别样风采、各有特色

殷华新

高考英语书面表达旨在考查学生根据已给信息提示，结合所学的英语知识来完成书面写作任务，需要学生有扎实的语言基础，较强的逻辑思维能力和英语语言表达能力。书面表达不仅要求学生在写作时写出正确的词汇和句子，还要使整篇文章逻辑通顺、语言丰富、紧扣主题。现结合2017年全国部分省、市的高考英语试题，对不同书面表达的内容加以评析，促使同学们从中获取写好书面表达的灵感。

一、层次分明、有理有据

想写好书面表达，关键首先要学会认真审题，只有明确了写作目标，厘清写作思路，才能建立文章结构，写出有广度、深度的内容。纵观2017江苏的书面表达的参考文便会有这样的体验。题目要求考生观察有关我国电影票房收入 （box-office income） 的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。而所给出的参考文结构清楚、层次分明，具有很强的逻辑性。

As is indicated in the graph， the box-office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015， but its growth， for one reason or another， slowed down in 2016.

The increase in the box-office income can be attributed to a number of factors. The quality of life has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of entertainment. Besides， filming technology has advanced and more quality films are on offer. Moreover， the Internet plays an important part. On the Internet， people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well， which is both time-saving and economical.

However， the film market may witness a slowdown in the near future. Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the Internet and cellphones， and the ticket price is on the increase. Therefore， the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers.

文章結构合理、层次分明。第一段总结归纳柱状图所含信息，提到了持续增长和增长放缓，内容概括全面。第二段提出个人观点并给出理由；第三段中提出自己的合理看法并给出自己的理由，做到了有理有据。时态和人称运用准确无误，表达纯正。范文使用了较高级的词汇和词组are on offer， is regarded as， constantly， play an important part， be attributed to， as well， time-saving， economical；还使用了定语从句which is both time-saving and economical；Besides， Moreover， However， Therefore等词的使用，把文章衔接成了整体，使文章显得有层次感。

二、分析细致、阐述到位

在实际写作中，一些学生所写内容往往局限于将所提供的语言点作一些简单叙述，不能就某一事物或话题进行深入的挖掘和阐述，不注重文本蕴藏的文化内涵。参阅下面的文章也许你会有所顿悟。

Dear Jim，

I'm happy to receive your letter and know you're coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai， both are highly recommended.

Personally， I prefer the tour along the Yangtze， the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover， the scenery along the river is amazing， with many well-known sightseeing spots. That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.

Hope you'll have a good time in China.

Yours，

Li Hua （2017北京高考试题）

本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，高级词汇highly recommended，连接词personally，moreover的合理使用和表语从句That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.的使用为文章增色不少。endprint

在写提纲类作文时，考生首先要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景和词语，按照逻辑关系来写。最后，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

三、情真意切、形神兼备

英语写作不是简单的句子翻译，字里行间透出的应是作者的真实情感，尤其像下文选择的是考生在生活中耳濡目染的内容，涉及中国的传统美德——感恩，顺应了英语高考作文与中国传统文化相結合的趋势。作为考生，应该会有这样的经历体会，从而为考生提供了展示自己语言水平和真情实感的平台。阅读北京卷书面表达第二节范文会让我们感受到学生对学校的眷恋和对老师的感恩。

Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discussion， we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school.

Material collecting took us a whole week， during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable， but the video turned out perfect. Several days later， when the video was played on the graduation ceremony， it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.

在写看图说话类作文时，考生首先要读懂图片隐含的信息。本文有四幅图，而且要求是按先后顺序，所以一定要注意顺序的问题；其次，根据图片隐含的信息把每幅图的主题找到，然后分别写出每幅图的主题句，也就是说要列好文章主体部分的大纲，最后结合自己的看法，写出相应的总结和感受。写作过程中一定要注意先后顺序，巧用连接词，合理衔接，科学安排。

纵观上述内容可以看出，语言的表达是多样性的，要想把自己的书面表达写得有深度，有独特性，必然需要有其独特的表达形式才能唤起读者兴趣。不去研究实践，要想提高书面表达水平就是一句空话。因此，分析研究不同省市高考试题，借鉴参考范文中好的做法，加上自身不断的实践、感悟和改进，就一定能在写作上百尺竿头，更进一步。endprint