王立新
【技巧点拨】
一、技法指导
介绍旅游地点通常是以说明为主、描写为辅、叙述为主线的说明文。写作时要做到要点全面,语言简洁明了,引人入胜。时态常用一般现在时。
在描写过程中,用简洁的语言说明它的地理位置、人文历史以及旅游路线等。这种文章的写法比较灵活,在描写的过程中可以抒发感情,夹叙夹议。一篇好的文章不仅能引导读者跟作者一起欣赏美丽的风景,还能启迪人的思想,陶冶人的情操,给人以美的享受。
二、常用句式
1. 介绍地理位置:be located in...; be situated in...; lie in...; stand at the foot of / on the top of...
2. 介绍气候:the weather / climate there is...; it is warm all year around; rain a lot
3. 介绍人口:... has a population of...; a city / country with a population of...
4. 介绍面积:... has / covers an area of... square kilometers; (a city) with an area of... square kilometers
5. 介绍历史:... has a long history of... years; has witnessed too much coming and going in history
6. 介绍名胜古迹:places of interest / historical spots
7. 介绍特色:(The place) is famous for...; The special character of the place is...
8. 介绍交通:It is very convenient for...; The best way to experience... is...; It takes... to take a bus from... to...; ... is only 20 minutes' drive from downtown; ... is within easy reach
三、实战演练
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom打算去台湾旅行,特来信向你了解台湾岛的有关情况。请根据下列提示写一封回信,简单介绍一下台湾岛的情况,并祝他旅途愉快。
1. 台湾是我国最大的岛屿,位于福建省的东南部,北临东海,东临太平洋,西南面被南海环抱;
2. 台湾岛面积约三万六千平方公里,人口两千多万;
3. 自然资源丰富,香蕉、稻米、茶叶等农产品驰名中外;
4. 风景优美,气候宜人,世界各地的游客纷至沓来。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 信的格式及开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,符合逻辑。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to know that you're going to Taiwan Island.
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Yours,
Li Hua
审题要点:
1. 人称:第一人称和第三人称
2. 时态:一般现在时
联想词汇:
a brief introduction to ……的简介
lie (to the) west of... 位于……之西
to the west of... 在……的西边
have an area of... square kilometers 占地……平方公里
have a population of... 有……人口
be rich in... 在……方面丰富
natural resources 自然资源
at home and abroad 国内外
so... that... 如此……以至于……
参考范文:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to know that you're going to Taiwan Island. As your Chinese friend, I'd like to give you a brief introduction to it.
Taiwan Island, the largest island in our country, lies west of the Pacific Ocean, with the East Sea on the north and the South Sea surrounding its southwest. To the west of the island is Fujian, another province of China.
Taiwan has an area of about 36,000 square kilometers and a population of over 20,000,000. It's rich in natural resources. Bananas, rice, tea and so on are famous both at home and abroad. The scenery is so beautiful and the climate is so pleasant that travelers all over the world go in a continuous stream for a visit. I'm sure you'll have a lot fun there. Wish to see you as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【寫作训练】
假定你是李华,英语课上老师要求根据下表内容写一篇短文,简要介绍加拿大的情况。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,符合逻辑。
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