话题写作：计划与愿望

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◎文体概述

计划与愿望涉及的内容非常广泛。 试卷命题者可能围绕以下主题来命题：

1.策划一次班会；

2.为父母或老师的生日做准备；

3.为假期旅游制订计划；

4.申请组建足球队、篮球队、舞蹈队或乐队及其理由；

5.向老师、校长或家长寻求活动建议；

6.写一份广播通知，安排假期的学习任务；

7.就“你理想的大学、专业、职业”发表看法；

8.某教授来你校做专题报告，请你以学生会主席的身份写一份书面通知，告知报告的时间、地点、内容和具体要求等。

◎写作模板

I dream of being a(n) ________.I love the job and believe ________.Firstly, ________.Secondly, I have more chances and time to .Thirdly, ________.Lastly, ________.Above all, ________would be more and more important, together with.That's why I love to be a(n) ________.→说明原因→具体计划→总结模板范文I dream of being a teacher.I love the job and believe it is the best one in the world.Firstly, being a teacher, I have more chances to enrich myself in dealing with my students'questions.Secondly, in students' eyes, teachers are trusty and respectable and this is what I value a great deal.Lastly, different students have different characters and ideas, from which I can benefit a lot.Above all, education and teachers would be more and more important.That's why I love to be a teacher.

◎经典句型

1.I plan/intend/mean to do sth.

我计划/打算做某事。

2.I wish (sb) to do sth.

我希望（某人）做某事。

3.I would appreciate it if…

假如……的话，我将不胜感激。

4.He planned to go abroad for further studies.

他计划出国深造。

5.So I am determined to meet the challenge.

因此，我准备迎接挑战。

6.There will be a football game in our school this week.

本周，我们学校将有一场足球比赛。

7.As a child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked.

当我是一个孩子的时候，我总希望自己快快长大，以便能拥有我想要的任何东西，做我想做的任何事情。

8.I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful.To reach the goal, I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university.

我希望在将来为父母和社会做更多事情，使我的生活更有意义。 为了实现这个目标，我必须尽最大努力通过高考，进入一个好大学。

9.What's more, as I am away from my parents, it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own, being able to do some washing and cleaning by myself.

另外，因为我远离父母，对我来说有必要学着独立，能自己洗衣服、打扫卫生。

10.I've received your e-mail, asking me about my plan for the summer vacation.Now let me tell you something exciting.

邮件已收到，你在邮件中问我这个暑假的计划，现在我就告诉你一些令人振奋的事情。

11.It will be a good chance to help the visitors to get to know about the culture of Beijing.

这将会是一次帮助游客了解北京文化的好机会。

12.I won't miss seeing the great inventions and achievements on display and I can experience different cultures as well as exchange ideas with people around the world.

我不会错过展出的伟大发明及成就。我还能感受不同的文化，也可以同世界各地的人们交流思想。

13.If possible, I'd like to stay at the home where there are students of my age so that I can communicate with them easily.

如果可能的话，我想居住在有同龄学生的家庭，这样我和他们交流起来比较方便。

14.Think twice before you do.

三思而后行。

15.Great hopes make great men.

伟大的抱负造就伟大的人。

16.Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.

抱最好的愿望，做最坏的打算。

◎经典命题

假定你是李华，6月27日和28日是你期末考试后的第一个周末，请你制订一个周末活动计划， 并用英语给你的英国网友Alan 写一封电子邮件，说明你的活动安排，主要活动内容包括：

1.活动安排；

2.你对活动的期待。

注意：

1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总

词数。

Dear Alan,

Yours,

Li Hua

【试题解读】

1.审题立意

本篇书面表达是提纲式应用文写作，要求学生根据所给信息，给英国网友Alan 写一封电子邮件，说明期末考试后的第一个周末的活动安排。 写作时，应尝试使用一些高级词汇或复杂句式，并要力求衔接紧密流畅，以提升文章的档次。

2.注意事项

①第一人称，时态以一般将来时为主。

②对所给要点适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

③保持行文连贯，使文章富有条理性和逻辑性。

【佳作赏析1】

Dear Alan,

I'm going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend.Because it's the first weekend after my final exam, I plan to make it meaningful.①

On June 27, I will spend the whole morning reading a book at home, which attracts me most.②In the afternoon I will go out with my family and friends.We're going fishing by a river and then going boating, which is my favourite sport.On June 28, we will go to the park nearby to collect litter.③I think it's our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy.④

It's going to be a fantastic weekend! I'm looking forward to it.

Yours,

Li Hua

亮点分析：

本篇习作按时间顺序介绍了周末的活动安排，内容全面，逻辑清晰，用词准确，语言精练。写出了规范的复合句，正确使用了不定式、动名词等非谓语，提高了文章档次。

①because引导原因状语从句。

②固定搭配spend...doing sth使文章出彩和地道。

③不定式作目的状语,表明“到附近的公园去捡垃圾”的活动安排目的。

④用it作形式主语，代替不定式短语。

【佳作赏析2】

Dear Alan,

I'm going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend.I have worked out a plan.Below are the details.①

Reading always brings me pleasure.②I'll stay at home reading a storybook that interests me most on the morning of June 27.③After lunch, I plan to go out with my family and friends.We'll see the film named The Fate of the Furious and then have supper together.On June 28 we will go to the park nearby.Instead of relaxing ourselves, we'll collect litter there,which is a very meaningful activity.④

I can't wait for the weekend to come! ⑤

Yours,

Li Hua

亮点分析：

本文段落主题明确，层次分明，语言表达熟练而准确。 使用instead of、 relax、 can't wait等高级词汇和短语，增添了文章光彩。 多次使用非谓语动词，如动名词作主语、现在分词作状语等， 这充分展示了作者深厚的语法功底。倒装句恰当的应用提高了文章的可读性。

①倒装句的运用为文章增色， 同时引出下文。

②动名词作主语的使用恰到好处，提高了文章的档次，为“在家读书”做了铺垫。

③现在分词作状语、that引导的定语从句等展现了作者对英语复杂句式的熟练掌握。

④短语介词instead of恰当地表达出“到公园”不是为了放松而是“捡垃圾”。

⑤表达出作者对本次活动的期盼，迫不及待的心情溢于言表。

◎小试牛刀

为了实现中华民族的伟大复兴，作为中学生，我们应该把个人梦想融入伟大的“中国梦”中， 做一名 “中国梦” 的践行者。 请以“My dream”为题，写一篇英语短文，内容包括：

1.你的梦想是什么；

2.你将如何努力来实现它。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

My dream