Making Friends On Line

赵雨萱

Should students make friends on line？ Some people say yes. Internet helps people make many friends. Chatting on line， students can express more freely， and even get help for their foreign language studies.

Others， however， someone thinks students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time. Its not good for study. Besides. Even some students get cheated on line.

It is my opinion that students should place their study， health and safety before other things. As for friendship， we can find it in our classmates and other people around us.

简评：这是一个大家喜欢的话题，也是同学们争议的焦点。小作者能够突破常规，没有开篇就谈自己的观点。而是在开篇的疑问句后，分析了正反双方的观点，作者用some和others就机智地表达出来了，然后再说出自己的观点。表述层次清晰、逻辑合理。诸如besides， in my opinion等词的亮点呈现，使文章浑然天成。

（指导教师： 孙全生）