金麟
Animals are our friends.
I love animals and my favourite animal is rabbit.
It is big and round.
It has two long ears and a short tail.
It can jump and run quite fast.
Rabbits like to eat carrots.
I like rabbits very much. What about you?
江蘇省太仓市实验小学三(1)班 金 麟
指导老师 金 怡
学生在描写葡萄时,不仅用了陈述句,还用了疑问句、感叹句,让文章显得更生动。描写动物时,能抓住动物的主要特征,从外貌、行为、饮食喜好等多方面介绍,体现了孩子们生活中的观察力。