My City

佳作发现地：江苏省徐州市桃园路小学

I live in Xuzhou. There are many interesting places， such as Yunlong Lake（云龙湖）， Yunlong Mountain（云龙山）， and Guishan Han Tomb（龟山汉墓）. My favourite one is Yunlong Lake. It is like a big silver mirror. I can go boating on it. The people are also very kind and warm-hearted. Welcome to Xuzhou！

六（1）班 谢佳辰

Xuzhou is a beautiful city. You can visit Xuzhou Museum， Baolian Temple（宝莲寺）， Pengzu Garden（彭祖园）， and so on. I like Pengzu Garden best， because there are many beautiful flowers， slides， and pirate boats（海盗船）. My city is full of joy.

六（2）班 刘倬熙

指导老师点评：

两篇作文结构清晰、层次清楚。小作者们开头点明自己生活的城市，接着介绍城市的美景，最后描述自己最喜欢的地方，由面到点，让这座城市显得十分亲切、可爱。 （管晓春）

佳作发现地：江苏省徐州经济技术开发区实验学校

I live in Xuzhou， a wonderful place. In Xuzhou， there are many fun places， such as Fantawild Wonderland（方特乐园）， Yunlong Lake， and Yunlong Mountain. Yunlong Lake is a national 5A-level tourist attraction（国家5A级旅游景区）. However， I love Yunlong Mountain best. I enjoy climbing with my family at weekends. It’s very interesting. I love my city very much.

五（17）班 范依辰

Xuzhou is my hometown， an old city with a long history and the culture of the two Han dynasties. If you like history， you can go to the Ximatai Ruins（戏马台） and Xuzhou Museum to learn about its rich history and cultural relics（文物）. There are a lot of delicious food in Xuzhou. You will love the barbecue. Welcome to Xuzhou today！

五（17）班 季暄晟

指导老师点评：

两位同学从不同的角度介绍了自己的城市——徐州。范依辰同学侧重于游览，重点介绍了云龙湖和云龙山。季暄晟同学主要聚焦历史，介绍了戏马台和徐州博物馆。在写城市时，我们可以抓住城市的主要特色进行介绍，让文章更生动、具体。 （房艳平）