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情境呈现
假定你是校英语报的记者,请你根据以下信息写一篇新闻报道,介绍为敦煌保护做出了巨大贡献的考古学家樊锦诗的事迹:
写作指导
Step 1 文体感知
新闻报道一般包括四个部分:标题(headline)、导语(lead sentence)、主体(body)、结束语(ending)。
Step 2 写作技巧
新聞报道结构多采用两种基本形式:
1. 时间顺序法:依照事实发生的先后,按时间顺序来写。
2. 新闻导语法:依照事实的重要性来排列铺陈的写法。按照这种写法写的新闻报道的第一句话叫作导语。导语开门见山,把新闻最重要的内容(who、what、when、where、why、how——新闻六要素)揭示出来。由于新闻报道侧重点的不同,有时也可能只包含其中的几个要素。现在由于大多数新闻报道都采用新闻导语法,长期如此,逐渐形成了一种独特的新闻报道结构——“倒金字塔”。按新闻事实的重要性递减的顺序安排新闻报道内容,使之形成了“倒金字塔”结构,即将最重要、最吸引人的新闻事实放在全文的开头,次要的放在其后,依次排列,最次要的置于末尾。
Step 3 语言组织
一、高频短语
be held by 由……举办
get involved in/take part in/participate in 参加
strengthen ones body 增强某人的体质
enrich ones school life 丰富某人的校园生活
benefit a lot from 从……中受益颇多
with the theme of 以……为主题
think highly of 对……评价很高
preserve the cultural heritage 保护文化遗产
raise the awareness of protecting... 提高保护……的意识
foster a sense of 养成……的意识
allow sb to do sth 允许某人做某事
enable sb to do sth 使某人能够做某事
contribute to 有助于……
have a deeper understanding of 对……有更深的理解
give sb opportunities to do 给某人机会做……
not only does it enable us to... but also it helps... 它不仅使我们能够……而且帮助我们……
二、美句背诵
1. Last Sunday witnessed/saw the extraordinary hiking held by our school, whichaimed to encourage us to take more outdoor exercise. 上周日,我们学校举行了一次特别的徒步旅行,旨在鼓励我们进行更多的户外运动。
2. In order to raise students awareness of fire safety, a fire drill was held in our schoollast Sunday. 为了提高学生的消防安全意识,上周日在我们学校举行了消防演习。
3. To promote mutual understanding and strengthen friendship, a group of high schoolstudents together with some teachers from Britain came to our school for a culturalexchange on April 1st. 为了促进相互理解和增进友谊,4月1日,英国一群高中生和一些老师来到我们学校进行文化交流。
4. In an effort to enrich our school life, our school organized an activity called“ HappyFarm, Happy Life” last Sunday. 为了丰富我们的校园生活,我们学校在上周日组织了一场名为“快乐农场,快乐生活”的活动。
5. A food festival with the theme of“ Sharing Chinese characteristic snacks” was heldin our school last week. 上周我们学校举办了以“分享中国特色小吃”为主题的美食节。
6. The activity turned out to be a great success. 这次活动取得了巨大的成功。
7. So impressive and rewarding was the activity that it would stick in my memory. 这项活动令人印象深刻,令我受益无穷,因而它将留在我的记忆中。
8. Not only did it raise the awareness of protecting the cultural heritages but it alsoenriched our school life. 它不仅提高了我们保护文化遗产的意识,而且也丰富了我们的校园生活。
9. Born in Beijing in 1938, she is a famous archaeologist. 1938年出生于北京,她是一位著名的考古学家。
10. She devotes her life to the study and protection of the Mogao Caves. 她一生致力于莫高窟的研究和保护。
11. She graduated from Peking University in 1963, majoring in archaeology. 1963 年她毕业于北京大学,主修考古学。
12. She has been regarded as the daughter of Dunhuang. 她被誉为“敦煌的女儿”。
13. The Chinese culture is both historical and contemporary, belonging to the Chinesenation and the whole world. 中华文化既是历史的,也是当代的,既属于中华民族,也属于全世界。
14. Unfortunately, with the development of our society, cultural relics are facing thedanger of disappearing, which are in urgent need of protection. 不幸的是,随着社会的发展,文化遗产正面临着消失的危险,迫切需要保护。
15. Preserving our heritage sites allows us to appreciate the past and to find inspira?tion for the future. 保护我们的遗址让我们能够欣赏过去并为未来寻找灵感。
16. Well?known for its extraordinary quality, beautiful design and brilliant color,Chinese silk has been regarded as a symbol of Chinese culture. 中国丝绸因其卓越的品质、精美的设计和绚丽的色彩而闻名于世,已被视为中国文化的象征。
17. We all share a joint responsibility to protect and preserve cultural heritage, notjust for ourselves, but for future generations. 我们都负有共同的保护文化遗产的责任,不仅是为了我们自己,也是为了子孙后代。
18. As a reminder of the power of nature and the genius of man, heritage is our legacyfrom the past, what we live with today, and what we pass on to future generations. 作为对大自然的力量和人类的聪明才智的提醒,遗产是我们过去的遗产,是我们今天赖以生存的东西,也是我们传给后代的东西。
三、佳作赏析
Fan Jinshi: A great archaeologist (headline)
Fan Jinshi, born in Beijing in 1938, is a famous archaeologist, who devotes all her lifeto the study and protection of the Mogao Caves. (lead sentence)
She graduated from Peking University in 1963, majoring in archaeology. She has been working at Dunhuang Academy for 60 years since she graduated from Peking University.Therefore, she has been regarded as the daughter of Dunhuang. She created digital Dun?huang, recording and collecting digital images of cultural relics from the Mogao Caves.(body)
She has made a great contribution to the protection of cultural relics. In her life, shegot many honors, one of which is“ one hundred people moving China since the founding ofthe People's Republic of China”. (ending)
小试牛刀
假定你是校英文报的一名记者,你得知芜湖有一个组织在采取行动保护文化遗产,请用英语写一篇有关这个组织的新闻报道。内容包括:
1. 寻找文化遗产并拍照;
2. 把照片展示给公众并筹集资金;
3. 寻找老房子并帮忙修缮。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。