My day

孙玉欣

Today is Monday. I have six classes.

In the morning, I usually ride my bike to school. It takes about fifteen minutes. Then I have an English class. Its my favorite subject. We must do morning exercise after two classes.

At twelve oclock, I eat a healthy lunch in the dining hall.

In the afternoon, I often have two classes. And I like PE lesson best.

After school, I go home with my best friends. Then I do my homework, I think doing homework is very interesting. When I finish my homework, I must clean my room...And I usually eat dinner at six oclock. At nine thirty in the evening, I must brush my teeth and go to bed.

This is my day. Its a busy day, but I feel happy.

简评：习作记叙了自己一天的学校生活，运用了七年级下前3个单元的知识要点，包含了交通方式、花费时间、具体时间表达法、频率副词等，语言精练，情感真挚。结尾处表达了学校生活繁忙又快乐的心情。

（指导教师：那莎）