慰问信写作攻略

山东东明县东方学校 李全忠

●题型解说

慰问信是向不幸者或失败者表示安慰的信件。 这类信件要写得简单、诚挚，语言要得当，多用积极、乐观的话语减轻对方的烦恼和痛苦，并鼓励对方在日后的生活、工作和学习中要信心满满。 写信的步骤一般为：

1. 自我介绍；

2. 表示慰问；

3. 力所能及的帮助；

4. 表示鼓励。

●句型集锦

1. I'm sorry that you failed..., which brings you great suffering.

很遗憾得知你在……失败了，并给你带来了巨大的痛苦。

2. I just can not tell you how sorry I was to know that...

得知你……，你不知道我有多难过。

3. I felt so sorry indeed when I was informed of...

当我得知……，我真的很难过。

4. I was shocked to hear the news that...

听到……的消息我很震惊。

5. I wish there is something I could do to ease your pain.

我希望能做些什么来减轻你的痛苦。

6. I know there are no words that can comfort you now.

我知道现在无法用语言来安慰你。

7. Cheer up and fight against...

振作起来，和……做斗争吧！

8. I hope you'll soon totally recover from...

我希望你很快就能从……中彻底痊愈。

9. Please don't hesitate to tell me if there is anything I can do.

如果需要我做什么，请直接告诉我。

10. Remember we won't be far away when you need any help.

记住，在你需要帮助的时候，我们就在你身边。

11. I know there are no words that can be a comfort to you now, but you should realize that you are young with a promising future.

我知道现在无法用语言安慰你，但是你应该意识到，你还很年轻，美好的未来在等着你。

12. I'm sure you will be restored to health soon.

我相信你很快就会康复。

●模板借鉴

I'm awfully sorry to hear thatFaced with such a(n)you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are moved to tears. Thinking about your present situation, we cannot wait a minute to help you.（所能提供的帮助一）. Besides,（所能提供的帮助二）.

Therefore, never give up whatever happens.Remember we won't be far away when you need any help!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

●范文初成

Dear friends,

I'm awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake unexpectedly hit your hometown. Faced with such a rarely-seen natural disaster, you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Thinking about your present situation, we cannot wait a minute to help you.I, as the chairman of Students' Union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincere care for you. Besides, we make a donation of 120 thousand yuan to you, expecting that it will help you out as soon as possible. A better hometown is sure to be rebuilt soon.

Therefore, never give up whatever happens.Remember we won't be far away when you need any help!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

●小试牛刀

假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Anne得知自己身患肺癌 （lung cancer） 后处于极度的痛苦中。美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，Anne每收到一封慰问信，就给她增加10美元的治疗款。 请用英文给Anne写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：

1. 自我介绍；

2. 得知的情况；

3. 对她表示鼓励和祝愿；

4. 打算为她做什么。

注意：

1. 开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；

2. 词数100左右。

Dear Anne,

Yours,

Li Hua