About My Life

徐琛琪

Im a middle school student. Now Im suffering from stress in our school. I often dream that we can have a different life in the middle school.

I hope the world will be changed because I dont want to study for so long hours every day. Learning should go side by side with relaxation. We should keep a balance of study and rest. The reason is that study without relaxation is awful ， instead， relaxation without study is also harmful.

I hope we will have a lot of exercise which we can enjoy. Doing exercise is good for our health， so we cant just study without exercise.

I wish we neednt wear school uniforms. If we wear different color and style clothes to school， we can show ourselves and own a good heart. I have many beautiful clothes in my closet. But I have no chance to wear them. They can only be stored in it. Do you have the same feelings as mine？

简评：

该生在此文中运用了宾语从句、表语从句、条件状语从句、定语从句等，并把简单句和复合句结合起来，通过自己的梦想来想象自己的学校生活，表达了一名中学生对生活的愿望。本文写作角度略有不同，是一篇能够给人们带来思考的英语作文。

指导教师：杨 萍