学生风采展示板

学生风采展示板

My Life in Ten Years

Have you thought about your life in ten years? What will it be like?

I think I will be an artist in ten years, because I love painting very much. I will be famous and rich. I will sell my paintings and make good use of the money to build a big house for poor families and the children without parents. I will give the money to people who need help. I will try my best to help people all over the world.

I think my life will be happy if my dream to be an artist comes true. And helping others will make me happy, too.

To make my dream come true, I must try and practice painting as hard as I can!

江苏省连云港市罗阳中学 八年（2）班 董淑晴

陈传光老师点评：

每个人都对未来满是憧憬，那么你所期望的未来生活是什么样子的呢？董淑晴同学在这里分享了自己心目中十年后的生活。小作者希望十年后自己能成为一名艺术家，并尽自己最大的努力帮助那些有困难的人，这种精神值得称赞和学习。在文章结尾，小作者还表达出为实现梦想要努力学习、勤奋画画的决心，升华了文章的主题。

My Childhood

My childhood has gone and will never come back. Yet I still cannot forget those happy days of my childhood.

I was brought up by my grandmother. She loved me very much. Every night, I sat by her after supper and listened to her fascinating stories. How I liked those tales! They always brought me to a different world. When I fell sick and had to be in bed, my grandmother took good care of me and made all kinds of delicious food for me. We also kept a little cat. He loved to run in the yard and play with a ball. I was glad that I had a friend to play with every day.

The memory of my childhood is like a sweet dream.

江苏省连云港市罗阳中学 八年（2）班 吴世龙

陈传光老师点评：

本文是一篇回忆童年生活的记叙文。在文章开头，小作者感叹童年的快乐时光一去不复返，接着描述了自己在童年时期和祖母生活的几个片段，让人感受到祖母对小作者那深深的爱。语言虽然朴实，却表现出了童年生活的简单与快乐。最后，作者再次感叹童年就像是一场美梦，很好地引起了读者的共鸣。整篇文章文字流畅、用词得当，是一篇不错的学生习作。

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