运用多种句式,巧写建议类书面表达

陶 乾

[摘要]近年来建议类书面表达已成为高考写作的重要内容。本文谈了如何运用多种表达,写好建议要求类书面表达。

[关键词]建议类书面表达 写作方法

近年来,随着对外交流的日益扩大,建议类书面表达已成为高考写作的重要内容。因为,此类话题不仅接近对外交流的实际情景,而且能够考察出学生运用课本知识写英语书面表达的能力,因此,受到了考试专家的青睐。下面就以近两年来高考命题的实例,谈一下如何运用多种表达,写好建议要求类书面表达。

例一:2009年陕西卷

假定你是李华。在一个英文网论坛上,你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助,请根据帖子的内容,写作要点和要求回帖。

Grown-up Post at 18—5—2009 20:08 1﹟

Hi,eeryone,

Im 17 years old and Im going to uniersity this autumn.But my mother contines to treat me as a seenyear-old.What should I do?

Top写作要点:

1.告诉Grown-up要理解母亲。

2.给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议。

3.书写须清晰、工整。

Hi, Grown-up,

As a student of your age,I understand your situation.例二:2008全国卷(Ⅱ)

假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信。要点:1.参加中文学习班。

2.看中文书刊、电视。

3.学唱中文歌曲。

4.叫中国朋友。注意:1.词数100左右。

2.可适当增加细节。

3.开头语已为你写好。

June 8.2008

Dear Peter,

Im glad to receie your letter asking for my adice on how to learn Chinese well.

以上两篇书面表达都是以建议为主体的书面表达,在实际写作中,学生往往只会使用you should、I adise sb to do sth,I suggest doing sth或I adise+that-clause,I suggest+that-clause等简单的构造,几乎是千篇一律,很难表达出变化,表达缺乏新意,结果出现了虽对犹败的现象(即:虽然写得没错,但得不了高分)。那么,写这类文章如何写出新意,写出变化,得高分呢?只要你看了教材中关于表达建议的知识规纳,相信你一定能有所启示。

一、疑问表达法

1.What do you think of /about…?

2.Hae you considered / thought of doing…?

3.Why dont you…?

4.How about…?

5.Why not do…?

6.Wouldt it be better if you…?

二、被动表达法

1.Youre suggested (not) doing…

2.Youre adised (not) to do…

3.Youre supposed (not) to do…

4.Youre expected (not) to do…

三、从句表达法

1.My suggestion / adice is + that—clause(从句用虚拟语气)

2.I adise /suggest + that—clause(从句用虚拟语气)

3.That—claccse(从句用虚拟) + is my adice /suggestion.

4.It is suggested / adised + that—clause(从句用虚拟语气)

5.What I want to suggest/ adise is + that—clause…

四、it作形式主语表达法

1.It + should /will be + wise / better / adisable / important / helpful等adj+to do…

2.It is/should be a good idea to do…

以上,我们对高中教材中表达建议的常用句型进行了简单的归纳,只要大家牢牢记住上面的句型,在实际写作中多运用,注意变化,就一定能够写出表达建议的好文章。

例如:你建议对方要和妈妈进行深入交流时,不妨使用下面的句型来表达:

1.Hae you considered / thought of haing heart-to-heart talks with your mother?

2.Youre expected / adised /supposed to hae heart-to-heart talks with your mother.3.How about haing a heart-to-heart talk with your mother?

4.What I want to suggest/ adise is that you (should) hae some heart-to-heart talks with your mother.5.In my opinion it is/should be a good idea to hae some heart-to-heart talks with your mother.

你建议对方交中国朋友时,我们可以使用下面的句型来表达:

1.What do you think of /about making some more Chinese friends?

2.You're suggested making some more Chinese friends.

3.My suggestion / adice is that you should make some more Chinese friends.

4.It should /will be wise / better / adisable / important / helpful to make some more Chinese friends.