建议文体的写作

汪毛丫

提出建议和意见的开头常用句型

文章开头时，要提出自己的想法和意见，亮出自己的观点。常用句型有：

It must be realized that ...

我们必须意识到……

Only in this way can we ...

只有这样，我们才能……

It is high time that we put an end to the （trend）.

该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.

It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of ...

该是采纳……的建议，并对……的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。

There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of ...

毫无疑问，对……问题应予以足够的重视.

Obviously， ... If we want to do something ...， it is essential that ...

显然，如果我们想做某事，很重要的是……

提出建议和意见的结尾常用句型

文章结尾时，要总结观点或者问题，优势劣势以及给出解决办法。常用句型有：

From what has been discussed above， we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that ...

综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……

In a word， the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ... Only in this way can ... in the future.

总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。

For my part， I think it reasonable to ... Only in this way can you ...

至于我（对我来说，就我而言），我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能……

As far as I am concerned， I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ...

至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……

Personally， I believe that ... Consequently， Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ...

就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……

In my opinion， I think it necessary to ... The reasons are as follows. First ... second ... Last but not least，...

对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……； 第二，……；最后……但同样重要的是……

But ... and ... have heir own advantages. For example， ... while ... Comparing this with that， however， I prefer to ...

但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，……，而……。然而把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢）……

With the development of society， ... So its urgent and necessary to ... If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society， it will be better and better.

随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。

It is difficult to say whether ... is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of .... however， from a personal point of view find ...

在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。

If we can not take useful means， we may not control this trend， and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly， so what we should do is ...

如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……

建议文体中常用的连接词和句型

1. like

We have to compete with our rivals like all our competitors.

我们必须跟对手竞争，就像所有竞争对手一样。

2. likewise

Likewise， poor nutrition can lead to dental problems.

同样地，营养不良也会引起口腔问题。

3. similarly

Similarly， not everyone is the enthusiastic type that falls in love with their work.

同样地，对待自己的工作，并不是每个人都属于充满激情的那种类型。

4. equally

All systems of time are equally possible and you can choose any system you wish.

所有时间系统都有同样的可能性，进而你可以任选其一。

5. in the same way

With humans， smiles work in the same way.

对人类而言，笑容也有着同样的功效。

6. in the same manner

As you would that others should think about you， think you about them in the same manner.

就像其他人应当怎样看待你一样，你需要用同样的方式去看待他们。

例题 随着电脑的普及，越来越多的人开始使用电脑。电脑给我们带来了方便，但是如果使用不当，它就会影响我们的身体健康。请根据下面要点，用英语写一篇短文Making Complaints，指出电脑对让人体健康的危害，并提出改善的有关建议。

1. 长时间使用电脑伤害眼睛，影响视力；

2. 对电脑的过度依赖造成记忆力减退；

3. 在电脑前久坐容易引发肥胖，、腰背不适等症状。

注意：1. 字数120左右；

2. 可根据内容适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

习作一

Mcking complaints

Computers employed more universally， increasing people begin to use them. There is no doubt that they make our life convenient. Yet， they will affect our health if used inappropriately.

As is well known to us that long-term use of computers is able to hurt our eyes， which influences eyesight. In addition， too much dependence on them will cause our memory to decrease. And we will find our back uncomfortable and put on weight when sitting too long.

In view of what computers bring to us， it is high time that we should take effective measures. Have a rest at intervals when using them. Play outdoor games rather than play computer games. All in all， getting less touch to them as much as possible.

点评 总体来说，这篇习作写得不错。

1. 亮点句式

第一句用用到了独立主格结构Computers employed more universally。

第二句用到了同位语从句，that they make our life convenient作doubt的同位语，对doubt起补充说明的作用。

最后一段的第一句话，In view of后用到了一个由what引导的宾语从句，主干句中用到了it is high time that结构，此结构中从句中的谓语部分用过去时或者是should加动词原形，注意should不能省略。

2. 高级词汇

universally， inappropriately， convenient， uncomfortable， effective， in addition， at intervals， rather than。

3. 不足之处

文章的第二段第一句话，As is well known to us that long-term use ... 中出现了语法错误，应该改为 As is known to us， long-term use ... 或Its well known that long-term use ...

最后一句话写成一个主谓结构的句子会更好些，可改为We should use computers properly in case they do harm to our health.

习作二

Mcking complaints

With computers becoming more universal， more and more people start to use computers. You may not know that if not being used appropriately， computers may do damage to our health.

For example， when keeping staring at screens， our eyes will suffer a lot and what leaves to us will only be poor eyesight.

In addition， its easy for us to feel backache and grow obese after sitting too long before computers.

Therefore， we should take measures to protect our health. And my suggestion is that people should control the time they using computers and take exercise occassionaly.

点评 此习作段落层次清晰，句子结构灵活多样.

1. 亮点句式

with的复合结构：With computers becoming more universal ...。

连词跟分词作状语：if not being used appropriately ...。

主语从句：what leaves to us ...。

表语从句：my suggestion is that people should control the time they using computers and take ex-rcise occassionaly等。

2. 高级词汇

universal ， therefore， appropriately， in addition等。

3. 不足之处

第一段中的being是多余的。

第二段中的状语部分用到了连词跟分词，在这一句话里显然不合语法规则，后面主句中的主语跟分词之间没有逻辑上的主谓关系，所以不能采用这种结构，应改为When we keep staring at screens。

倒数第二段的句子也不地道。

拼写错误：短文中的最后一个单词应该是occasionally。

【范文】

As computers are being used more and more widely in our life， they have brought us a lot of convenience. However， attention should be paid to its bad effects on peoples health.

To begin with， the bright screen and the frequently-rolling words on it do much harm to our eyes， and using the computer frequently gradually weakens our eyesight. Besides， depending too much on computers may lead to a worse memory. Most importantly， using computers， people tend to sit before them for a long time. That is the reason why many people often feel uncomfortable in the back. And some may even get too fat.

To improve the situation， I think there should be a short rest every other hour to relax our eyes and brain. Whats more， avoid using the computer unless necessary. After all， we can keep out of the trouble it brings us if we use it properly.