 阅读版块Seasons of the year的主题为人与自然,体裁为诗歌,内容上呈现了冬、春、夏、秋四季景物的变化。诗歌虽短但富有韵律美、语言美和意象美。笔者将任务驱动法运用到阅读版块Seasons of the year的教学中,用明确的任务引导学生学习诗歌,通过任务的层层推进,让学生真正走近诗歌,感受诗歌之美,成为诗歌的创作者。

【教学目标】

到本节课结束时,学生能够:

1.熟悉诗歌中描述四季的词和短语;

2.掌握简单的诗歌朗读技巧;

3.识别诗中的韵律,运用韵律完成诗歌选段的半开放创作,以及初步创作出有韵律的诗歌;

4.识别出诗中的拟人修辞手法并初步了解另外两种修辞手法(重复和明喻)。

【教学片段】

一、情境导入,驱动任务兴趣

笔者挑选了能显示季节特色的四张图片,让学生从天气、活动、衣着、食物等角度推测图片所属季节,在引入话题的同时也处理了部分生词,在情境中激发了学生的学习兴趣。

T:Which season is it in the first picture?

S:Winter.

T:Why?

S:There is snow.

T: Great.What else can you tell? Are they wearing T-shirt?

S:No.They are wearing warm clothes.

T: Wonderful.They are wearing warm clothes because the temperature drops(生词).So we can know the season from the weather(板书).

随后,笔者呈现古诗《春晓》的中英文版本,设置任务引导学生关注韵脚,复习韵律的概念。

T: What is special about two poems? Pay attention to the words in red.

Ss:Ya yun(押韵).

T: Excellent! You found rhymes.So we can say lying rhymes with...?

Ss:Lying rhymes with crying.

T:What other rhymes can you find?

Ss:Showers rhymes with flower.

T:What about the Chinese poem?

Ss:晓rhymes with鸟.

T: Good job! So we can say words rhyme if the last syllables make the same or similar sound.

二、以学生为主体,驱动自主学习

首次执教时,笔者通过问题链的方式引导学生关注诗节的韵律和修辞手法。朗读时,教师领读,学生模仿。第二次执教时,除了常规的问题链,笔者还增设了多样的任务。比如,笔者让学生根据文本选择适合的背景音乐,提高学生的参与度;在朗读环节,笔者邀请学生朗读并请学生点评;在赏析诗歌时,笔者引导学生自己逐步总结出朗读技巧(read slowly,loudly,clearly,emotionally)。

T:Can you find rhymes here?

S:Days rhymes with shade.

S:Pool rhymes with cool.

T: Wonderful.Would you please try to read the part slowly and loudly?

(Students read together.)

T: You did a good job.After reading it,which music do you think fits the poem better?

Ss:The second.

T:Why?What did you hear?

S1:The quiet stream.

T: How did you feel about this part?What’s summer like in poet’s eyes?(Can you find some adjectives?)

Ss:Sweet.Lazy.Cool.

T: Pay attention to the word lazy.When will you use the word?

S:I am lazy.

T:Well done.We normally use the adjective to describe a person.When we use it to describe things or animals, we also call it personification.Now close your eyes and feel the season first.This time, try to read emotionally and add your feelings.

三、有效输入,驱动任务输出

首次执教时,笔者选取了五段诗歌选节挖空,鼓励学生通过韵律判断空格内需要填写的词汇。这样的方式虽然看起来输入量很大,但是角度单一,只涵盖一种修辞手法。另外,诗歌选节无关信息较多,涉及的生词影响了学生阅读。第二次执教时,笔者选取了四段诗歌选节并进行适当精简,选节涵盖课内的拟人修辞手法和新增的比喻、重复修辞手法。虽是新增内容,但任务难度符合学情,学生很快就能完成任务。

The lonely tree said to himself,“______”

Woke up to find himself wearing white.

T:Which word should we fill in?Why?

S:Night.

S: Good night! Because it rhymes with white.And the tree woke up next day.

T:Wonderful.Any figure of speech?

S:Personification.

T:How do you know that?

S:The tree is lonely.

T:Great.Any other word to show personification?

S: Woke up.That is what I do every morning.

S:Wearing white.

在学生正式创作诗歌之前,笔者还通过图片激活学生脑内的四季印象,在导学案中增补韵脚相同的常见词汇,通过提问引导学生运用导学案中的词汇进行简单的诗句创作,为接下来的诗歌创作做好铺垫。

T: What can we do during the summer?Walk by...?

S:Walk by the stream and eat ice cream.

T:Sit on the beach and have a...?(肢体语言表明睡觉)

S:Have a nice dream!

T: Awesome! We have already created a short poem together!

四、多元评价,驱动任务延伸

写作的完成并不意味着教学任务的结束。首次执教时,笔者在诗歌的展示和评价环节以教师的评价为主,且缺少对主题意义的思考和串联。第二次执教时,笔者将评价前置,让学生有据可循,并且在评价部分采用生生互评、师生共评的方式。

Checklist

1.Choose one season to write at least 2 lines.

2.Your poem should at least have one rhyme(押韵).

3.Try to use one figure of speech(修辞手法).

学生作品1

Summer is like a dream,

With the views of a stream.

Go swimming as a team,

And lose myself in ice cream.

T:Let’s look at the checklist and this poem.Does this poem show us the season?

Ss:Summer.

T:Does the poem have any rhymes?

Ss: Dream and stream; team and ice cream.

T: Very good.Let’s see the last one.Does the poem have one figure of speech?

Ss:Simile.Summer is like a dream.

T: Awesome.Could we add one more figure of speech?Maybe repetition?

Ss: Just write down the first sentence twice.

T: Well done.Now you know how to use the checklist.Anyone wants to try to assess others’poems?

【教学反思】

英文诗歌要读什么?如何让学生主动学习诗歌甚至创作诗歌?这些都是执教者在教学前需要思考的问题。传统的英文诗歌教学的重点在词汇、句型和韵律的学习上,而忽略了诗歌的意象美和语言美,学生较难产生可迁移的结构化知识。

任务驱动教学法是以任务为明线,以培养学生的知识与技能为暗线的教学方法。运用任务驱动法的课堂可以形成更合理的课堂结构,让学生有更充足的时间开展自主学习,从而实现教与学的有效配合。

经过具体的教学实践后,笔者发现任务设置、任务实施、激励评价等方面存在问题。初次执教时,笔者急于求成。在教学目标模糊的情况下,设置任务的难度和梯度出现偏差,导致教学任务断层。同时,因学生主体地位的缺失,产出部分不尽如人意。因此,笔者围绕文本材料和课堂生成效果进行分析和研讨,从以下几个方面进行了改进:细化教学目标,递进教学任务;强化学生主体,多元激励评价;提炼诗歌主题,提供有效输入。最终,课堂的互动和产出环节都呈现出良好的效果。

当然,任务驱动法在实际运用中仍存在一些不足。由于诗歌的可探讨性极强,教师很难面面俱到。任务设计流程和流程设置也容易出现偏差。另外,学生的层次水平不一,如何设计出贴合各个层次学生水平的任务也是一个难题,如何实现课堂聚焦也是教师需要关注的问题。

总之,虽然还有需要继续探索、改进的地方,但运用任务驱动法的初中英语诗歌教学可以有效激发学生对诗歌学习的兴趣,发挥学生主体地位,让学生在任务递进中感受诗歌美,感悟四季美,感恩生活美。

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