[任务呈现]
随着电脑在教学中的广泛应用,有人认为教师将会被电脑取代。你同意这一观点吗?请你写一篇英语短文发表你的看法并给出理由,然后给校英文报投稿。
注意:1.词数100左右(开头已给出,但不计入总数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
With the wide use of computers in teaching,
[写作指导]
一、审题与定调
本写作要求针对某一观点发表自己的看法,属于议论文。表达自己的看法时,要观点鲜明,不能模棱两可。展开论述要注意理由客观、充分,条理清楚。时态以一般现在时为主。
二、谋篇与布局
本写作可分为三部分:
第一部分:提出议题(教师将会被电脑取代这一观点);
第二部分:表达自己的看法(同意/不同意这一观点)并阐述理由;
第三部分:总结自己的看法。
【范文对比】
普通范文
With the wide use of computers in teaching, ①some people think that teachers will be replaced by computers.
②I dont agree with this idea. To start with, when students realise that they are being taught by a human being instead of a machine, they learn how to behave politely and respect others, ③which helps them to develop their social skills. Besides, ④teachers get to know every student and can therefore help them solve their problems by explaining them in different ways and giving suitable exercises. ⑤But a computer cant do this.
⑥In conclusion, the role of teachers will continue to be very important in the future.
高级范文
With the wide use of computers in teaching, ①some people hold the opinion that teachers will be replaced by computers.
②I strongly disapprove of this idea. To start with, when students realise that they are being taught by a human being instead of a machine, they learn how to behave politely and respect others, ③which plays an important role in developing their social skills. Besides, ④aware of every students strengths and weaknesses, teachers can guide them by giving detailed explanations and suitable exercises. ⑤This is what a computer cant do.
⑥In a nutshell, the role of teachers will continue to be very important in the future.
[类文跟进]
假定你是李华。最近China Daily就“如何看待中国传统文化”面向社会征稿。请你用英语给编辑写一封信,谈谈你自己的想法。
内容包括:
1.表明自己的立场(传统文化应该得到保护和传承);
2.给出你的理由;
3.呼吁社会共同参与。
【规范写作】
Dear editor,
Yours,
Li Hua